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When Eden, a child confined within a corrupt hospital for his entire life, finally takes his last breath, Fate takes pity on him and transports him into a world somewhat resembling his own. But, naturally, this world includes devils, dragons, and gods living alongside humanity. Fate, being a "benevolent goddess", provides her new champion with tools to defend himself, such as a magical sword with a sinister and violent history, and a magical house that conceals wondrous secrets spanning the multiverse.
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Please don't aim for lolis. According to synopsis, the world MC in has many beautiful & sexy characters
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Honestly, the story had a lot of potential, but I feel like it's pretty random, like the author doesn't know what he's doing right. The characters don't have any depth either, overall it's not one of the worst stories I've read, but it comes close. So read for your own brain at risk.
Very great novel, I like where the plot is heading, it's very intriguing keep up the good work......!![img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Second time trying to read this, and I couldn't keep reading. There's something wrong with the paragraph structure that makes the story feel disconnected, additionally, there are way too many characters introduced all at once, with no background whatsoever, right at the beginning. It feels as if it is lacking at least an introduction/childhood arc so that we understand the other characters and get interested in learning about them. Beyond the grammatical issues, I simply couldn't bring myself to care about any of the characters (MC included). If you have an outline, I'd suggest finishing the story according to the outline, and then rewriting it with all of the knowledge you learned while writing.
This isn't my choice of genre, but the story has a unique attribute that draws everyone in. Furthermore, I must applaud the Author's writing skills - it is hard to find books with reasonable grammar these days.
Reading is fun 'coz writing is good and neat^^ Keep the updates coming, dear author🙌🙌
Nice world setting and interesting story. Just invest more in developing the MC like his motivation and background story before being reincarnated. It might help to get the readers to sympathize with the MC...
thank you for your efforts writing to start, now for the nitty gritty i find my self not caring for any of the oc's besides the mc they are not memorable nore does the interactions at his school or club activities add anything meaningful. yay get a gyru kiss her fall for her in like hours..... look at my secret club room with beer and smokes ...for edge lord cool points... i just dont see much point to it. i end up skimming the chapters like i would skip filler episodes of naruto.
Intriguing storyline, nice plot and characters. All in all, this is a good novel, good work.
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Okay!!! This was sure an interesting read...As If I was watching an anime adventure...Isekai... The problem is I feel bored when I watch Isekai anime. Only a few were good...all they have to offer is a good-looking hero with women with voluptuous breasts. The name says 'adventure' and sure it really is!! It offers a lot of adventures and fun time reading. if you are a fan of this genre then this novel will definitely attract you. The author needs to work on the writing. Instead of longer paragraphs, smaller ones would be easier to read on mobile handheld devices. The author worked really hard on world-building the language was very easy to follow and the imagery was strong enough to actually see what was happening on stage!!! If you are a fan of this kind of genre, this book will definitely entertain you.
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a cultured novel. although quite cliche it was still seemed to have its own unique read
you could work more on the blurb, which will give you an uperhand on your story buildup. Try to focus on your creative side of the story it will be of your help.
This novel is truly outstanding! I'm captivated by the direction the plot is taking; it's incredibly intriguing. Please, continue to excel in your craft! [img=recommend]
love the adventure of this. I am only on chapter 4 and it's getting into the adventure part. Great detail just need to to work on grammar and vocab! more please!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I find that a lot of the terms in this book are unique, and makes the reader learn those words... HOWEVER!!!! I also think that this book explains those terms well and is written with care. I feel like the characters all have a large world they can play in and do many things! In all, its a great book so far!!
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