/ Anime & Comics / A Morningstar in the Multiverse
摘要
Read on as we follow the son of Lucifer morningstar and Lilith of Eden explore the multiverse and learn more about himself along the way. the first few chapters will be info dump so you guys the audience know what I'm talking about and don't complain about me giving the Main character powers out of nowhere, as he will be unlocking more and more of his power set along the way *Warning, will be R-18 chapters* if you don't feel comfortable with that kind of content feel free to skip them oh and with the harem list it is all of the possible harem members. actual harem members will be confirmed along the way! READ THE AUXILIARY CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!! PLS!!! they are there for a reason!!!!!
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It looks like ou just made a bunch f outlines of chapters you might want to make then shippe it out.
The POV changes a lot, sometimes even after one character says one thing which is disorienting. Uses little to none capitalizations on names or even in the beginning of new sentences. Concept is good but not for me.
as is tradition I am uploading the classic shameless author five star review so go ahead and boo me as I do not care. yololololololololololololol
Es la típica novela de op viajando por el multiverso nada nuevo nada original Si te gusta este género tonse miraron pero no esperé algo de calidad
havent read it yet cause blud has more auxiliary chapters than actual chapters💀
Good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
BIt too much on aux chapters and it was mad confusing. Gotta sort those correctly. But still haven’t read the chapter yet.