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Good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
Es la típica novela de op viajando por el multiverso nada nuevo nada original Si te gusta este género tonse miraron pero no esperé algo de calidad
It looks like ou just made a bunch f outlines of chapters you might want to make then shippe it out.
BIt too much on aux chapters and it was mad confusing. Gotta sort those correctly. But still haven’t read the chapter yet.
The POV changes a lot, sometimes even after one character says one thing which is disorienting. Uses little to none capitalizations on names or even in the beginning of new sentences. Concept is good but not for me.
as is tradition I am uploading the classic shameless author five star review so go ahead and boo me as I do not care. yololololololololololololol
Good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
good story premise and it has a ton of promise, but it is too hurried with so much left out. the chapters are short, so I am assuming that this is pretty much an outline of what the eventual end product will be.
Es la típica novela de op viajando por el multiverso nada nuevo nada original Si te gusta este género tonse miraron pero no esperé algo de calidad
It looks like ou just made a bunch f outlines of chapters you might want to make then shippe it out.
BIt too much on aux chapters and it was mad confusing. Gotta sort those correctly. But still haven’t read the chapter yet.
The POV changes a lot, sometimes even after one character says one thing which is disorienting. Uses little to none capitalizations on names or even in the beginning of new sentences. Concept is good but not for me.
as is tradition I am uploading the classic shameless author five star review so go ahead and boo me as I do not care. yololololololololololololol
havent read it yet cause blud has more auxiliary chapters than actual chapters💀