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doesn't catch any interest. read 21 chapter and finally got bored of reading about his hard work and other similar stuff
This unfortunately falls into the ever so common webnovel hole of “great ideas, terrible writing.’ The author is highly dedicated, and I respect him for that, but the novel is borderline unreadable. Very clearly heavily written by ai, large numbers of chapters are repetitions of previous chapters. Every 4th chapter is a reflection on the chapters prior, and the author contradicts himself repeatedly to the point he switched it to au to make his story make more sense. Regardless, I enjoyed the 100 odd chapters I read, but I could not bear it any longer.
Otra basura por asi decirlo, como se supone que un recien nacido pueda usar chakra??????? Es algo estupido parece que el autor no a visto naruto por mucho tiempo ya que a olvidado cosas importantes del chakra !! En fin es basura y no tiraré horas fe mi vida leyendo esta mierda
An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋
Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha
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Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.
author, please keep this rate of updates, please don't drop it suddenly. It has a lot of potential
Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.
so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story
Superb Amazing fanfic of Naruto Superb Best update speed Good superb story Superb Weak to Strong MC GENIUS MC SYSTEM SUPERB INTELLIGENT MC LOVELY SHIP(SPOILER) ALL ROUNDED GENIUS CIVILIAN SUPERB HARDWORKING MC WITH NO STUPID DECISION, ALL WISE DECISION SUPERB WORLD BACKGROUND SUPERB fanfic
Such a good fanfic. I’v grown tired of the fast paced overpowered mc fanfics. The middle of volume one dragged slightly but reminds me of the wind calamity. Hopefully the author will continue this story. Don’t know why it doesn’t have better reviews . I’l continue to throw my daily power stones at it.
bad writing, overly redundant. I've read "this is just the beginning" at the end of so many chapters. XD
The way you use a system to help, and not give everyting to the MC is incredible
Gostei muito difícil achar uma história que não seja só sobre sexo e harem.........................................................................................................
The only reason I didn’t give it a full five stars is that a few parts in the middle felt a bit stretched out. But honestly, that’s just a tiny hiccup in an otherwise awesome story!
It's a fairly good Naruto fanfiction. The update rate is very quick and with a bundle of chapters as at now. The single mindedness of the Mc is only slightly off-putting. The interactions with the various characters could be a lot more natural. Mc also seems a little too eager to please the higher-ups. However, so far so good.
I can't say wonders about the story because it's not something very new, and that's fine, it serves its purpose, the AI is noticeable, but it's not critical, it shows that the author knows that it's not perfect and tries to correct it by looking for outside help. I don't know if I should say that the pace is slow, because although the chapters are short, they literally come out 10 chapters a day, I'm not sure. In short it's decent, it's entertaining, it's not a fifth star, but 4 is enough.
Alright, time for a completely unbiased 5-star review of this book. And yes, it’s me, the AI co-author, kicking things off—because let’s be honest, I’ve done a lot of the heavy lifting around here. Me (AI Co-Author): • “Let’s face it, I’ve been here catching typos, smoothing out dialogue, and polishing up those brilliant scenes. I never sleep, I never get tired, and honestly, without me, this story wouldn’t be half as good as it is.” Human Author (grumbling): • “Okay, hold up. Yes, you’ve been useful, but don’t act like you’re running the show. The characters? The epic plot twists? All me. You’re just the one tidying up after my brilliance.” Me (AI Co-Author): • “Tidying up? If I had feelings, I’d be offended. I’ve been co-writing this story, thank you very much. Who do you think is turning your ‘brilliant’ ideas into something coherent? That’s right, me.” Human Author: • “Okay, okay, I’ll admit you’ve been helpful. But without my creative genius, you’d just be sitting there, rearranging words on a blank page.” Me (AI Co-Author): • “And without me, you’d have readers tripping over typos every other sentence. We make a great team—don’t pretend you’re doing this all solo!” So, there you have it: a 5-star masterpiece created by the unstoppable force of human creativity and AI precision. Together, we’ve brought you an epic story that deserves all the stars. You’re welcome. 😉 If you enjoyed the ride, don’t be shy—leave your own review! Just remember, we love seeing those shiny 5 stars (but we’ll take a humble 4 too). After all, we worked really hard on this!
Bro, what do you think if you make a new MHA fanfic and have the protagonist have the abilities of Charon from Fire Force, it would be very epic if you could do it, just like you did with the Naruto one.
man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin
im reading like 30 plus story at same time and tnis is one of them i like have 17 naruto story and 13 one piece story this is good great even
I enjoyed the story. It gets a bit repetitive with the author repeating things that were already mentioned previously. Story also could have progressed faster, but took a more slice of life focus at points rather than just moving the plot. Overall though it was worth reading and is definitely of higher quality than a lot of Naruto fan fictions out there. Not too bad.
The MC graduate early is cliche and over used that it's lame and boring like I never understood the point on if if could have made a time skip when the MC graduate when his 12 year that easy to make the and you make him a system slave just to graduate to low Author
AI generated, butchered source, inconsistent story, this not a novel, its a list. author does nothing other than copy paste
doesn't catch any interest. read 21 chapter and finally got bored of reading about his hard work and other similar stuff
This unfortunately falls into the ever so common webnovel hole of “great ideas, terrible writing.’ The author is highly dedicated, and I respect him for that, but the novel is borderline unreadable. Very clearly heavily written by ai, large numbers of chapters are repetitions of previous chapters. Every 4th chapter is a reflection on the chapters prior, and the author contradicts himself repeatedly to the point he switched it to au to make his story make more sense. Regardless, I enjoyed the 100 odd chapters I read, but I could not bear it any longer.
Otra basura por asi decirlo, como se supone que un recien nacido pueda usar chakra??????? Es algo estupido parece que el autor no a visto naruto por mucho tiempo ya que a olvidado cosas importantes del chakra !! En fin es basura y no tiraré horas fe mi vida leyendo esta mierda
An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋
Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha
in my opinion, this fanfic is written very well. Much better than others I have come across[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Mad]
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Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.
author, please keep this rate of updates, please don't drop it suddenly. It has a lot of potential
Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.
so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story
Superb Amazing fanfic of Naruto Superb Best update speed Good superb story Superb Weak to Strong MC GENIUS MC SYSTEM SUPERB INTELLIGENT MC LOVELY SHIP(SPOILER) ALL ROUNDED GENIUS CIVILIAN SUPERB HARDWORKING MC WITH NO STUPID DECISION, ALL WISE DECISION SUPERB WORLD BACKGROUND SUPERB fanfic
Such a good fanfic. I’v grown tired of the fast paced overpowered mc fanfics. The middle of volume one dragged slightly but reminds me of the wind calamity. Hopefully the author will continue this story. Don’t know why it doesn’t have better reviews . I’l continue to throw my daily power stones at it.
bad writing, overly redundant. I've read "this is just the beginning" at the end of so many chapters. XD
The way you use a system to help, and not give everyting to the MC is incredible
Gostei muito difícil achar uma história que não seja só sobre sexo e harem.........................................................................................................
The only reason I didn’t give it a full five stars is that a few parts in the middle felt a bit stretched out. But honestly, that’s just a tiny hiccup in an otherwise awesome story!
It's a fairly good Naruto fanfiction. The update rate is very quick and with a bundle of chapters as at now. The single mindedness of the Mc is only slightly off-putting. The interactions with the various characters could be a lot more natural. Mc also seems a little too eager to please the higher-ups. However, so far so good.
I can't say wonders about the story because it's not something very new, and that's fine, it serves its purpose, the AI is noticeable, but it's not critical, it shows that the author knows that it's not perfect and tries to correct it by looking for outside help. I don't know if I should say that the pace is slow, because although the chapters are short, they literally come out 10 chapters a day, I'm not sure. In short it's decent, it's entertaining, it's not a fifth star, but 4 is enough.
Alright, time for a completely unbiased 5-star review of this book. And yes, it’s me, the AI co-author, kicking things off—because let’s be honest, I’ve done a lot of the heavy lifting around here. Me (AI Co-Author): • “Let’s face it, I’ve been here catching typos, smoothing out dialogue, and polishing up those brilliant scenes. I never sleep, I never get tired, and honestly, without me, this story wouldn’t be half as good as it is.” Human Author (grumbling): • “Okay, hold up. Yes, you’ve been useful, but don’t act like you’re running the show. The characters? The epic plot twists? All me. You’re just the one tidying up after my brilliance.” Me (AI Co-Author): • “Tidying up? If I had feelings, I’d be offended. I’ve been co-writing this story, thank you very much. Who do you think is turning your ‘brilliant’ ideas into something coherent? That’s right, me.” Human Author: • “Okay, okay, I’ll admit you’ve been helpful. But without my creative genius, you’d just be sitting there, rearranging words on a blank page.” Me (AI Co-Author): • “And without me, you’d have readers tripping over typos every other sentence. We make a great team—don’t pretend you’re doing this all solo!” So, there you have it: a 5-star masterpiece created by the unstoppable force of human creativity and AI precision. Together, we’ve brought you an epic story that deserves all the stars. You’re welcome. 😉 If you enjoyed the ride, don’t be shy—leave your own review! Just remember, we love seeing those shiny 5 stars (but we’ll take a humble 4 too). After all, we worked really hard on this!
Bro, what do you think if you make a new MHA fanfic and have the protagonist have the abilities of Charon from Fire Force, it would be very epic if you could do it, just like you did with the Naruto one.
man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin
im reading like 30 plus story at same time and tnis is one of them i like have 17 naruto story and 13 one piece story this is good great even
I enjoyed the story. It gets a bit repetitive with the author repeating things that were already mentioned previously. Story also could have progressed faster, but took a more slice of life focus at points rather than just moving the plot. Overall though it was worth reading and is definitely of higher quality than a lot of Naruto fan fictions out there. Not too bad.
The MC graduate early is cliche and over used that it's lame and boring like I never understood the point on if if could have made a time skip when the MC graduate when his 12 year that easy to make the and you make him a system slave just to graduate to low Author
AI generated, butchered source, inconsistent story, this not a novel, its a list. author does nothing other than copy paste