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I thought that it was the same with other AI novels with pure AI works however the writing quality is great with the touch of human works together with Ai good narration its Great combination
the only thing that I don't like is the confusing POV's of the characters but, it's still very good
In my personal opinion this story is very well written far better than alot of other stories this managed to keep my adhd ahh to binge read it the system in the story barely plays a major role but it blends well in the background, i personally would recommend it
I am in chapter ten already and i gotta say it's actually good. It is ok for me that the author uses AI as long as it's only used for assistance rather than using AI to generate stories. This is my first review so far so tune in for more reviews in the future
An excellent story. The main character is interesting. The setting and time frame are interesting, but what really sets the story apart from others is the growth. The progression is perfect not once did I think it was going too fast or slow. If I had one problem with the story, it is that it’s missing an X factor. There’s no wrench in any plans, there’s no surprises. Just sustainable marginal growth. But that’s to be expected in a safe environment like kohana with no war. But I assume that will change in the upcoming chapters. Here is five stars to keep you going.
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Aburrido, regular, repetitivo, muchas descripciones innecesarias, todos los capitulos te describe lo que hace el mc y sinceramente muy expansivo para mí gusto, no estoy leyendo una historia sino un manual que no se disfruta
I thought that it was the same with other AI novels with pure AI works however the writing quality is great with the touch of human works together with Ai good narration its Great combination
the only thing that I don't like is the confusing POV's of the characters but, it's still very good
In my personal opinion this story is very well written far better than alot of other stories this managed to keep my adhd ahh to binge read it the system in the story barely plays a major role but it blends well in the background, i personally would recommend it
I am in chapter ten already and i gotta say it's actually good. It is ok for me that the author uses AI as long as it's only used for assistance rather than using AI to generate stories. This is my first review so far so tune in for more reviews in the future
An excellent story. The main character is interesting. The setting and time frame are interesting, but what really sets the story apart from others is the growth. The progression is perfect not once did I think it was going too fast or slow. If I had one problem with the story, it is that it’s missing an X factor. There’s no wrench in any plans, there’s no surprises. Just sustainable marginal growth. But that’s to be expected in a safe environment like kohana with no war. But I assume that will change in the upcoming chapters. Here is five stars to keep you going.
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Aburrido, regular, repetitivo, muchas descripciones innecesarias, todos los capitulos te describe lo que hace el mc y sinceramente muy expansivo para mí gusto, no estoy leyendo una historia sino un manual que no se disfruta