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Começou bem a historia, mas depois ele acabou cometendo o mesmo erros que outrs fics de naruto, o personagem principal virou foi baba do pessoal ai ficou ruim.
Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
have to say I'm ❤️ with loving the cultivation scheme even though it's a bit slow paced it gives us a better understanding of naruto verse dynamics and highlights the MC's efforts from ordinary to sigma😎
I've read up to 113 chapters, and the story is so interesting, I love it. Mc is a hardworking person, and goes through the 'process' to become strong (even if the author gives him a Talent cheat, I think that's fine). In addition, the story details the process, which makes this story even better. One of the things I like is, Mc guys don't HAREM and have many GIRLS (oh, That's great!) I love stories like this. It's one of my favorite Naruto fanfics (besides Naruto: the Wind Calamity). I'll wait for more chapters in the future, hopefully this story doesn't disappoint, and will be finished to the end (or extra). I'm looking forward to it! (It's very hard to find a story like this, if there are any recommendations, can you comment let me know? Thanks). <Sorry my English is bad, I use google translate, English is not my main language>
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Don't forget to deposit it into my account XD, all joking aside, this is the best fic I've ever read(I have a few hours of reading) and I'm really excited for what's to come, keep up the good work!
Umu!, pretty good fanfic! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
just read it. longer you read it, more you'll like it._________________________44______________________
great enjoyable Naruto fic, but I'm disappointed for the lack of timeskips. Genius as MC may be, but physical enhancement regardless of a perfect fitness regime takes quite a long time. It just feels like his progress was rushed way too much.
I hope the MC trains all the 5 basic elements, and also discover a method to use sage mode without signing a summoning technique (so kinda like what Jugo did, but completely built from scratch instead of a bloodline limit)
揭示劇透
It's good. Definitely has the potential to stand next to the most well-known Naruto self-insert fanfictions. I'm so glad the author doesn't have a fourth-grade reading level because finally we have a story with incredibly accurate character adaptations and an MC that has a nuanced and mature understanding of the kind of people these characters are. The MC is a compelling enough character with how he's mature, how he's not edgy, how he's rational, how he cares for people close to him, etc. If I had a problem with this story it's how it's almost like it's confused on what it should show to the reader and what it shouldn't, there are countless times where I wished some things were shown and some weren't, especially in regards to how much this series *tells* us the MC is doing a lot of grueling training behind the scenes, but not actually showing us, leaving the reader to feel like the MC's acquisition of skills sometimes isn't deserved despite how much he probably trained.
[img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Yeah overall after reading a quarter of the chapters I can see that it was written okay not bad seen worse really but yeah I don't like it I just can't seem to find a good Naruto I like lately despite there behind so many Naruto haha I wanna see a Byakugan Naruto but most are sharingan or systems they just are not that good to read for me
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
This story isn't that bad, actually very enjoyable, even. But, what's with the title? What's so ordinary about the MC? His talent is like kakashi and he is often compared to minato. So, what's the deal with it? Maybe it's because he doesn't have a cheat or "golden finger"... Or it's just a clickbait title... Would be cool if it is explained at least. Since it doesn't seem to fit that much. Peace.
It's a great story so far I'm enjoying it and i hope for more don't get discouraged author
rational and relatable mc, reasonable and believable plot, hardwork and effort instead of cheat and nonsense power scaling. one of the rarest gem of a fic with thoughtfully written story
raw??................................................................................................................................................................................
Give this fic a try. there is noticeable use of AI in writing but till now its good. MC is trying to stick to being human while knowing naruto world is world of bloodlines. We shall see in future how strong he gets...
This really has potential, definitely recommend it to anyone who's interested. We need more chapters 🙏
Not a fan how shadow clone was used. I felt that it’s unrealistic that the Mc can use it so early on without even having Genin chakra reserves.
Começou bem a historia, mas depois ele acabou cometendo o mesmo erros que outrs fics de naruto, o personagem principal virou foi baba do pessoal ai ficou ruim.
Good job man, good job. One of the tops that I have read recently. Well-written plot, non-boring main character. All in all, a plus. I will continue to follow. Good luck.
have to say I'm ❤️ with loving the cultivation scheme even though it's a bit slow paced it gives us a better understanding of naruto verse dynamics and highlights the MC's efforts from ordinary to sigma😎
I've read up to 113 chapters, and the story is so interesting, I love it. Mc is a hardworking person, and goes through the 'process' to become strong (even if the author gives him a Talent cheat, I think that's fine). In addition, the story details the process, which makes this story even better. One of the things I like is, Mc guys don't HAREM and have many GIRLS (oh, That's great!) I love stories like this. It's one of my favorite Naruto fanfics (besides Naruto: the Wind Calamity). I'll wait for more chapters in the future, hopefully this story doesn't disappoint, and will be finished to the end (or extra). I'm looking forward to it! (It's very hard to find a story like this, if there are any recommendations, can you comment let me know? Thanks). <Sorry my English is bad, I use google translate, English is not my main language>
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Don't forget to deposit it into my account XD, all joking aside, this is the best fic I've ever read(I have a few hours of reading) and I'm really excited for what's to come, keep up the good work!
Umu!, pretty good fanfic! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
just read it. longer you read it, more you'll like it._________________________44______________________
great enjoyable Naruto fic, but I'm disappointed for the lack of timeskips. Genius as MC may be, but physical enhancement regardless of a perfect fitness regime takes quite a long time. It just feels like his progress was rushed way too much.
I hope the MC trains all the 5 basic elements, and also discover a method to use sage mode without signing a summoning technique (so kinda like what Jugo did, but completely built from scratch instead of a bloodline limit)
揭示劇透 It's good. Definitely has the potential to stand next to the most well-known Naruto self-insert fanfictions. I'm so glad the author doesn't have a fourth-grade reading level because finally we have a story with incredibly accurate character adaptations and an MC that has a nuanced and mature understanding of the kind of people these characters are. The MC is a compelling enough character with how he's mature, how he's not edgy, how he's rational, how he cares for people close to him, etc. If I had a problem with this story it's how it's almost like it's confused on what it should show to the reader and what it shouldn't, there are countless times where I wished some things were shown and some weren't, especially in regards to how much this series *tells* us the MC is doing a lot of grueling training behind the scenes, but not actually showing us, leaving the reader to feel like the MC's acquisition of skills sometimes isn't deserved despite how much he probably trained.
[img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
Yeah overall after reading a quarter of the chapters I can see that it was written okay not bad seen worse really but yeah I don't like it I just can't seem to find a good Naruto I like lately despite there behind so many Naruto haha I wanna see a Byakugan Naruto but most are sharingan or systems they just are not that good to read for me
[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
This story isn't that bad, actually very enjoyable, even. But, what's with the title? What's so ordinary about the MC? His talent is like kakashi and he is often compared to minato. So, what's the deal with it? Maybe it's because he doesn't have a cheat or "golden finger"... Or it's just a clickbait title... Would be cool if it is explained at least. Since it doesn't seem to fit that much. Peace.
It's a great story so far I'm enjoying it and i hope for more don't get discouraged author
rational and relatable mc, reasonable and believable plot, hardwork and effort instead of cheat and nonsense power scaling. one of the rarest gem of a fic with thoughtfully written story
raw??................................................................................................................................................................................
Give this fic a try. there is noticeable use of AI in writing but till now its good. MC is trying to stick to being human while knowing naruto world is world of bloodlines. We shall see in future how strong he gets...
This really has potential, definitely recommend it to anyone who's interested. We need more chapters 🙏
Not a fan how shadow clone was used. I felt that it’s unrealistic that the Mc can use it so early on without even having Genin chakra reserves.