1st chapter got me excited. By the third chapter a lot of writing inconsistencies start. Feels like the age of the characters is kinda off or they are doing timeskips without saying. good possibility it's Ai content, but not certain. Might just need re-working to make the story flow better.
Lol. When I started the chap I thought it was the grandpa Rick from Rick and Marty for some reason. [img=Why][img=Why][img=Why][img=Shocked]
Thank u for coming back, author. We appreciate u. Love ur story too
He could say he received inspiration from the shadow clone jutsu to do multi thought processing. Like having clones of yourself in your mind that help process different information for the users' benefit. You could have him create a sleep paralysis demon jutsu that kills his targets in their sleep on assassination missions. It would be cool if he made a jutsu that helped the Yamanaka clan deal with all the darker memories they have to watch. Like a jutsu to filter the really negative emotions from the experience and stores the information in a part of the brain that can ignore or avoid those negative memories. The useful info would be stored into the person's memories as additional information.
I already have the genjutsu created and the next chapter(s) written. But I want you to theory-craft with me. Comment some cool jutsu ideas (of any kind) in the chat. Have fun, collaborate, and let loose. There are no stupid ideas, so let your mind run wild.
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
get well soon author
Did we do something wrong, author? Is this why mom left?
It's a super good Spiderman fanfiction. It's one of the best I've read in a long time. Reading it reminds me of reading some of the actual Spiderman comic books that I've read, too. The author definitely knows what they are doing. Keep up the great work.
Thanks for the chapter. Loving the story so far. It's one of my favorite Spiderman Fanfictions.
I miss the author and my chapters. Sadness. Please come back when u can
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original Reborn in Naruto with a system
MC dies at the age of 14 after reading the last chapter of Naruto. The teenager then wakes up in the body of a two year old in the hidden leaf village with a system. The MC won't be overpowered from the start, but he will be making a few changes in the Shinobu world.______________________________________________I do not own anything. This is just a fanatic that has been on my mind for a while. If you do not care for the story then I am sorry for wasting your time, but if you do then please leave a comment.17 Chs 864 收藏
Loving the story. Haven't read a Naruto fanfic as good as this in quite a while. Keep up the great work
Naruto: Wooing Tsunade from Day One!
Anime & Comics · PinkSnake