The Old Baseball Player System

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HcS10

Author here. Well, we've reached 50 chapters in the story, so I thought it would be a good time to do a review. This is the first book I'm writing, so I'm always open to suggestions and critiques. Feel free to ask any questions here. Some important points: - The MC is only 14 years old, so it's normal for him to go through phases where he's arrogant, rebellious, in love... He will mature a lot throughout the story. - This isn't a story where the MC quickly becomes invincible and OP, you can expect a lot of training and truly challenging opponents. - There is romance, but don't expect anything too soon since the MC is only 14 years old. - I intend to develop various different characters, and most of them will have their own journey, so don't worry if you like a specific character and are afraid they'll be forgotten. - The story is a mix of comedy, romance, and slice-of-life, but the main focus is baseball. You can also expect a bit of drama.

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TeneT

Very good novel dont drop author. Big potential [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DarkDrake

never been into sports, but the system based story got me interested.

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AKG_1436

good work man keeping going. it pleasure to read this novel

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Mister_Robot

A very interesting sports novel. Good use of a baseball system and pacing is commendable as well. My only complaint is with the MC. I find his character very annoying. He feels more like an annoying side character. His friends Kenta or Ren would make a better MC, but that's just my opinion. I hope there's character development.

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NashP7

So far so good! I’m really enjoying reading this, following Shuns journey is really fun. He trains very hard & has a real passion for baseball. He’s very young so he’s quite immature and makes mistakes but that’s okay. If anything it’s better that he’s far from perfect as he’s developing as a player and a person all at the same time. I’m interested to see where the story progresses from here on out!

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Lucius_Frey

On chapter 50, good writing quality and has a lot of potential. Only one thing I dislike but it’s a matter of personal preference rather than an issue with the story itself. Hope the author keeps it up

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Summerlover

Great story overall. But while I’m here I will recommend a story to you. Generation Of Miracles: The Prodigy