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Love the author but when the MCs actions lead to his parents dying i gotta subtract a star. Ignoring the fact that its been overused immensely, the MC also little memory of canon. His parents dying were due to his own error and to change literally nothing even when he reacted. just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. idk just felt forced and generic. other than that a decent story.
Haven't read the story yet but still gotta give it a 5 star. Really exited for it cuz he finally did a anime fanfic. CORNBRINGER the greatest author
Yall know who this man is, no more words need to be spoken. Just go aheaf and have a good read.
Writing Quality - 5 🌟 No issues for me here Story Development- 4 🌟 It's good but at points could be predictable. Character Design- 5 🌟 In my opinion, this is the highlight of this fic. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 2 chapters a day is fine by me World Background - 4 🌟 It's still in the early stages but I feel like nothing new is being brought to the table. It feels like a generic Naruto fanfic with an MC having some unique abilities. I want to see some character depths and unique backstories. Basically, your spin on the world of Naruto. It's lacking a little in this department for me. At least for the moment. Still, it's 10/10 recommended. Keep up the good work Corn.
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Excellent story for now we will see in the future but currently it is excellent I just hope that the story doesn't always fall when a story is good something happens
From the introduction to the present, it was at a consistent pace that I enjoyed reading, its grammar is decent and its story has a lot to explore, this being just the beginning. His character has a certain charm and except for his lack of appearance (which is hard to imagine) for everything else I like him as the protagonist. Its updating is constant as its story progresses, if it continues like this it could be one of the best Naruto fics I have ever read.
Everything i have read by this author has high writing quality to start. The abilities of a claymore are very interesting since the character is male. In the claymore anime the male characters were supposedly far more powerful than the females but usually gave in to power as it was close to sexual gratification. The premise is pretty good but the author has a habit of not finishing his ffs. There are a lot of transformations in Naruto, especially sage mode wise, and i hope the mc will be able to use his awakened for, maybe even monster transformation.
This review is posted after 20 chapters. Started reading this novel only because of authors previous fic. The author hasn't disappointed so far. The foundation of the story so far has been excellent.
Well, of it's from Corn then I know it will be a great book! Going to read asap!
I‘ve never seen any claymore fics so I‘ll just leave a nice review for that alone, Naruto ff is rarely something I enjoy
Very good fic it's like spring in between quagmire of sewage story goes perfectly well with less plotholes and mc is interesting and entertaining not a sideline character who watches the cannon play out or tagalong who's entire existence will revolve around author fav char
Asked Corn 1 year ago to make a Naruto fanfic, and finally my dream came true. Dear Cornbringer, Twilight MCxTanyaxRosalie is next, 'till then, gonna enjoy this masterpiece.
I pray for a Non-Harem story. In fact, to hell with romance. Nowadays people always think romance is a requirement in fanfics. Good romance is hard to write. I'm here for the character interactions, especially the bromance with Itachi, and the exploration of his powers. Their benefits....and their consequences.
up until the latest chapter 22, there have been no issues. great novel. another good novel by cornbringer.
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I've read 16 episodes so far, and I can already tell that this will be a great book. I'll also be checking out the author's other works.
Yes, you are back. Oh, thank the crows. Here, take my offerings. 🌽 🌽 🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽
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Well, when “Sasuke” was born, it was obvious who the love interest would be. I just hope he's the one. The harem doesn't look good in Naruto's world.
I don't care if the novel is good or bad. I haven't even read it yet ! But, the moment I read Teresa of the faint smile ... you had me ...
Love the author but when the MCs actions lead to his parents dying i gotta subtract a star. Ignoring the fact that its been overused immensely, the MC also little memory of canon. His parents dying were due to his own error and to change literally nothing even when he reacted. just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. idk just felt forced and generic. other than that a decent story.
Haven't read the story yet but still gotta give it a 5 star. Really exited for it cuz he finally did a anime fanfic. CORNBRINGER the greatest author
Yall know who this man is, no more words need to be spoken. Just go aheaf and have a good read.
Writing Quality - 5 🌟 No issues for me here Story Development- 4 🌟 It's good but at points could be predictable. Character Design- 5 🌟 In my opinion, this is the highlight of this fic. Updating Stability - 5 🌟 2 chapters a day is fine by me World Background - 4 🌟 It's still in the early stages but I feel like nothing new is being brought to the table. It feels like a generic Naruto fanfic with an MC having some unique abilities. I want to see some character depths and unique backstories. Basically, your spin on the world of Naruto. It's lacking a little in this department for me. At least for the moment. Still, it's 10/10 recommended. Keep up the good work Corn.
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Excellent story for now we will see in the future but currently it is excellent I just hope that the story doesn't always fall when a story is good something happens
From the introduction to the present, it was at a consistent pace that I enjoyed reading, its grammar is decent and its story has a lot to explore, this being just the beginning. His character has a certain charm and except for his lack of appearance (which is hard to imagine) for everything else I like him as the protagonist. Its updating is constant as its story progresses, if it continues like this it could be one of the best Naruto fics I have ever read.
Everything i have read by this author has high writing quality to start. The abilities of a claymore are very interesting since the character is male. In the claymore anime the male characters were supposedly far more powerful than the females but usually gave in to power as it was close to sexual gratification. The premise is pretty good but the author has a habit of not finishing his ffs. There are a lot of transformations in Naruto, especially sage mode wise, and i hope the mc will be able to use his awakened for, maybe even monster transformation.
This review is posted after 20 chapters. Started reading this novel only because of authors previous fic. The author hasn't disappointed so far. The foundation of the story so far has been excellent.
Well, of it's from Corn then I know it will be a great book! Going to read asap!
I‘ve never seen any claymore fics so I‘ll just leave a nice review for that alone, Naruto ff is rarely something I enjoy
Very good fic it's like spring in between quagmire of sewage story goes perfectly well with less plotholes and mc is interesting and entertaining not a sideline character who watches the cannon play out or tagalong who's entire existence will revolve around author fav char
Asked Corn 1 year ago to make a Naruto fanfic, and finally my dream came true. Dear Cornbringer, Twilight MCxTanyaxRosalie is next, 'till then, gonna enjoy this masterpiece.
I pray for a Non-Harem story. In fact, to hell with romance. Nowadays people always think romance is a requirement in fanfics. Good romance is hard to write. I'm here for the character interactions, especially the bromance with Itachi, and the exploration of his powers. Their benefits....and their consequences.
up until the latest chapter 22, there have been no issues. great novel. another good novel by cornbringer.
chapters won't load?????????????¿????????????????????????????????¿???????????????????¿??????????????????¿??????????????????????????????????????????????????¿????????????????????¿???????????????????????????????????
I've read 16 episodes so far, and I can already tell that this will be a great book. I'll also be checking out the author's other works.
Yes, you are back. Oh, thank the crows. Here, take my offerings. 🌽 🌽 🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽🌽
Good ...........................................................................................................................................................................
Well, when “Sasuke” was born, it was obvious who the love interest would be. I just hope he's the one. The harem doesn't look good in Naruto's world.
I don't care if the novel is good or bad. I haven't even read it yet ! But, the moment I read Teresa of the faint smile ... you had me ...