/ Book&Literature / The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister
摘要
The MC is granted a 2nd chance at life, only to wake up as a young Tywin Lannister. Follow the MC as he finds himself as part of a scheme fashioned by a higher being. He will have the opportunity to relive Tywin’s life while attempting to achieve his objective. With hindsight of the plot from the books, the MC will not only try to emulate Tywin’s greatest successes, but capitalize on his failures. All while carving his place in the World of a Song of Ice and Fire.
This is my first publication so feel free to comment. Lore and writing critiques will be considered.
This is ASOIAF Fanfic, that means it is R18. Anything goes- Violence, murder, sex, rape, incest, gore and tragedy. If you are easily offended then start complaining to G.R.R. Martin as this is based off of his work to which I am a fan. I am only practicing my writing while immersing my MC into a world I deeply enjoy.
*Not a sentient system.
*He will be breaking from book canon, so be warned.
*Current release schedule is at twice a week.
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Why would the MC still act respectful to his father when he knew he could almost get away with anything he do, because of his fathers personality?
Looks good so far(excited to see a new fic rather than more stolen work)
A beautiful story with an even more beautiful beginning. The only issue is the writing quality. It's not bad—in fact, it's good—but I hope it improves even further.
Love the fact of using the old lion as MC and most of all his system is not too OP. Great work
Well I make the first proper comment to this stpry just a few minutes ago but I noticed I pretty much wrote a smallish review and this I believed it was worthy to make it officially a review since this stpry deserve it. I am loving this story and I truly hope the Author won’t drop it and will write many chapter lol… it is rare to find a pre game of thrones and post house of dragon fanfic with no self insert as a Targaryen, stark or John snow the one as young Robert Baratheon or a Lannister for the most part are dropped or of low quality except one that I know of that is also an hp crossover with a lot (too much) of smut. This one as a young tiwyn Lannister is so refreshing and full of potential because of how it is a fact the mc will become Op and he is growing quickly but still the growth is gradual well fleshed out and you are truly building a solid plot with interesting new contents too. There may be a harem pairing but it won’t be the focus for sure and it will be done tastefully and in a fitting way for the plot based on what the author has done till now so I would advise the no harem sect to give it a try too. Keep going me author Keep going
Very creative fanfic, one of the best i have read so far, i really looking forvard how it will develop ( author please dont be the kind that can be bullied into writting clishe )
It's been a while since I've enjoyed a GoT fan fic by anyone else. This one pleases me. Maybe because it's set in a time period that I haven't studied thoroughly, but I don't see any big errors in the world building. At most the dialogue needs tightening up with words like 'yeah' removed and replaced. Otherwise a tight fic with an appreciation of the themes. Good work.
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Fairly good and plausible story ............................................................................................................................................................................................. ........................................................... :)
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Good pace with added likable characters and world building. Couldnt have sales for more plus you got Tywin f* Lanniater as mc. The only bad thing i see about the book so far is that it has not too many chapters, but you just have to wait for that so… Also wouldnt want author to rush the story cuz hes not getting stones, just be patient, what is good will allways shine.
Very good story, definitely like how the system works (my only criticism would be to restructure the ‘skills’ tab to cut up into stages to make it clear what is at a ‘basic’ level vs ‘intermediate’…)
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The only defect so far is the low number of chapters (12), the rest, especially the naturalness between the relationships, the conversations, the script and its rhythm of the story (progression of time within the story) is sensational. Nothing is exaggerated, everything in the right proportion.
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Enjoying the book so far, good writing, looking forward to reading more of your stuff! The idea is definitely unique for me as I've never read a book with the MC entering into another character while being himself, it's definitely cool!
This story is so good!! Keep it up author! You got this, I really like character development. And the mc being a Tywin Lannister makes it more unique compared to GoT fanfics.
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 1. Lion Reborn 5 months ago
- 2 2.Marching Orders 5 months ago
- 3 3. Oaths and Schemes 5 months ago
- 4 4. Taking a loss 5 months ago
- 5 5. Opportunities 5 months ago
- 6 6. Setting the Tone 5 months ago
- 7 7. Act of Kindness 5 months ago
- 8 8.Intentions 5 months ago
- 9 9. A Good Day 5 months ago
- 10 10. Farewell Feast 5 months ago
- 11 11. After the Feast 5 months ago
- 12 12. Paying back loses. 4 months ago
- 13 13. The Goldroad Pt 1 4 months ago
- 14 14. The Goldroad Pt.2 4 months ago
- 15 15. Life in King's Landing Pt 1 4 months ago
- 16 16. Life in King's Landing Pt 2 4 months ago
- 17 17. Gems amongst garbage 4 months ago
- 18 18. Unforeseen Event 4 months ago
- 19 19. Another Unforeseen 4 months ago
- 20 20. Mysterious Reward 4 months ago
- 21 21. Attack Plans 2 months ago
- 22 22. Ambush 2 months ago
- 23 23. Company of the Red Scorpions 2 months ago
- 24 24. Passage of Time 1 months ago
- 25 25. Ability 1 months ago
- 26 26. Qualities of the Boy 1 months ago
- 27 27. Good News, Bad News Maester Brayan 1 months ago
- 28 28. Still too young. 1 months ago
- 29 29. Aegon's Troubles 1 months ago
- 30 30. Irony 1 months ago
- 31 31. Prophecies 17 days ago
I was excited to read it, but I already gave up on the first chapter, the MC is just a puppet of a larger entity...........................................................