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Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage

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作者: theusual

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A lonely man, lover of manga and anime, travels to the world of Naruto, where ninja life is cruel and is reborn in a family branch of the Hyuga clan, Hyuga Chen, who thought he would die young, received the Ōtsutsuki lineage by opening the system .
Chen said: I don't know how much my sword will allow you to run for a year.

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Sieg44

To be frank, it's bad, it could be very good if the only thing the system gives is the otsutsuki lineage, but it gives absurd and op things, from the 6th episode it already becomes an untouchable character. The translation is not bad but the story is garbage, classic Chinese ff, if I write ff without using my brain I can write better than 80% of Chinese ff

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theusual

I'm translating this because I didn't like at all the translations they did to the fanfic, which was one of the first I read about Naruto, that's why I love it and well, I'll translate it as best I can. You can correct me when I make mistakes

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Ole_Tessmann

Translation is pretty good. There’s some things that aren’t explained like he has a mark on his neck or whatever all of a sudden that wasn’t mentioned before. Since it’s a translation I can’t say much about the story itself and where it’s going, especially because it seems to be slow paced and I didn’t even read all the available chapters yet, but this is gonna be your typical Op mc story that gets various powers for no reason. He’s three years old, has an ancient or pure otsutsuki bloodline, a system that got him pika pika no mi with no weaknesses, observation Haki and rokushiki manual, tenseigan that can supposedly control space and time and it’s all being spoon-fed to him. He’s a branchmember but doesn’t have the seal, because he doesn’t have byakugan but his eyes are described as lavender(with golden colour)?? That’s pretty much how a byakugan looks, sometimes more white sometimes more creamy lavenderish no?! Idk there’s a lot of things not to like already but I don’t find many good naruto fanfictions to read nowadays so I’ll keep reading to kill time

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Demonic_Dragon_01

What is the name of the original novel??????????

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luiz_S

MC is already born OP, which is not a real problem. So a system appears that gives several powers that in themselves are already ridiculously strong, but it accumulates them all, what's the point?

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Aleksic
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The moment I read Chen! I ran as far as my webnovel legs could carry me Hyuga Chen 😂😂😂😂☕️☕️

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Trollface

Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo

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SAHIL_8253

The ff is good don't have mistakes even though thw system is kinda sus and makes him overpowered quickly, i mean just give him otsusuki lineage but and some techniques , not the pika pika no mi and all the stuff, overall it's good for time pass

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Maycon_Henrique_10

É raro encontrar boas histórias de Naruto do anime espero que continue postando mais capítulos já que sua história tira o tédio do dia é realmente muito boa 😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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Daoistf9kQIN

Good novel 5 stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟...............

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Orti_Cranual

Até agora muito bom veremos se continua assim até o final,... . .... .... ... .. . ... . . .,.......................................................................

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Nuh_Uhh

NGA please post some more One Piece: But I Am Hashirama

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kirill_Boldyrev

Фф хорош, но только в начале, дальше идет полный бред, по типу "я тут самый могущественный". Персонажи не раскрыты, та же Кушина получила силу на халяву и просто говорит, что она здесь могущественная, толком не участвуя в боях, из-за чего не имеет опыта. Но тупо из-за автора Кушину не втаптывают в грязь джонины, которые могли бы преподать ей урок. Из-за этого одно это уже нехило подбивает желание читать, но автор на этом не останавливается, делая ГГ тупо могущественней просто потому что. В Фф ни ГГ, ни другие персонажи не имеют раскрытия характера. Желание плюнуть в лицо ГГ возникает при его боях. Да, он правильно делает, что убивает, но при этом он показывает свои навыки и умения, демонстрируя свою неопытность. Поэтому Джонины могли искать лазейку в защите. Тут опять же мешает автор, чтобы ГГ не отлетел из-за своей тупости. И это только малые проблемы, но из-за них фф уже можно не читать дальше.

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AlastorGF

Sincera y rotundamente es aburrido y sin sentido, con 3 años el autor le da físico de un nadador y cuando camina por la calle todas las mujeres se le quieren tirar encima........ con 3 putos años. Por cierto la traducción es bastante buena por lo menos gracias a que es decente no perdí neuronas leyendo la historia del fanfic

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waqas_ahmed

update faster author we can't wait........

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ZxeroX
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This is another typical Chinese novel . He’s already OP at the age of 4. The depth of character around him is sallow .so unless you want unbeatable MC from the beginning it’s just better to skip it. But let’s give a shout out to the translator. Great grammar and good sentences structure. Very easy to read . Great job! Just pick a better novel translate next time .

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Zero_idea

A child is belittled for his happiness with something that will make him live in humiliation when he grows up, all because he came to brag in front of him.

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carlos_henrique_0897

Bem vamos lá, a FF é interessante no início mas os últimos caps se assemelham muito a histórias chinesas, faltava só o MC falar sobre o monte tai😑, personalidade lixo, deu um 360° no MC...n sei como consegui continuar lendo mas de uma coisa tenha certeza no final eu n estava torcendo para o protagonista. Já li FF com tags escuras mas essa me deu desgosto e arrependimento

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