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Honestly this review is mainly for those dumb 1 star reviews the complain about NTR in chp189. The two people that engage in mana transfer (making out and other things that were skipped) aren't even in his harem yet if there's is even going to be one. I'm 338chp's in and i haven't seen even a hint of a harem about to be made yet. I will admit there are definitely others that like the MC, but he hasn't reciprocated their feelings as of now he has stayed devoted to his wife. Though it may change in future chapters but, as of right now their claims of NTR are incorrect. As for that one dude complaining about yuri he's correct it is yuri but that's the only yuri scene i remember seeing.
A great fanfic and the overall story is more in line with the fantasy adventure type. The writing quality and the update schedule are very consistent, kinda like how you may tune in every day to watch 1 episode of the show. As for the plot and context, the beginning (albeit original) may feel a bit slow. Conversely, the later story mostly follows the source material (which are Fate/Zero and Fate/Apocrypha as of now). Last but not least, the personality of the MC can be considered as someone who rarely falters, is wiser than they look, and always accounts for everything.
I have been reading this since 12pm it is 3:50am currently peak fate fic literally isn’t any better fic available for fate so far
Not sure why this is being spam reviewed, there is no ntr, don't remember any yuri either. Anyone know what's up with all the reviews because it's weird.
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 Chap 189 ntr 🤮🤮🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
nice story. really liked how it progresses. its a Chinese translation but theres no racism which is good since most Chinese fanfic have some kind of racism.
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A única coisa boa desta história é a gramática. O resto, é um aglomerado de clichês.
I enjoyed the story, I think it's very good, and unlike the other fanfics this story does not focus much on the harem which I like because there are to many fanfics that have harems and it's getting harder to find any fanfics with no harems or barely has a harem.
Ok I have to say this but you guys know this a Chinese translated novel I'm not joking this is really is Chinese novel translated called 人在不列颠，宝具神之键
Huh, really? Running into Scathach like that, she ends up saving him... And oh, there's that unlucky Lancer too, right? Shouldn't he be dead? Shouldn't he be in the Thrones of heroes? These fanfics are just meh... Not worth it... The main character's too lazy, thats big no-no too much for my taste... Quality's like a 2 out of 10. Oh, has God abandoned me? To stumble upon this book after so much surfing for good fanfics... I've had it!! When I get the chance, I'm writing my own fanfic! AND READ IT ON MY OWN!!!!! I'm done!!!!!!
Great book, Really enjoyed it, Great Characters, Great world building, Good story Development, And Great Writing quality. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Why did the author have to include ntr just because for anyone who says it's not ntr they are doing it without the knowledge of the mc if it were a man yes everyone would say it's ntr but since it is between women magically nothing happens
I really liked the novel. Well written, not too slow or rushed. good development and characters. The only negative is why the author added Yuri to the last chapters. Quite spoiled my opinion of the fanfic (Google translate)
Yuri 🤮😮💨👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
A warning for those who hate yuri and those who believe yuri in a harem is ntr, please check for yourself chapter 189 to see that i am not lying, i know the story is great and that there is almost nothing to complain about BUT.......we all know where this is going and if i were you i would suggest you drop the novel or end any intentions of reading it. regardless im still gonna give this story the stars it deserves
I'm just raising the rating. If possible, read it. I like it. ....................................................................................................
Nasuverse and Honkai? Ask no more! Gotta try read this! And here 5 Star for you!
I can tolerate the boring story but him giving away Excalibur nah.........
Прочитал на китайском языке. Неплохая история, но в некоторых моментах автор уходит не туда, быстро исправляясь. Концовка слишком невнятная и оборванная, не оправдывает ожиданий.
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for those who are interested i started to write a fanfiction on a nasuverse world but i'm revisiting it if you want to criticize or support me don't hesitate to drop by and leave me a review or a comment.
In the very beginning, I hadn't had that highest expectation. After all, when I'm searching for new novels, I don't have much expectation for writing quality, update schedule, and character development. But honestly, this novel surprised me tenfold. I found a gem inside of muck, and the writing quality, the storytelling, and the detail about the events of the Fate Universe is quite impressive. So it's only natural for me to give it 5 stars. I recommend anyone who wishes to see a different path in Camelot look at this novel, because it will surprise you.
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Honestly...... I would not give this book a 5 star since it still have some flaws despite its good plot for a fanfic But others making a review too low just for a 'yuri' event according to them that is considered netorare that does not even affect the plot or is not that significant in the progress of the story made me do otherwise........Since i don't want the rating of the story to become too low despite its uniqueness
Honestly this review is mainly for those dumb 1 star reviews the complain about NTR in chp189. The two people that engage in mana transfer (making out and other things that were skipped) aren't even in his harem yet if there's is even going to be one. I'm 338chp's in and i haven't seen even a hint of a harem about to be made yet. I will admit there are definitely others that like the MC, but he hasn't reciprocated their feelings as of now he has stayed devoted to his wife. Though it may change in future chapters but, as of right now their claims of NTR are incorrect. As for that one dude complaining about yuri he's correct it is yuri but that's the only yuri scene i remember seeing.
A great fanfic and the overall story is more in line with the fantasy adventure type. The writing quality and the update schedule are very consistent, kinda like how you may tune in every day to watch 1 episode of the show. As for the plot and context, the beginning (albeit original) may feel a bit slow. Conversely, the later story mostly follows the source material (which are Fate/Zero and Fate/Apocrypha as of now). Last but not least, the personality of the MC can be considered as someone who rarely falters, is wiser than they look, and always accounts for everything.
I have been reading this since 12pm it is 3:50am currently peak fate fic literally isn’t any better fic available for fate so far
Not sure why this is being spam reviewed, there is no ntr, don't remember any yuri either. Anyone know what's up with all the reviews because it's weird.
Ntr 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 Chap 189 ntr 🤮🤮🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
nice story. really liked how it progresses. its a Chinese translation but theres no racism which is good since most Chinese fanfic have some kind of racism.
.................,..............................................................................................................................
A única coisa boa desta história é a gramática. O resto, é um aglomerado de clichês.
I enjoyed the story, I think it's very good, and unlike the other fanfics this story does not focus much on the harem which I like because there are to many fanfics that have harems and it's getting harder to find any fanfics with no harems or barely has a harem.
Ok I have to say this but you guys know this a Chinese translated novel I'm not joking this is really is Chinese novel translated called 人在不列颠，宝具神之键
Huh, really? Running into Scathach like that, she ends up saving him... And oh, there's that unlucky Lancer too, right? Shouldn't he be dead? Shouldn't he be in the Thrones of heroes? These fanfics are just meh... Not worth it... The main character's too lazy, thats big no-no too much for my taste... Quality's like a 2 out of 10. Oh, has God abandoned me? To stumble upon this book after so much surfing for good fanfics... I've had it!! When I get the chance, I'm writing my own fanfic! AND READ IT ON MY OWN!!!!! I'm done!!!!!!
Great book, Really enjoyed it, Great Characters, Great world building, Good story Development, And Great Writing quality. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Why did the author have to include ntr just because for anyone who says it's not ntr they are doing it without the knowledge of the mc if it were a man yes everyone would say it's ntr but since it is between women magically nothing happens
I really liked the novel. Well written, not too slow or rushed. good development and characters. The only negative is why the author added Yuri to the last chapters. Quite spoiled my opinion of the fanfic (Google translate)
Yuri 🤮😮💨👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
A warning for those who hate yuri and those who believe yuri in a harem is ntr, please check for yourself chapter 189 to see that i am not lying, i know the story is great and that there is almost nothing to complain about BUT.......we all know where this is going and if i were you i would suggest you drop the novel or end any intentions of reading it. regardless im still gonna give this story the stars it deserves
I'm just raising the rating. If possible, read it. I like it. ....................................................................................................
Nasuverse and Honkai? Ask no more! Gotta try read this! And here 5 Star for you!
I can tolerate the boring story but him giving away Excalibur nah.........
Прочитал на китайском языке. Неплохая история, но в некоторых моментах автор уходит не туда, быстро исправляясь. Концовка слишком невнятная и оборванная, не оправдывает ожиданий.
[img=update][img=exp][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update]
for those who are interested i started to write a fanfiction on a nasuverse world but i'm revisiting it if you want to criticize or support me don't hesitate to drop by and leave me a review or a comment.
In the very beginning, I hadn't had that highest expectation. After all, when I'm searching for new novels, I don't have much expectation for writing quality, update schedule, and character development. But honestly, this novel surprised me tenfold. I found a gem inside of muck, and the writing quality, the storytelling, and the detail about the events of the Fate Universe is quite impressive. So it's only natural for me to give it 5 stars. I recommend anyone who wishes to see a different path in Camelot look at this novel, because it will surprise you.
...........................................................................................................................................................
Honestly...... I would not give this book a 5 star since it still have some flaws despite its good plot for a fanfic But others making a review too low just for a 'yuri' event according to them that is considered netorare that does not even affect the plot or is not that significant in the progress of the story made me do otherwise........Since i don't want the rating of the story to become too low despite its uniqueness