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Okay, after reading through about 40-ish chapters, I really enjoy this story, maybe even more than the other fic of my mother is king arthur. It's just my personal take, but the characters are more well-developed and their interactions with the main character are more engaging. I just hope you won't drop this story 🙏🙏🙏
I would rather have a novel that deals with coincidences and straight-up backbones in writing than this. Enemies are too stupid to be taken seriously.
10/10 can anyone tell me the original name of the fanfiction? Assuming this is a translation👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Noice, another fate fic. Just reading five chapters, looks promising. I will wait until around twenty chapters are available to continue reading.
It's okay right now. Mc backstory doesn't exist so we know nothing about him or his personality, it is kinda soulless. Other than that it's good. I got a question tho, i didn't see romance tag but will it have it and please tell me it's not arturia
Fate x honkai impact 3rd crossover good . waiting for new chapters /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////................................
This is cool I've actually recently gotten into Honkai and have been looking for fics about it I wonder if the Mc will become a Mantis or is he strong enough without it ik Honkai can get ridiculous but so can Fate
So it really IS Honkai Impact 3rd's Divine Keys, MC about to solo the entire verse. Anyway Honkai impact fic is an automatic 5 stars, with fate involved i'd give it a 10 stars if I could. Hoping to see Void Archives here
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Okay, after reading through about 40-ish chapters, I really enjoy this story, maybe even more than the other fic of my mother is king arthur. It's just my personal take, but the characters are more well-developed and their interactions with the main character are more engaging. I just hope you won't drop this story 🙏🙏🙏
I would rather have a novel that deals with coincidences and straight-up backbones in writing than this. Enemies are too stupid to be taken seriously.
10/10 can anyone tell me the original name of the fanfiction? Assuming this is a translation👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Noice, another fate fic. Just reading five chapters, looks promising. I will wait until around twenty chapters are available to continue reading.
It's okay right now. Mc backstory doesn't exist so we know nothing about him or his personality, it is kinda soulless. Other than that it's good. I got a question tho, i didn't see romance tag but will it have it and please tell me it's not arturia
Fate x honkai impact 3rd crossover good . waiting for new chapters /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////................................
This is cool I've actually recently gotten into Honkai and have been looking for fics about it I wonder if the Mc will become a Mantis or is he strong enough without it ik Honkai can get ridiculous but so can Fate
So it really IS Honkai Impact 3rd's Divine Keys, MC about to solo the entire verse. Anyway Honkai impact fic is an automatic 5 stars, with fate involved i'd give it a 10 stars if I could. Hoping to see Void Archives here
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