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Something strange is happening in Mist Haven. People are going missing, and the sky is falling! They say it is because of a strange group called Neverland. But what or who is behind these strange events? Way Back To Neverland will surprise you with its masterful storytelling, wit, and fantastic characters. Each page has been carefully crafted to create an air of mystery and leave you wanting more. I highly recommend giving this story a try, who knows you just might become...enchanted by it.
Okay, this took me a while, to be honest, a few parts of this novel felt not that relatable to me xD. I'm not SAYING IT'S BAD OR ANYTHING. Anyways, let's get into reviewing. Writing quality- The story is quite descriptive, but what I felt was lacking or maybe it's just how the author writes was the 'conversation descriptions'. Okay so, it's just enrapturing to see the descriptions while the convo is going. For example- He put down his tea cup, "You might not be right either, Mr. White" he continued as he clasped his hands, "Blah blah blah" Something like that, which I randomly came up with right now. Other than that I think it was nice. Stable updates- It's 6 chapters per week, that's great. Great work author! Keep fighting... Story Development- It's fast-paced in a good way, Some places there might be times you'll feel ''oh that's way too early or fast'' but it's all for a reason~ Let's go with that. Character Design- It's just the inceptive stage of this novel, so I won't really comment much on the characters because, in these types of novels, we have a lot to discover. World Background- The timeline the author chose is not too medieval but not modern either, that's my favourite timeline, to be honest. I think it's in the 1700s to 1800s if I am not wrong. However, I wonder if they have thematic elements in the story. Great work author~ Keep fighting, you are awesome!
This is one of the few stories I would give 5 stars. It hits all the major boxes. The writing is fantastic, the updates are consistent, the story develops beautifully, the characters are well written, and the background is descriptive. I've only dipped my toes in the tale so far though. To the author: I welcome you to look at my story "Avatar: Lingering Tensions" which is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". You could read the first chapter for some basic background but I write ALT in a way that you shouldn't feel too lost. However, it is a fan derivative of the "Avatar: The Last Airbender" animated series. Watching that gives even greater context to the tale.
I'm just a few chapters in but wow! I just had to drop my review😄. I've been looking for a book like this for so long. Every chapter I've read has been so worth it😊. Thank you so much for writing this novel, author.
Thanks for this amazing story, it is very impressive, keep it up kudos to you Author.
It is an excellent story, excellent concept, The writer lives in all cracters full of magic and a thrilling story. full 5 stars
I am liking what I'm seeing so far, good plot and interesting and compelling characters. Should be a joy to follow that in the future too! I recommend reading it!
A well-written story that really can be very much enjoyed, just don't binge on it too much. It's addicting!
The novel started with a bang! I love the main character, and the first chapter was enough to hook me! Keep up the good work, author!
Story is good and engaging so far only three to four characters are introduced but all the characters have their purposes to be in the novel unlike some, where a character end at most three to four chapters, grammar is also good ,I didn't find any mistake and the story is also engaging .
Added to library and very interested for more chapters to come. the story was quite unique and has a lot of potential that that author had point out. goodjob author!
Awesome book very engaging, love the characters and also I love the bond between Henry and Asher. Love that Asher is kind of learning his power. This novel truly has great potential also some may say its fast pace but I like it that way one of my guilty pleasure. Oh yeah the description are just perfect not too much nor too little
This book packs a punch. The story's engaging, the characters come alive, and the straightforward language makes it a breeze to dive into. Plus, there are moments that really make you ponder. If you're up for a solid, satisfying read, this is it. A full 5 stars.
Overall, it is a good work. I have read this book and I can say that it is addictive and captivating. Author should give more chapters please...
Asher is very silly haha. I'm a little confused why they call people 'sensei' if they have english names (not saying you can't) but I suppose it's set in a fantasy style place. This story sounds really interesting. Did/will henery ever grow back his hand??
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The synopsis really made me interested in the story. The pacing is good and its keeps you hooked. It really doesn't feel like this is your first book!
You're the kind of person to say 'Uhu this is my first book' and write a magnum opus. 🤣🤣 All I wanted to say is that your book is worthy of each and every view it got, and that your descriptions are good(aah, I'm jealous). I like your characters, your story and your writing quality. Style is ok, but that doesn't bother me much. Though, I'm not that content with your synopsis, you could always better it with some editing :) Kudos to you author! (I have suggested a rewritten version of your synopsis with the help if AI in the comment section down below. Do refer it if you prefer to make some changes).
The story has great potential to grow. I really enjoyed reading every part of it knowing that it is the Author's first work they have done an amazing job! It is one of those books that make you want to continue reading no matter when, how and where!
the writing style easy to read and showing great potential. As the story progresses, it will be interesting to see how the author develops the characters and their magical abilities. good job
The story outline is great, all you have to do is to work on your blurb. And beside that I liked your way of writing. Its has great potential. I will be reading it and will note out the critics
Early review. The story in itself is promising, and the magic system can evolve into something good depending on how the author writes it. I would suggest that the author improve his written skill while continuing the story at his own pace.
I think the story is really good. The writing is well done and easy to read. Even though it's just 3 chapters, I'm looking forward to more from you, author. Keep up the good work!
This book delivers big time. The story is catchy, and the characters jump off the page. It's written in plain language, so it's super approachable. There are bits that really make you stop and think, too. If you're in the mood for a solid read that won't let you down, this is it. Totally worth 5 stars.
To all my respected readers, its my first time writing a novel so you mah find many mistakes, it will be helpful if you mention them, Thank you and have a great reading 😇😇❤️
Something strange is happening in Mist Haven. People are going missing, and the sky is falling! They say it is because of a strange group called Neverland. But what or who is behind these strange events? Way Back To Neverland will surprise you with its masterful storytelling, wit, and fantastic characters. Each page has been carefully crafted to create an air of mystery and leave you wanting more. I highly recommend giving this story a try, who knows you just might become...enchanted by it.
Okay, this took me a while, to be honest, a few parts of this novel felt not that relatable to me xD. I'm not SAYING IT'S BAD OR ANYTHING. Anyways, let's get into reviewing. Writing quality- The story is quite descriptive, but what I felt was lacking or maybe it's just how the author writes was the 'conversation descriptions'. Okay so, it's just enrapturing to see the descriptions while the convo is going. For example- He put down his tea cup, "You might not be right either, Mr. White" he continued as he clasped his hands, "Blah blah blah" Something like that, which I randomly came up with right now. Other than that I think it was nice. Stable updates- It's 6 chapters per week, that's great. Great work author! Keep fighting... Story Development- It's fast-paced in a good way, Some places there might be times you'll feel ''oh that's way too early or fast'' but it's all for a reason~ Let's go with that. Character Design- It's just the inceptive stage of this novel, so I won't really comment much on the characters because, in these types of novels, we have a lot to discover. World Background- The timeline the author chose is not too medieval but not modern either, that's my favourite timeline, to be honest. I think it's in the 1700s to 1800s if I am not wrong. However, I wonder if they have thematic elements in the story. Great work author~ Keep fighting, you are awesome!
This is one of the few stories I would give 5 stars. It hits all the major boxes. The writing is fantastic, the updates are consistent, the story develops beautifully, the characters are well written, and the background is descriptive. I've only dipped my toes in the tale so far though. To the author: I welcome you to look at my story "Avatar: Lingering Tensions" which is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". You could read the first chapter for some basic background but I write ALT in a way that you shouldn't feel too lost. However, it is a fan derivative of the "Avatar: The Last Airbender" animated series. Watching that gives even greater context to the tale.
I'm just a few chapters in but wow! I just had to drop my review😄. I've been looking for a book like this for so long. Every chapter I've read has been so worth it😊. Thank you so much for writing this novel, author.
Thanks for this amazing story, it is very impressive, keep it up kudos to you Author.
It is an excellent story, excellent concept, The writer lives in all cracters full of magic and a thrilling story. full 5 stars
I am liking what I'm seeing so far, good plot and interesting and compelling characters. Should be a joy to follow that in the future too! I recommend reading it!
A well-written story that really can be very much enjoyed, just don't binge on it too much. It's addicting!
The novel started with a bang! I love the main character, and the first chapter was enough to hook me! Keep up the good work, author!
Story is good and engaging so far only three to four characters are introduced but all the characters have their purposes to be in the novel unlike some, where a character end at most three to four chapters, grammar is also good ,I didn't find any mistake and the story is also engaging .
Added to library and very interested for more chapters to come. the story was quite unique and has a lot of potential that that author had point out. goodjob author!
Awesome book very engaging, love the characters and also I love the bond between Henry and Asher. Love that Asher is kind of learning his power. This novel truly has great potential also some may say its fast pace but I like it that way one of my guilty pleasure. Oh yeah the description are just perfect not too much nor too little
This book packs a punch. The story's engaging, the characters come alive, and the straightforward language makes it a breeze to dive into. Plus, there are moments that really make you ponder. If you're up for a solid, satisfying read, this is it. A full 5 stars.
Overall, it is a good work. I have read this book and I can say that it is addictive and captivating. Author should give more chapters please...
Asher is very silly haha. I'm a little confused why they call people 'sensei' if they have english names (not saying you can't) but I suppose it's set in a fantasy style place. This story sounds really interesting. Did/will henery ever grow back his hand??
揭示劇透 The synopsis really made me interested in the story. The pacing is good and its keeps you hooked. It really doesn't feel like this is your first book!
You're the kind of person to say 'Uhu this is my first book' and write a magnum opus. 🤣🤣 All I wanted to say is that your book is worthy of each and every view it got, and that your descriptions are good(aah, I'm jealous). I like your characters, your story and your writing quality. Style is ok, but that doesn't bother me much. Though, I'm not that content with your synopsis, you could always better it with some editing :) Kudos to you author! (I have suggested a rewritten version of your synopsis with the help if AI in the comment section down below. Do refer it if you prefer to make some changes).
The story has great potential to grow. I really enjoyed reading every part of it knowing that it is the Author's first work they have done an amazing job! It is one of those books that make you want to continue reading no matter when, how and where!
the writing style easy to read and showing great potential. As the story progresses, it will be interesting to see how the author develops the characters and their magical abilities. good job
The story outline is great, all you have to do is to work on your blurb. And beside that I liked your way of writing. Its has great potential. I will be reading it and will note out the critics
Early review. The story in itself is promising, and the magic system can evolve into something good depending on how the author writes it. I would suggest that the author improve his written skill while continuing the story at his own pace.
I think the story is really good. The writing is well done and easy to read. Even though it's just 3 chapters, I'm looking forward to more from you, author. Keep up the good work!
This book delivers big time. The story is catchy, and the characters jump off the page. It's written in plain language, so it's super approachable. There are bits that really make you stop and think, too. If you're in the mood for a solid read that won't let you down, this is it. Totally worth 5 stars.
To all my respected readers, its my first time writing a novel so you mah find many mistakes, it will be helpful if you mention them, Thank you and have a great reading 😇😇❤️