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The author here, welcome to my first fiction, I would appreciate feedback on my work, thank you for reading. I'm a Navy veteran working towards my BBA degree, while I'm on that I'll be writing fiction for you guys.
What a fantastic read! The initial chapters are gripping, reeling readers in effortlessly. Your knack for crafting engaging narration is evident. The characters are relatable and have a ton of fun. Keep up the excellent work.
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This book packs a punch. The story's engaging, the characters come alive, and the straightforward language makes it a breeze to dive into. Plus, there are moments that really make you ponder. If you're up for a solid, satisfying read, this is it. A full 5 stars.
It's quite an intriguing read if slow at times. The developments of the characters is a fairly rewarding experience; while the actual story progression is a bit all over the place, minding some obvious relationship development that happens between the characters. The writing quality is better than I expect for this type of content, while it also has its significant update speed. The characters are fairly fleshed out with more room to grow; same with the world, as it has more to explore upon itself.
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original The First Wizard: Advent of the Arcane
In the mystical world of Aerden, where monsters, divines, and demons roam freely, a new path is emerging—the path of the Wizards. A Priest of Hadrian who seeks truths beyond the limits of his faith. Frustrated by the secrecy of the established Faiths, he decides to break free from his tethers and embark on a quest to unravel the esoteric nature of Mana, the mystical energy that courses through the land. In his pursuit of truth, he joins forces with Alana, a remarkable young woman who embodies the essence of the unwavering spirit—a princess, sailor, and warrior all in one. Together, they venture into the unknown, driven by a shared obsession to uncover the mysteries of Aerden. Their journey is not without its challenges. As personalities clash and obsessions entwine, the priest and Alana forge an extraordinary bond that challenges the hidden powers of Aerden. Along the way, they encounter friends and foes, face perilous trials, and delve deeper into the secrets of their world. I invite you to immerse yourself in a captivating narrative filled with twists and turns, as our protagonists navigate a maddening journey of revelations upon revelations. Prepare to be spellbound as you follow these companions on their unforgettable quest—a journey that will forever change the fate of Aerden and the destiny of its inhabitants. This is a story of enlightenment through a land of hidden truths and harsh realities. This is the story of Godrick, "The First Wizard."12 Chs 9 收藏
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The First Wizard: Advent of the Arcane
Fantasy · Jaxobel_Hernandez