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The Perfect Planner.(GOD)

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Newton Waves looked rather strangely at the picture of the young girl on the laptop.
" You do not know Ena Mensah?" Fred his assistant asked him looking surprised.
" She is the most beautiful ( she has one dark brown eyes and one blue eye), intelligent and hardworking model in the industry, who came to Hollywood last month." He talked about this lady as an idol.
" As far as I know, she is on record as the most beautiful influential woman. Unfortunately, she is still looking for her real parents." Fred ended his speech happily.


Racism is ongoing in the 21st century. Marriage between the black and the white is still not common in some parts of our world. Some whites still think they are superior to the black while some blacks think they are inferior to them. In this book, you would find how love brought two people of different colors together but racism chased them away from their residence...

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Abraham_Otsiwa

Great piece. Prolific writer. This novel reflects on slavery and freedom. Can freedom befriend slavery? Can freedom rescue slavery? A story of love and bravery and how God orders the steps of the pure in heart.

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jmjackie

Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next. This does deal with a lot of heavy topics, maybe a warning for the readers might be great as well :) But still looking forward to see what happens next.

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alu_sachi

Good plot, the work has great potential. looking forward for more updates

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vorlefan

This is a heavy story that treats an important topic in our society. And the perspective we get is a good one to enlighten the problem. To improve: Grammar: It has some issues that break the flow of the reader. Be it in the structure, or grammatical points to review. In this case, I recommend you use Grammarly and Wordtune for future rewriting. Depth: For a heavy topic, it lacks a bit of metaphor and inner work in the thoughts and little actions of each character for a higher connection with the reader. For that, I would suggest you watch the tv show: 'Lovecraft Country'. All in all, keep up the good work!

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Sweet_Vanilla553

I suggest you to download grammerly and clear the unnecessary spaces among word and marks. It will be a big help to your quality. So far, that was what I wanted to tell you... Keep going author... Kudos!!!

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Maxemillian

good plot, intresting read. overall a good novel, the only thing that could be better is the writing quality.

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7inkz_etls

Haven't met racists for long. The way author builds conversations makes you feel like laughing. I mean, the story makes you laugh when Page is talking to her husband. Want to read more. I can also advice the author to explain characters more than white and black. Maybe their height, what they are wearing, etc. Keep up good work author.

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