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Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation

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作者: D2_E2_V2

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The Crown of the Kingdom is purchased in blood and bodies alone.
Once the Kingdom of Ethereo was the fuel of the world, but times have changed and it has fallen from Grace, and only dust remains.
Torn apart by the civil war, five kingdoms under the legends of rebellion rise and fight against each other.
The victor of this war will be remembered as the lord of wits, gold, tactics and people. For that bloo and trust must spill for all.
Which kingdom will rise to see themselves rule over the White Throne?
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Deztrre

As far as i can tell it is a good story. No major errors in Grammar or story, no real plotholes that are obvious. Not for me, but if you like the Tags give it a read.

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satoru_gojo_6121

The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month. The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.

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aniwatcher

The story is pretty solid, It was really good, there are two problems i would like to address 1:Consistency[img=update] 2:Pacing this is all

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WEBUniverse

After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.

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