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Прекрасная работа. Мне всегда нравилась эта история, жаль, что достойных фанфиков по ней не так много. Этот, к счастью, не из их числа. Спасибо за Ваш труд и успехов в дальнейшем.
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I really like it. I hope it gets picked up again. One of my favorite here, definitely a must read.😊👍👌
I really like the setting the Author is using but i get the feeling that he read the books half hearted since a lot of things that would be important to explain or at least mention are just left out.
I’ll write a more detailed review another time when I’m on my computer and not my phone, but this is one of my favourite PJO fics so far. I haven’t seen a son of Aphrodite mc before, and there aren’t a lot of ”morally questionable” main lead in those fics. The borderline anti-hero type I mean. So this is a breath of fresh air, I also find myself enjoying the fact that this fic is set decades before the plot starts. Lots of time to do lots of things. Anyways, love this fic, and I really hope the author can keep writing this one to the end. I do believe that this story can reach very big milestones in both reader count and library-logging.
I’m on chaoter 8 right now, but can someone, or the author answer my question? Does the main characters girlfriend kill herself after she kills him? Because if not, it would suck if she went on to have more boyfriends.
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hey author just finished your loki fanfic and started this fanfic.... ....................................................... .... ........
Get to reading this story. Its got an MC with drive and ambition who is absolutely ruthless and deep into the dark side with enough charm and rationality to make you want for him to succeed.
Hey author, considering the fact that I like your other novel a lot, I have high expectations from this one. This is the first Percy Jackson fanfiction I have come across that starts from before WW2 so looking forward to the plot developments you initiate. Good Luck.
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truly enjoyed ur novel, thanks. and i hope he treats that girl better(whatever her name was) sadly i won't be able to see that day cuz this is my last day with webnovel. honestly ur novel was really good. i will miss it
The novel was great. The mc became op fast but it was a good novel nonetheless. Anywho i had fun so i am going to try percy Jackson. See ya[img=recommend]
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Hey author, considering the fact that I like your other novel a lot, I have high expectations from this one. This is the first Percy Jackson fanfiction I have come across that starts from before WW2 so looking forward to the plot developments you initiate. Good Luck.
I haven't read it yet but this synopsis deserves A 5 star review. That being said, I'm gonna read it now so keep updating! Get those chapters out there my friend.
Love it author. Wish you would update more often but what can u do, it's fine --------------------------------------------------------------------------
Awesome story, with great progression and thankfully a non-angst or very emotional Mc, which is common in other stories, and an intelligent and opportunist Mc. Continue the great work please! Looking forward towards more😊
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This is probably one of the best Percy Jackson stories on this site. I really like that he isn't one of the children of the big 3 nor is he related to Percy as I've seen that a lot. The mc isn't a goody two shoes and is instead a ruthless and manipulative person. Overall, I've high expectations from this one.
I came here after reading your Loki story, great start imo, while i'm not that fan of ruthless protagonist , yours seems quite logical in his action (and not just a psycho-murderer ) so that's great , i'm hoping the next chapter come soon, see ya <3
More chapters are on patreon for paid. ,...........,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,. ,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.
Прекрасная работа. Мне всегда нравилась эта история, жаль, что достойных фанфиков по ней не так много. Этот, к счастью, не из их числа. Спасибо за Ваш труд и успехов в дальнейшем.
good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I really like it. I hope it gets picked up again. One of my favorite here, definitely a must read.😊👍👌
I really like the setting the Author is using but i get the feeling that he read the books half hearted since a lot of things that would be important to explain or at least mention are just left out.
I’ll write a more detailed review another time when I’m on my computer and not my phone, but this is one of my favourite PJO fics so far. I haven’t seen a son of Aphrodite mc before, and there aren’t a lot of ”morally questionable” main lead in those fics. The borderline anti-hero type I mean. So this is a breath of fresh air, I also find myself enjoying the fact that this fic is set decades before the plot starts. Lots of time to do lots of things. Anyways, love this fic, and I really hope the author can keep writing this one to the end. I do believe that this story can reach very big milestones in both reader count and library-logging.
I’m on chaoter 8 right now, but can someone, or the author answer my question? Does the main characters girlfriend kill herself after she kills him? Because if not, it would suck if she went on to have more boyfriends.
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hey author just finished your loki fanfic and started this fanfic.... ....................................................... .... ........
Get to reading this story. Its got an MC with drive and ambition who is absolutely ruthless and deep into the dark side with enough charm and rationality to make you want for him to succeed.
Hey author, considering the fact that I like your other novel a lot, I have high expectations from this one. This is the first Percy Jackson fanfiction I have come across that starts from before WW2 so looking forward to the plot developments you initiate. Good Luck.
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truly enjoyed ur novel, thanks. and i hope he treats that girl better(whatever her name was) sadly i won't be able to see that day cuz this is my last day with webnovel. honestly ur novel was really good. i will miss it
The novel was great. The mc became op fast but it was a good novel nonetheless. Anywho i had fun so i am going to try percy Jackson. See ya[img=recommend]
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Hey author, considering the fact that I like your other novel a lot, I have high expectations from this one. This is the first Percy Jackson fanfiction I have come across that starts from before WW2 so looking forward to the plot developments you initiate. Good Luck.
I haven't read it yet but this synopsis deserves A 5 star review. That being said, I'm gonna read it now so keep updating! Get those chapters out there my friend.
Love it author. Wish you would update more often but what can u do, it's fine --------------------------------------------------------------------------
Awesome story, with great progression and thankfully a non-angst or very emotional Mc, which is common in other stories, and an intelligent and opportunist Mc. Continue the great work please! Looking forward towards more😊
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This is probably one of the best Percy Jackson stories on this site. I really like that he isn't one of the children of the big 3 nor is he related to Percy as I've seen that a lot. The mc isn't a goody two shoes and is instead a ruthless and manipulative person. Overall, I've high expectations from this one.
I came here after reading your Loki story, great start imo, while i'm not that fan of ruthless protagonist , yours seems quite logical in his action (and not just a psycho-murderer ) so that's great , i'm hoping the next chapter come soon, see ya <3
More chapters are on patreon for paid. ,...........,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,. ,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.