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I expect a different fate of Radiance. Ho-ho-h-.............................................................................................
A very nice novel I hope it doesn't get dropped anyways I am going to write random letters now so I can post the review gajqysfhsjszygwjwsushwhwbrvrgejwjshshshwbebejejdufyfjsjwjwbevcrgekssiyftcydjsjsjsvoidgodhwjwhshhsdhhebev
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Not bad. But some improvements, On writing quality. Oh, And also, Some improvements on the story saw plot. It's kind of going too fast, In my own personal opinion,so yeah. And yeah not bad.
Honestly... I really like this book, it's great! I like Hollow Knight, and i also like the crossover you did for this book. I am not the best at giving a rewiew lol.
Probably the best book I’ve read in a while (Your book is the reason I became a hollow knight fan).
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keep up the great work I'm enjoying this story so far please keep up the great work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It’s a good book but the writing quality is what is holding it back. Please use grammarly and read over the paragraphs that you are writing.
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i admire the idea and attempt, but this is very poorly put together and just feel like another rushed or normal fanfic that you see everywhere, and considering how long you want to make this fanfic I figured I would at least make a normal review
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Its very good. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
To be honest Hollow Knight is my favourite game, so I appreciate a fanfic about it, let's see how you develop this marvelous world. For now I will give a 5 to support it, but I may change it later depending
Too bad this site gives exp for reviews. End up with inflated ratings. Anyways, positives - it's in hollow knight. Has a gacha in system. Negatives - you have to know a lot about both games to understand the story (especially hollow knight map). Gacha looks to be the type that works way too conveniently. The mc is a lil dumb and unresponsive to his environment.
this is amazing I hope it isn't dropped if you see this author your doing a good job keep up the good work can't wait to see where this story goes from here
If you are reading this book that means that you are either a Hollow Knight fan (Like me) or are just searching for a new book to read. This book has a lot planned Btw the Mc will stay in hollow knight for a while before he goes to a new world.
I expect a different fate of Radiance. Ho-ho-h-.............................................................................................
A very nice novel I hope it doesn't get dropped anyways I am going to write random letters now so I can post the review gajqysfhsjszygwjwsushwhwbrvrgejwjshshshwbebejejdufyfjsjwjwbevcrgekssiyftcydjsjsjsvoidgodhwjwhshhsdhhebev
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Not bad. But some improvements, On writing quality. Oh, And also, Some improvements on the story saw plot. It's kind of going too fast, In my own personal opinion,so yeah. And yeah not bad.
Honestly... I really like this book, it's great! I like Hollow Knight, and i also like the crossover you did for this book. I am not the best at giving a rewiew lol.
Probably the best book I’ve read in a while (Your book is the reason I became a hollow knight fan).
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It’s a good book but the writing quality is what is holding it back. Please use grammarly and read over the paragraphs that you are writing.
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i admire the idea and attempt, but this is very poorly put together and just feel like another rushed or normal fanfic that you see everywhere, and considering how long you want to make this fanfic I figured I would at least make a normal review
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To be honest Hollow Knight is my favourite game, so I appreciate a fanfic about it, let's see how you develop this marvelous world. For now I will give a 5 to support it, but I may change it later depending
Too bad this site gives exp for reviews. End up with inflated ratings. Anyways, positives - it's in hollow knight. Has a gacha in system. Negatives - you have to know a lot about both games to understand the story (especially hollow knight map). Gacha looks to be the type that works way too conveniently. The mc is a lil dumb and unresponsive to his environment.
this is amazing I hope it isn't dropped if you see this author your doing a good job keep up the good work can't wait to see where this story goes from here
If you are reading this book that means that you are either a Hollow Knight fan (Like me) or are just searching for a new book to read. This book has a lot planned Btw the Mc will stay in hollow knight for a while before he goes to a new world.