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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
The over all story was great if I have to say fo my self translation quality was not bad but there wer some mistakes as in part he/she also the way characters were described was a good work if I must say 👌 I personally liked the fact MC was not a total scum 😕😕 and I liked his personality 😋 well at least he did not have a 100 wife's or something 😅 like the fanfic 👍 gave you a power stone💰 nice work there buddy 💕💕💞
Well well well, here we meet again my fellow Seekers of Adventure time fanfictions, once again we all have been deceived by the cover and first 2-3 chapters implicating some Adventure time shenanigans. In the end we got a Gamer trope Main Character with edginess only challengable by his wattpad predecessors on a journey through multiverse to find perfect waifus and Catch them all:tm: . One of the biggest flaws of his book is probably terribly rushed pacing. The essence of "The Gamer":tm: trope is not the conquest of unparaveled beauties by letting the Protagonist META his way in first 5 chapters, the essential part of above-mentioned trope is the Struggle. The foundation that made the base of The Gamer genre what it is today was not harem hunting but rather a way of realistically portraying character taking his first steps into a brand new world, struggle to survive and slowly but surely improve himself into becoming the apex predator. The whole concept of slow growth has been thrown out of the window in 2nd chapter in the book as the Author decided to break any sort of balance and fairnes by giving the Protagonist most ridiculous and unfair rewards possible(from OP weapons to "legendary/mystic" skills). Another flaw is of course the waste of the world described, especialy during "arc" of Adventure Time and Harry Potter, both of these "arc" feels extremely plain and after an attempt to re-read the book I find those particular "arcs" extremely boring as nothing really of high value is brought except for The Gamer and multiverse shenanigans. But let's get over this agony of review. The Epic of Azathoth suffers from what many other books using the Gamer trope suffer from: plainness and boringness. The major advantage of the book among the tide is that Author actually tried to be original and present to the Reader a new horizon of possibilities, something impossible to happen among the certain books(RWBY/DXD fanfictions) and well the writing quality is pretty decent. Maybe one day Author will unleash the book's potential but as for now we can only hope
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ehmm,, ist it the gamer trying somthing title, since when its changed . .... .... .... ....... . ..... ...... ... .... ...... .... ........ ......
mc sees family getting gunned by people on motorcycles, first thought is how good looking the mom is. mc is not op by personal strength but by getting babysit by system. i hate this fic and the mc
The story itself is great, what really ruins it is the grammar. The further into the novel, the more broken it became. If that's something you can stand, I recommend this story. The grammar is just too broken for me.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Writing quality : 3/5. Writing quality is decent, atleast above average compared to other stories on this site, nothing to complain about really Story : 2/5. edgy... too edgy (for my taste that is) Character : Edgy and Confusing Update stability : Pretty good? (I guess?) World background : Idk... , At one point he was near a city, city got blasted by nuclear weapon or something?, he... survived? no radiation, no shockwave no nothing he just walk away to random dieection and by chance found a dungeon, fought a god found a chest when opening it, got transported again into another dungeon? wut? bruh... im confusion I really want to like this story especialy because of the first few chapter is decent enough, but it's been boring, nonsensical, and overall, too edgy for my taste
Eu gostei da história, o protagonista é bastante poderoso, e ninguém é ameaça e não tem drama desnecessário, mas acho que em alguma parte da história a THE GAMER foi esquecida....
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Me gusto como empezó, pero luego de la nada el autor creo que se dejó llevar por el típico protagonista soy un femenino y soy el más malo de todos no tengo ninguna emoción y eso fue todo claro puede ser para el desarrollo de personajes pero me perdió. Aclarando que es una buena historia si te gustan los protagonistas nerviosos está es para ti.
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The story is good and have an stable update(not daily mind you but still decent). It’s a story about an OP MC and no nerfs so far… Actually this is enough for me to give an opportunity to any story. I’m giving the 5 start the author improve and you can see it each chapter(author dont make me look bad, I’m watching you 🧐).
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Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchísimas gracias tus capítulos son los mejores
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Começou bem, mas agora está lento? Como uma Fic de Hora de aventura, fiquei muito impressionado, continue por favor. . . . . . . . . . .. . . .
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I was hoping to find an adventure time ff at last, and it started off right ... But this just keeps getting farther and farther away and it becomes so absurdly boring. you wanted it to get strong little by little, and with enough reason, but here it jumps from basic to op in 1 chapter. I think many wanted to see what an adventure time ff would be like, and were totally disappointed ... Nothing more to say ... terrible.
I liked the beginning, he stsrted out with one op skill and I thought “wow thats a strong skill if he grinds the levels out and gets good support skills for it!” but then When he uses the skill it seems like it should be at around lv75 by the amout of power and drain it has on him when he uses it (he can pretty much use the blood of the things he kills with little to no mana drain and just has a huge blood pool now that can deal strong poison damage off one hit). Thats just his first skill within like 6 chapters he gets more op skills that ar basically around lv 60-80 in stregth while being lv 1 and kills a god while being lv7. . .a weakened one but a god is a god. . .and the MC is the BIGGEST EDGE LORD IV’E SEEN IN A WHILE SO BE WARNED! He also is waaaaay to lucky when he rolls for loot from missions and gets not one but TWO weapons that can destroy basically anything (one of them is so strong to destroy the world by the way) and gets a SSS rank armor while Wanting to be a berserker (berserkers usually wear little to no armor and usually stick to hide or leather for armor) he also can just make any skill he wants with like at most a hour of effort. So with that being said I would not read this if you like your stories to have character growth, BUT if you want a dumb “I don’t wanna have to think or be in my feels” story give it a try!
the novel is starting off very well and I pointed out an issue for the author to correct and he fixed it so that gave me hope in this novel not being dropped
This is not harem bruh, 3 girl only polygamy 3 or 4 wife are polygamy that's use in our world so delete part you say this harem . It's only normal polygamy here , many men marry 4 wife now so it's normal even in many country just some people cannot accept it yet . harem category have 4 type small harem 5 to 7 wife harem 7 to 15 wife huge harem 15 to 30 wife massive harem 30 to ???? wife Btw why now in our world we can marry 4 wife ? because now women are to many 60% people in this world are women now , I don't why men suddenly decrease
It started great but the main reason why I left is that the story started with a great idea and then the author made sure to kill all vibe of immersion by doing absurd jokes ( those type of jokes that are embarrasing to the point where if a friend made the same I would cut all contact with him the next day ) . I also gave 3 stars on writting as the quality is really reaaally low, Stability of Updates 3 stars but it's also quite slow to update and Story Development 2 stars as I felt no story immersion at all .
it sucks. the story is barely legible, and painful to follow and likes to leave out info whenever possible.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
The over all story was great if I have to say fo my self translation quality was not bad but there wer some mistakes as in part he/she also the way characters were described was a good work if I must say 👌 I personally liked the fact MC was not a total scum 😕😕 and I liked his personality 😋 well at least he did not have a 100 wife's or something 😅 like the fanfic 👍 gave you a power stone💰 nice work there buddy 💕💕💞
Well well well, here we meet again my fellow Seekers of Adventure time fanfictions, once again we all have been deceived by the cover and first 2-3 chapters implicating some Adventure time shenanigans. In the end we got a Gamer trope Main Character with edginess only challengable by his wattpad predecessors on a journey through multiverse to find perfect waifus and Catch them all:tm: . One of the biggest flaws of his book is probably terribly rushed pacing. The essence of "The Gamer":tm: trope is not the conquest of unparaveled beauties by letting the Protagonist META his way in first 5 chapters, the essential part of above-mentioned trope is the Struggle. The foundation that made the base of The Gamer genre what it is today was not harem hunting but rather a way of realistically portraying character taking his first steps into a brand new world, struggle to survive and slowly but surely improve himself into becoming the apex predator. The whole concept of slow growth has been thrown out of the window in 2nd chapter in the book as the Author decided to break any sort of balance and fairnes by giving the Protagonist most ridiculous and unfair rewards possible(from OP weapons to "legendary/mystic" skills). Another flaw is of course the waste of the world described, especialy during "arc" of Adventure Time and Harry Potter, both of these "arc" feels extremely plain and after an attempt to re-read the book I find those particular "arcs" extremely boring as nothing really of high value is brought except for The Gamer and multiverse shenanigans. But let's get over this agony of review. The Epic of Azathoth suffers from what many other books using the Gamer trope suffer from: plainness and boringness. The major advantage of the book among the tide is that Author actually tried to be original and present to the Reader a new horizon of possibilities, something impossible to happen among the certain books(RWBY/DXD fanfictions) and well the writing quality is pretty decent. Maybe one day Author will unleash the book's potential but as for now we can only hope
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ehmm,, ist it the gamer trying somthing title, since when its changed . .... .... .... ....... . ..... ...... ... .... ...... .... ........ ......
mc sees family getting gunned by people on motorcycles, first thought is how good looking the mom is. mc is not op by personal strength but by getting babysit by system. i hate this fic and the mc
The story itself is great, what really ruins it is the grammar. The further into the novel, the more broken it became. If that's something you can stand, I recommend this story. The grammar is just too broken for me.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Writing quality : 3/5. Writing quality is decent, atleast above average compared to other stories on this site, nothing to complain about really Story : 2/5. edgy... too edgy (for my taste that is) Character : Edgy and Confusing Update stability : Pretty good? (I guess?) World background : Idk... , At one point he was near a city, city got blasted by nuclear weapon or something?, he... survived? no radiation, no shockwave no nothing he just walk away to random dieection and by chance found a dungeon, fought a god found a chest when opening it, got transported again into another dungeon? wut? bruh... im confusion I really want to like this story especialy because of the first few chapter is decent enough, but it's been boring, nonsensical, and overall, too edgy for my taste
Eu gostei da história, o protagonista é bastante poderoso, e ninguém é ameaça e não tem drama desnecessário, mas acho que em alguma parte da história a THE GAMER foi esquecida....
揭示劇透 Me gusto como empezó, pero luego de la nada el autor creo que se dejó llevar por el típico protagonista soy un femenino y soy el más malo de todos no tengo ninguna emoción y eso fue todo claro puede ser para el desarrollo de personajes pero me perdió. Aclarando que es una buena historia si te gustan los protagonistas nerviosos está es para ti.
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The story is good and have an stable update(not daily mind you but still decent). It’s a story about an OP MC and no nerfs so far… Actually this is enough for me to give an opportunity to any story. I’m giving the 5 start the author improve and you can see it each chapter(author dont make me look bad, I’m watching you 🧐).
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Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchísimas gracias tus capítulos son los mejores
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Começou bem, mas agora está lento? Como uma Fic de Hora de aventura, fiquei muito impressionado, continue por favor. . . . . . . . . . .. . . .
going forward with it, it's a nice story hoping it goes great. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
I was hoping to find an adventure time ff at last, and it started off right ... But this just keeps getting farther and farther away and it becomes so absurdly boring. you wanted it to get strong little by little, and with enough reason, but here it jumps from basic to op in 1 chapter. I think many wanted to see what an adventure time ff would be like, and were totally disappointed ... Nothing more to say ... terrible.
I liked the beginning, he stsrted out with one op skill and I thought “wow thats a strong skill if he grinds the levels out and gets good support skills for it!” but then When he uses the skill it seems like it should be at around lv75 by the amout of power and drain it has on him when he uses it (he can pretty much use the blood of the things he kills with little to no mana drain and just has a huge blood pool now that can deal strong poison damage off one hit). Thats just his first skill within like 6 chapters he gets more op skills that ar basically around lv 60-80 in stregth while being lv 1 and kills a god while being lv7. . .a weakened one but a god is a god. . .and the MC is the BIGGEST EDGE LORD IV’E SEEN IN A WHILE SO BE WARNED! He also is waaaaay to lucky when he rolls for loot from missions and gets not one but TWO weapons that can destroy basically anything (one of them is so strong to destroy the world by the way) and gets a SSS rank armor while Wanting to be a berserker (berserkers usually wear little to no armor and usually stick to hide or leather for armor) he also can just make any skill he wants with like at most a hour of effort. So with that being said I would not read this if you like your stories to have character growth, BUT if you want a dumb “I don’t wanna have to think or be in my feels” story give it a try!
the novel is starting off very well and I pointed out an issue for the author to correct and he fixed it so that gave me hope in this novel not being dropped
This is not harem bruh, 3 girl only polygamy 3 or 4 wife are polygamy that's use in our world so delete part you say this harem . It's only normal polygamy here , many men marry 4 wife now so it's normal even in many country just some people cannot accept it yet . harem category have 4 type small harem 5 to 7 wife harem 7 to 15 wife huge harem 15 to 30 wife massive harem 30 to ???? wife Btw why now in our world we can marry 4 wife ? because now women are to many 60% people in this world are women now , I don't why men suddenly decrease
It started great but the main reason why I left is that the story started with a great idea and then the author made sure to kill all vibe of immersion by doing absurd jokes ( those type of jokes that are embarrasing to the point where if a friend made the same I would cut all contact with him the next day ) . I also gave 3 stars on writting as the quality is really reaaally low, Stability of Updates 3 stars but it's also quite slow to update and Story Development 2 stars as I felt no story immersion at all .
it sucks. the story is barely legible, and painful to follow and likes to leave out info whenever possible.