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I will outright say the author makes excellent novels most of which are 4.0-4.5 stars but the reason he gets a 1 is he never finishes his stories as almost every story he has he puts up a chapter saying he lost motivation or another excuse before dropping the novel
The m.c. is averse to r**e, but he isn't averse to it when the system is the one doing it. (By brainwashing girls into loving him). And the story for the most part is shaped with an incel mindset, I.e. - only "female" virgins are worthy of love, - women should be forced to only "love" one man in their life. - 'females' who cheat should be put to death. - r**e is the highest degree of crime a human could possibly commit. .... Idk what more the story hides, but I'm stopping here, @ Chapter 5 ---- I don't mind reading a story about an evil piece of 💩. But i hate it when the story / author doesn't own up to it.
I like the wholesome and kingdom building aspects....................................................................................................................................... (O///O)
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Overall another good novel with a few grammar issues her or there but nothing serious. The main problem I have is just like all his other novels the author starts a good novel and either puts it on hiatus or has it listed as slow updates which sucks because he is pretty good
If you're looking for a novel with childish thoughts, I highly recommend it, but if you're not, don't read it because it's boring.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
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Just finished the latest chapter 54 (Though 53-54 are not chapters) the story is very enjoyable, I saw a 1 star review that has a lot of likes and it made me almost not read it, just goes to show that you should try for yourself instead of judging from what others say, I'm not sure if the guy that made the review even read more than 2 chapters. I'm sad to see that this story might have been dropped from the latest author notes at least and I hope it is continued since it is a fun read. I would recommend at least trying it past the first few chapters
I love it and it is In my opinion the best marvel fanfic and is simply amazing the characters are done well also I love warhammer and it is one of the only warhammer fanfic and pls don’t drop.
Can you add Polaris Lorna Dane And Psylocke Elizabeth Braddock to the Story
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loving it so far the pacing is good the story is really interesting can't wait to see where it goes from here and to see how all the characters will fit in.
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Great find, read on a whim and now hooked Really looking forward to more........... .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. ..............
I quite like the story, the only problem is that he doesn't do anything to build his kingdom or what you call it. Despite that I really like it.
Pues con todo lo que EH leído me gusta mucho el desarrollo que lleva el mc ya que no se volvió dominado de un cap a otro también el personaje de nezuko es original ya que poco se ve de ella o su mundo en historias de sistema pero quiero agregar algo por que el mc no a sido detectado por seres como odin o fénix entre otros ya que por lo que se esas entidades son videntes
Очень сильно понравилось данный фанфик[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Сюжет пока что хорошо идет,особенно та часть где есть +18🥰🥰🥰,данный фанфик позволил мне расслабиться,к тому же читать его одно удовольствие,автору желаю удачи и вдохновение
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-------------------------------------------------------------- Love this story. Don't know much about Warhammer, but love the story none the less. --------------------------------------------------------------
Hey author when are yer gonna start have'n ‘da main characta turn into a ork? an' make ‘em start a WAAAGH!!! Also i doroughly enjoyed dis book an’ kan't wait for more chaptaz about it ‘da only komplaint i have iz Zeta doesn't use ‘da ork race an’ dere powa uv belief hopefully ‘n ‘da future 'e trolls ‘da avengaz an’ his enemiez by use'n ‘da orks Zeta needs more DAKKA
yuppers, xp :D --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very good....................................................................................................................................
Esta muy interesante espero los siguientes capítulos de esta maravillosa Historia , por cierto estaría bueno traer a un primarca como compañero o un salamandra
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I will outright say the author makes excellent novels most of which are 4.0-4.5 stars but the reason he gets a 1 is he never finishes his stories as almost every story he has he puts up a chapter saying he lost motivation or another excuse before dropping the novel
The m.c. is averse to r**e, but he isn't averse to it when the system is the one doing it. (By brainwashing girls into loving him). And the story for the most part is shaped with an incel mindset, I.e. - only "female" virgins are worthy of love, - women should be forced to only "love" one man in their life. - 'females' who cheat should be put to death. - r**e is the highest degree of crime a human could possibly commit. .... Idk what more the story hides, but I'm stopping here, @ Chapter 5 ---- I don't mind reading a story about an evil piece of 💩. But i hate it when the story / author doesn't own up to it.
I like the wholesome and kingdom building aspects....................................................................................................................................... (O///O)
,...,..............,^_________^༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ༼ つ ◕‿◕ ༽つ
Overall another good novel with a few grammar issues her or there but nothing serious. The main problem I have is just like all his other novels the author starts a good novel and either puts it on hiatus or has it listed as slow updates which sucks because he is pretty good
If you're looking for a novel with childish thoughts, I highly recommend it, but if you're not, don't read it because it's boring.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
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Just finished the latest chapter 54 (Though 53-54 are not chapters) the story is very enjoyable, I saw a 1 star review that has a lot of likes and it made me almost not read it, just goes to show that you should try for yourself instead of judging from what others say, I'm not sure if the guy that made the review even read more than 2 chapters. I'm sad to see that this story might have been dropped from the latest author notes at least and I hope it is continued since it is a fun read. I would recommend at least trying it past the first few chapters
I love it and it is In my opinion the best marvel fanfic and is simply amazing the characters are done well also I love warhammer and it is one of the only warhammer fanfic and pls don’t drop.
Can you add Polaris Lorna Dane And Psylocke Elizabeth Braddock to the Story
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loving it so far the pacing is good the story is really interesting can't wait to see where it goes from here and to see how all the characters will fit in.
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Great find, read on a whim and now hooked Really looking forward to more........... .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. .............. ..............
I quite like the story, the only problem is that he doesn't do anything to build his kingdom or what you call it. Despite that I really like it.
Pues con todo lo que EH leído me gusta mucho el desarrollo que lleva el mc ya que no se volvió dominado de un cap a otro también el personaje de nezuko es original ya que poco se ve de ella o su mundo en historias de sistema pero quiero agregar algo por que el mc no a sido detectado por seres como odin o fénix entre otros ya que por lo que se esas entidades son videntes
Очень сильно понравилось данный фанфик[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]Сюжет пока что хорошо идет,особенно та часть где есть +18🥰🥰🥰,данный фанфик позволил мне расслабиться,к тому же читать его одно удовольствие,автору желаю удачи и вдохновение
Please keep writing vvvvvvvg33bbgfndtngdhtdhtdhdthdthdthdrhtdhdthtdhtdjdtjsrjsrhsrhsrjdrhsrhsrhsrhrsysrhsrhrshsrhrshsrgsrgsryrsyrsgrsysrhsrhsrgsry
-------------------------------------------------------------- Love this story. Don't know much about Warhammer, but love the story none the less. --------------------------------------------------------------
Hey author when are yer gonna start have'n ‘da main characta turn into a ork? an' make ‘em start a WAAAGH!!! Also i doroughly enjoyed dis book an’ kan't wait for more chaptaz about it ‘da only komplaint i have iz Zeta doesn't use ‘da ork race an’ dere powa uv belief hopefully ‘n ‘da future 'e trolls ‘da avengaz an’ his enemiez by use'n ‘da orks Zeta needs more DAKKA
yuppers, xp :D --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very good....................................................................................................................................
Esta muy interesante espero los siguientes capítulos de esta maravillosa Historia , por cierto estaría bueno traer a un primarca como compañero o un salamandra
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