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this is great. well written. the mc is not op from the get go. the romance might be a bit fast for some but i don't feel it's too forced. i like the grey logical mc.
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marvel and warhammer are 2 things i never thought to see combined in a story and im enjoying the result of this combination i cant wait to read more when the next chapter comes out keep up the good work👍
For me its very good fanfic. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Good enough to read despite not knowing anything about warhammer 40k........................................................................
this the some stupid story i have read so far it i'm dropping it after alone 2 chapters in.
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MC's a psycho who kills anyone simply for his own pleasure. So... No. I know that a lot of people here have long been corrupted by various fanfics or novels and think that being a psycho, feeling no guilt when reading a very "intense" gory scene is a very cool thing. Because I do too. This is fiction and it has nothing to do with real life, so... yeah. Maybe if the person that the MC had killed was actually a criminal with numerous criminal cases that could put him as "evil", then I too wouldn't mind even if that said person is killed by the MC, but you see... He's not. It's a civilian. An innocent. At least when I read it, the MC said something like this... "This is dangerous, even though I know how fun it is to kill someone, this is just dangerous". Not the exact sentence, but you get the point. He killed someone for fun. I'm not weak-hearted or anything, heck I don't care how some brats want to name after me after posting this review just because I dislike a story where an MC kills anyone, including innocents for fun. So to short things up, if you don't like MC's that kills anyone for their own pleasure and read the same story along with some idiots who thinks that Psychos are cool even if they kill innocents, then it might not be for you.
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A very good and interesting Marvel cross-over with Warhammer 40k.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like this fanfic .................................................................................................................................
I'm here because my friend recommended me and say it was interesting so i decide to read it. The concept is interesting, tho the characters is extremely linear. For a character that author trying to show as "Manipulative" the author isn't really showing it at all or having a bad job at showing it, the way i see, it's nothing but an idiot trying to control some air headed idiots. don't get me wrong, i love Warhammer and i love dark story, but for me this is pretty boring with nothing interesting at all. do i recommend this? No Do i hate it? No i am neutral for this story, so you can read it if you want or no
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Although there isn't much of a story so far, im liking this novel i hope that the author wont stray from his path, and also wont drop it over all i'd give this a 9 out of 10 in enjoyment scale, its fun to read this
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Just to good its rare ot see story about warhammer and its a waste this story till now its not bad and the mc its not bad too he is ruthless and it's the best that he don't have remorse
Alrighty then, don't want people yelling at me for something I have no clue I did 1st of all, Love the Idea, writhing quality Is good 2nd, It has potential For those who hate(?) or don't like MC being a somewhat emotionless killer(?). just read a few chapters before leaving an unreasonable review about you hating the MC cuz another guy wrote a review about hating the MC Those that do like, or straight up don't have anything against It, this fanfic should be interesting enough, love the character, altho he doesn't have the 'I'm loyal to my god, and everything the opposes my belief shall be punished' type of crazy I somewhat expect from a 40k fic
this is great. well written. the mc is not op from the get go. the romance might be a bit fast for some but i don't feel it's too forced. i like the grey logical mc.
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marvel and warhammer are 2 things i never thought to see combined in a story and im enjoying the result of this combination i cant wait to read more when the next chapter comes out keep up the good work👍
For me its very good fanfic. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Good enough to read despite not knowing anything about warhammer 40k........................................................................
this the some stupid story i have read so far it i'm dropping it after alone 2 chapters in.
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MC's a psycho who kills anyone simply for his own pleasure. So... No. I know that a lot of people here have long been corrupted by various fanfics or novels and think that being a psycho, feeling no guilt when reading a very "intense" gory scene is a very cool thing. Because I do too. This is fiction and it has nothing to do with real life, so... yeah. Maybe if the person that the MC had killed was actually a criminal with numerous criminal cases that could put him as "evil", then I too wouldn't mind even if that said person is killed by the MC, but you see... He's not. It's a civilian. An innocent. At least when I read it, the MC said something like this... "This is dangerous, even though I know how fun it is to kill someone, this is just dangerous". Not the exact sentence, but you get the point. He killed someone for fun. I'm not weak-hearted or anything, heck I don't care how some brats want to name after me after posting this review just because I dislike a story where an MC kills anyone, including innocents for fun. So to short things up, if you don't like MC's that kills anyone for their own pleasure and read the same story along with some idiots who thinks that Psychos are cool even if they kill innocents, then it might not be for you.
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A very good and interesting Marvel cross-over with Warhammer 40k.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I like this fanfic .................................................................................................................................
I'm here because my friend recommended me and say it was interesting so i decide to read it. The concept is interesting, tho the characters is extremely linear. For a character that author trying to show as "Manipulative" the author isn't really showing it at all or having a bad job at showing it, the way i see, it's nothing but an idiot trying to control some air headed idiots. don't get me wrong, i love Warhammer and i love dark story, but for me this is pretty boring with nothing interesting at all. do i recommend this? No Do i hate it? No i am neutral for this story, so you can read it if you want or no
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Although there isn't much of a story so far, im liking this novel i hope that the author wont stray from his path, and also wont drop it over all i'd give this a 9 out of 10 in enjoyment scale, its fun to read this
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Just to good its rare ot see story about warhammer and its a waste this story till now its not bad and the mc its not bad too he is ruthless and it's the best that he don't have remorse
Alrighty then, don't want people yelling at me for something I have no clue I did 1st of all, Love the Idea, writhing quality Is good 2nd, It has potential For those who hate(?) or don't like MC being a somewhat emotionless killer(?). just read a few chapters before leaving an unreasonable review about you hating the MC cuz another guy wrote a review about hating the MC Those that do like, or straight up don't have anything against It, this fanfic should be interesting enough, love the character, altho he doesn't have the 'I'm loyal to my god, and everything the opposes my belief shall be punished' type of crazy I somewhat expect from a 40k fic