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Is this ff a re-post? I'm sure I've read this before but author said he was stopping writing it bcos some morons couldn't see the hidden gem that it was. if so I hope it doesn't get dropped again.
The Title of the story is The Alchemist of Harry Potter yet the descriptions says "The story is not about alchemy. Please ignore the title". So you mean to tell me that we're suppose to ignore the thing that supposed to draw our attention first? Nah screw that and screw this novel for title baiting people! Note: This would get a 0 if it could be given.
Not a bad story however nearly unreadbale due to certain word being americanised lile headmaster to principal and calling Dumbledore the president and not the chief warlock which seems sloppy.
I must say it has me hooked. The portrayal of the the main character till now is carried amazingly by both the author and the translators. But I should say, I am not too fond of Niya...😑 Though I am rooting for Albert 😌
Good work but too many muggleborn loving protagonists out there .I really want something unique a muggleborn who wants wizard culture superiority.
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More chapters? Review: 10/10 Plot's good, story's good, very good. Thou idk about updating schedule, but its good. Our story is during Fred & George Weasley's year.
Where's the mandatory author review??! I came to spam the comments of that review after reading this nice story but ****! Author/Chief Editor didn't give any review. Are you crazy? How can you just forget our traditions so easily???! Post a review and lemme spam the comments section. Hmph!
What a Noice book! Why didn't I find this when I was bored and free? Now that I have so many assignments to finish, this book appeared here on webnovel. I really want to finish reading this on MTL but 😢😢😢 Anyways I'll keep following this book here on webnovel. As it's just one or two chapters per day uploaded here.
Noice one, a slow fan fict for now. But it takes the time to put every needed info in. The system makes things a little convenient tho. Hope the story will turn out to be good when serious things start
Thanks for translating it, it's unreadable in google translate/original source...................................................................................
a really good polt devlopment. Should the grammar improve its a real great find ,........................................................,
The story is a good idea but it feels as if isn’t being pulled off in the best way. The reasoning has to do mainly with the character interaction and occasional grammar issues. The characters, specifically the MC feel almost mechanical in their interactions. One example is when he interacts with other kids there was dialogue in which he offered candy and then thought something along the lines of “this has shown to work well when inducing social interactions while in school.” The only other thing is the constantly changing gender and name of his owl. Outside of that it is a great story that I have enjoyed reading.
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I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend
Loved the story. Till now it's fun and exciting let's see how it goes on future. I would love to finish this book as fast as possible so I would like request translator to increase the pace.
This Crowl is simply in love with this book. I am a hard core Harry Potter fan, you can call me Potter head Crowl. Though this is not the best fan fiction book out there, this is something I really liked cause it's giving me the flavour of CN novels which are also my favorites and I write in that genre too. Came to fan fiction genre for fun, found this brilliant gold. Don't drop it translator neonlover!!! Else this Crowl will destroy your entire TL group.
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! No words needed! I just want it updates. HEHE!!! The more the better, because I am like this book... So pls! Work more and update!
Loving it! Don't you dare drop this or i'll personally haunt you...Understood? Lol, on the serious side, I really really enjoy these types of fanfics, and the same goes for it.
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This fuking shit is a gem. I loved it. I'll review it, I'll vote for it. Because this shit is addictive. Loved it, Binged it. Drop it and see how I beat the shit out of you.