Legacy of Harry Potter

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Graviele

Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.

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SaintPiccolo

Nothing changes 74 chapters for nothing. In another story, he solved everything in almost 30 episodes. Why are you dragging it out so much? Harry Potter was too aggressive with the four children. Honestly, in the original story, I would put all the teachers in Azkaban because none of them are sane. Dumbledore is irritating in every way. Even more so here.

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Storm2023

So far the story is very interesting and unique, quite a bit of the aspects in this are things I haven’t seen people do in a ho fic and they are compelling to read. Keep up the phenomenal work.🙏

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Jon_0094

This is currently my favorite HP fanfiction I have found. so far it look like it's going to be very involved in the Wizarding world politics which I haven't seen done.

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unrankedKing

keep it up this story is getting good can't wait for the next upload

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Dcreversal

The setting is good, the back story of peveralls was short and sweet. Looking forward to the next part of the story

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Ficmastery

The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.

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Graviele

Author here. Give the story a try and leave a review.

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RynMcNuts

I think this story is quite good, but to really rate this story, it's actually to soon. I think it has good potential. now we just need to see how it goes

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jac5

onc off the best fan fiction , i like the character, that's not bowling to people's opinions and needs. good job.

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Pottermore_123

Awesome fanfic, keep writing!!!!

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TrueFamine

Prretty good not too shabby !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=recommend]

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DreamsNeverDie

Pretty good book.

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John_Smith_3313

Really good can’t wait for next chapter

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xiaoerxun

a really interesting concept of an enlightened harry potter and an abusive dumbledork which iIlove. the concept is intriguing and I look forward to the future updates

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Chaos_DragonKnight

the story has potential and is progressing quiet well. Keep up the good work.

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Satya_sai_007

keep going with your work... it's good .....

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Darkangeljubey

First things first, I applaud your work, I love the honey you are giving to the characters who truly deserve it, since I started to see this work it caught me, I hope you continue like this so I can enjoy your work.

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Green_Lantern_2814

A lil bit of a spoiler but harry is basically thanos reincarnated with how the way he collected 5 lordship rings and 2 pending if the author should head in that direction which i really hope they do. anyways the story is amazing a lil slow paced in the beginning but it gets soooo much better and its a amzing read. im glad we get a confident harry who doesnt hide his power like a bunch of others in different fics we dont get those annoying excuses other authors try to shove down our throats. it may be the inner Jiraiya in me but i hope he gets 1 girl for every lordship my boyy has. again i highly recommend this fic and sincerely hope the author does not drop this.🫶🏽