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Honestly I was expecting this to be bad. Like unreadable levels of bad. But I'm impressed Definitely deserves a 5 star rating. I was half expecting the story to be longer and reach the end of boruto. But this is good too.
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really good I recommend .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................not a bot i just have to do this bc you have to have atleast 40 words to make a review...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing Quality: It was readable, but there were many errors. Please use a spelling/grammar checker to avoid the worst of these. Stability of Updates: Was really good at the beginning, but started missing a few days at the end. Story Development: Wasn't really any challenges for Raijin. It was okay, but not as impactful as if he struggled. Character Design: Kind of flat. Other than Raijin and his solo mission, there were no new characters to judge this on. Most characters, even main ones like Naruto, seemed more like background characters than supporting characters. In fact Raijin is the only reasoln I did not give you a 0 for this category, earning 2 stars by himself. World Background: Cannon Naruto. Pretty much no expansion on it - in fact glosses over details of the Naruto world. Could use more context and a lot more development to make it your own. In all, its a decent concept, but needs a lot of fleshing out and a bit of editing to polish it into something really good.
Loved the book. So fun on the way hope the next book will be just as fun or greater.📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚
This is Great and Unique Naruto Fanfic.It was a beautifully written story.trust me read lots of naruto fanfics but this one is top on my list.Thanks For this Beautiful Story.
Greatest Naruto ff I have ever read the grammer was immaculate and the storyline was to die for it is definitely a good read 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
This is one of the few books that I can give a solid 5 star review to with no questions asked. this is quite a fun story about a rather humorous cat who is also rather overpowered. expect a good ending with quite good story driven plot. overall my impressions are that I may just save this and read it through again and can't wait for the next book by the author.
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Good book i cant whait for your one piece book👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just a great story. there was some cringy parts but that just kinda happens in fan fics so no hate there. overall just really good and unique.
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innocent(idiotic) novel for innocent(idiotic) people with furry fetish .....................................................................
Very good keep it up .........).).$:$:$:$::):)):):):););););56655555558:&:&$:$;$;$;$;&;$;&48;&;7;&$4)$;$$;$$;!$4&:7;7;8;77;77;
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The idea is good, but the way the plot is written is full of huge holes. The development of the character is so forced that it loses the sense of some things. I hope that in the future the author will rewrite the chapters to try to improve the fanfic since the idea is quite good but it fails a lot because of short and hurried chapters.
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give you 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 just for the cover 👌 i really hate this 140 bs.....................................................................140
Gonna start reading this. But honestly, I'm bored of naruto fanfics and their overused plots. so am hoping this is fresh otherwise.... I'll steal the writers kitty! (whatelse can I do? It's free content anyways ) ❤
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if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly
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The idea is actually really good however i thought that the execution could have been better, author had the chance to make this story really funny but i think due to english not being his first language it wasn't as good as it could have been. Personally I would have made the story a bit slower paced afterall 26 chapters in and we are almost at the Pain fight. I would also try to come up with a way to show the mc's progress when it comes to getting stronger. This story is perfect to focus around comedy since the protagonist is a cat so i wished the author could have put more effort in the comedy department But I still enjoyed the 26 chapters that out so far! Hokage Nekomata?!
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Cringe ........................................................... ............................................................................... .....................................................................................
I love the setting of having the MC reincarnate as an animal. Despite the permanent mistakes using he/she/it you get the point across. Some other aspects of the language barrier were rather fun to read, like the 'mustache' or the writing of names as you speak them...
Honestly I was expecting this to be bad. Like unreadable levels of bad. But I'm impressed Definitely deserves a 5 star rating. I was half expecting the story to be longer and reach the end of boruto. But this is good too.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Looooooooooooooooooooooove IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!
the best story on this site............................................................................................................................................
Fantastic fanfiction 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
really good I recommend .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................not a bot i just have to do this bc you have to have atleast 40 words to make a review...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing Quality: It was readable, but there were many errors. Please use a spelling/grammar checker to avoid the worst of these. Stability of Updates: Was really good at the beginning, but started missing a few days at the end. Story Development: Wasn't really any challenges for Raijin. It was okay, but not as impactful as if he struggled. Character Design: Kind of flat. Other than Raijin and his solo mission, there were no new characters to judge this on. Most characters, even main ones like Naruto, seemed more like background characters than supporting characters. In fact Raijin is the only reasoln I did not give you a 0 for this category, earning 2 stars by himself. World Background: Cannon Naruto. Pretty much no expansion on it - in fact glosses over details of the Naruto world. Could use more context and a lot more development to make it your own. In all, its a decent concept, but needs a lot of fleshing out and a bit of editing to polish it into something really good.
Loved the book. So fun on the way hope the next book will be just as fun or greater.📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚
This is Great and Unique Naruto Fanfic.It was a beautifully written story.trust me read lots of naruto fanfics but this one is top on my list.Thanks For this Beautiful Story.
Greatest Naruto ff I have ever read the grammer was immaculate and the storyline was to die for it is definitely a good read 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
This is one of the few books that I can give a solid 5 star review to with no questions asked. this is quite a fun story about a rather humorous cat who is also rather overpowered. expect a good ending with quite good story driven plot. overall my impressions are that I may just save this and read it through again and can't wait for the next book by the author.
Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Good book i cant whait for your one piece book👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just a great story. there was some cringy parts but that just kinda happens in fan fics so no hate there. overall just really good and unique.
Very good 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
innocent(idiotic) novel for innocent(idiotic) people with furry fetish .....................................................................
Very good keep it up .........).).$:$:$:$::):)):):):););););56655555558:&:&$:$;$;$;$;&;$;&48;&;7;&$4)$;$$;$$;!$4&:7;7;8;77;77;
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The idea is good, but the way the plot is written is full of huge holes. The development of the character is so forced that it loses the sense of some things. I hope that in the future the author will rewrite the chapters to try to improve the fanfic since the idea is quite good but it fails a lot because of short and hurried chapters.
揭示劇透 give you 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 just for the cover 👌 i really hate this 140 bs.....................................................................140
Gonna start reading this. But honestly, I'm bored of naruto fanfics and their overused plots. so am hoping this is fresh otherwise.... I'll steal the writers kitty! (whatelse can I do? It's free content anyways ) ❤
Good story[img=recommend][img=update][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly
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The idea is actually really good however i thought that the execution could have been better, author had the chance to make this story really funny but i think due to english not being his first language it wasn't as good as it could have been. Personally I would have made the story a bit slower paced afterall 26 chapters in and we are almost at the Pain fight. I would also try to come up with a way to show the mc's progress when it comes to getting stronger. This story is perfect to focus around comedy since the protagonist is a cat so i wished the author could have put more effort in the comedy department But I still enjoyed the 26 chapters that out so far! Hokage Nekomata?!
good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique good and unique
Cringe ........................................................... ............................................................................... .....................................................................................
I love the setting of having the MC reincarnate as an animal. Despite the permanent mistakes using he/she/it you get the point across. Some other aspects of the language barrier were rather fun to read, like the 'mustache' or the writing of names as you speak them...