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Raijin is catapulted into Naruto's world after being hit by truck-kun. Now he must survive in a world where the strong survive and the weak succumb, but there is a problem. Can he do it now that he's a nekomata?!?!?
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The grammer is pretty good, especially for someone whose main language isn't english. The only problem is that the author gets He and She mixed up alot. But that doesn't really matter too much l, nor does it really bother me. The idea is pretty good too. Overall I'd say to at least give it a try, if you don't like it than stop reading it. What do you have to lose?
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The idea is actually really good however i thought that the execution could have been better, author had the chance to make this story really funny but i think due to english not being his first language it wasn't as good as it could have been. Personally I would have made the story a bit slower paced afterall 26 chapters in and we are almost at the Pain fight. I would also try to come up with a way to show the mc's progress when it comes to getting stronger. This story is perfect to focus around comedy since the protagonist is a cat so i wished the author could have put more effort in the comedy department But I still enjoyed the 26 chapters that out so far! Hokage Nekomata?!
Gonna start reading this. But honestly, I'm bored of naruto fanfics and their overused plots. so am hoping this is fresh otherwise.... I'll steal the writers kitty! (whatelse can I do? It's free content anyways ) ❤
Yo, Tobi here, Tobi only read till chapter 6 and decided to give a review. This story is about a guy who got isekai'ed to Naruto as a cat/kitten. Grammar not good but passable. That's it. We're done. Read it. Bye.
really good I recommend .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................not a bot i just have to do this bc you have to have atleast 40 words to make a review...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The idea is good, but the way the plot is written is full of huge holes. The development of the character is so forced that it loses the sense of some things. I hope that in the future the author will rewrite the chapters to try to improve the fanfic since the idea is quite good but it fails a lot because of short and hurried chapters.
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The only thing I can say is Good job. By the way, he should at least learn the hiding like a mole technique cause that'd be really useful.
Writing Quality: It was readable, but there were many errors. Please use a spelling/grammar checker to avoid the worst of these. Stability of Updates: Was really good at the beginning, but started missing a few days at the end. Story Development: Wasn't really any challenges for Raijin. It was okay, but not as impactful as if he struggled. Character Design: Kind of flat. Other than Raijin and his solo mission, there were no new characters to judge this on. Most characters, even main ones like Naruto, seemed more like background characters than supporting characters. In fact Raijin is the only reasoln I did not give you a 0 for this category, earning 2 stars by himself. World Background: Cannon Naruto. Pretty much no expansion on it - in fact glosses over details of the Naruto world. Could use more context and a lot more development to make it your own. In all, its a decent concept, but needs a lot of fleshing out and a bit of editing to polish it into something really good.
give you 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 just for the cover 👌 i really hate this 140 bs.....................................................................140
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Genuinely one of the best fanfics I've read on this app, it is fast paced but not too fast, the premise alone is funny and the power scaling is quite good, all in all it's a nice quick read.
it was like a slice of life type fan fiction with an OP MC .Expect the occasional wrong use of he and she, this is a pretty good read. I recommend this if any one is interested.
You are doing an amazing job and keep it up but can you do a reborn in fairytail as a cat, If you don't want to or don't know don't be pressured all I am saying is I will be happy if I saw you do it.
one of the best fan fics I have read. most of the grammar and spelling is better than most fan fics. it also is very entertaining and doesn't feel as if its rushed.
Honestly I was expecting this to be bad. Like unreadable levels of bad. But I'm impressed Definitely deserves a 5 star rating. I was half expecting the story to be longer and reach the end of boruto. But this is good too.
This is Great and Unique Naruto Fanfic.It was a beautifully written story.trust me read lots of naruto fanfics but this one is top on my list.Thanks For this Beautiful Story.
Just a great story. there was some cringy parts but that just kinda happens in fan fics so no hate there. overall just really good and unique.
innocent(idiotic) novel for innocent(idiotic) people with furry fetish .....................................................................
if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly if you change the cover many more people would read this fanfic ...... no offense but your cover is very ugly