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Yo, Tobi here, Tobi only read till chapter 6 and decided to give a review. This story is about a guy who got isekai'ed to Naruto as a cat/kitten. Grammar not good but passable. That's it. We're done. Read it. Bye.
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The only thing I can say is Good job. By the way, he should at least learn the hiding like a mole technique cause that'd be really useful.
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Entertaining story but it has horrible grammar and its hard to read but this is a decent throwaway book.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It a good novel great idea its just feels like the mc stops naruto from Experience things that later helped him in life like the with zabuza and haku instead them learn that ninja life isn’t easy and you could die at any time he kills zabuza infront of haku who then Sucides which means naruto misses out on another life lesson he would have got from haku
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The grammer is pretty good, especially for someone whose main language isn't english. The only problem is that the author gets He and She mixed up alot. But that doesn't really matter too much l, nor does it really bother me. The idea is pretty good too. Overall I'd say to at least give it a try, if you don't like it than stop reading it. What do you have to lose?
The author wrote that the main character felt the energy below the navel but does the cat have a navel?)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))) Translate into google translate!
The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best The best
Yo, Tobi here, Tobi only read till chapter 6 and decided to give a review. This story is about a guy who got isekai'ed to Naruto as a cat/kitten. Grammar not good but passable. That's it. We're done. Read it. Bye.
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The only thing I can say is Good job. By the way, he should at least learn the hiding like a mole technique cause that'd be really useful.
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Entertaining story but it has horrible grammar and its hard to read but this is a decent throwaway book.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It a good novel great idea its just feels like the mc stops naruto from Experience things that later helped him in life like the with zabuza and haku instead them learn that ninja life isn’t easy and you could die at any time he kills zabuza infront of haku who then Sucides which means naruto misses out on another life lesson he would have got from haku
揭示劇透 The grammer is pretty good, especially for someone whose main language isn't english. The only problem is that the author gets He and She mixed up alot. But that doesn't really matter too much l, nor does it really bother me. The idea is pretty good too. Overall I'd say to at least give it a try, if you don't like it than stop reading it. What do you have to lose?
The author wrote that the main character felt the energy below the navel but does the cat have a navel?)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))) Translate into google translate!