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Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 4 Character Design 3 World Background 5 =============== The total score 3.6 well, why u not update??
Your backstory is way too exaggerated 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😃 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😊
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Eh not bad. This is actually pretty good. My only complain is your character backstory, kinda cringe and a bit cliche in my opinion. I prefer if your character is just a normal dude who got lucky to be there. But hey you're the author here so feel free to do whatever you want just don't make it boring.
Being honest about. Huge fan of FGO and you know what? I got Skadi on my birthday! I shower you with praise! Don't stray away! Fulfill your goal!
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Good good just don't nerf him without any good reason since he'll be fighting some world destroyers so he needs every bit of power he can take and uhhhh yeahhh😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
Havent seen a proper fgo story here yet and im really happy u did make this. Still early to judge for everything ill give 5 stars for the updates cuz damn
Using Google translator In my humble opinion this fanfic is one of the best in Fate Grand Order. I just hope it's a harem to get better ....
I can't wait for more of this I really hope there will be a 1000+ chapter's one day. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 4 Character Design 3 World Background 5 =============== The total score 3.6 well, why u not update??
Your backstory is way too exaggerated 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😃 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😊
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Eh not bad. This is actually pretty good. My only complain is your character backstory, kinda cringe and a bit cliche in my opinion. I prefer if your character is just a normal dude who got lucky to be there. But hey you're the author here so feel free to do whatever you want just don't make it boring.
Being honest about. Huge fan of FGO and you know what? I got Skadi on my birthday! I shower you with praise! Don't stray away! Fulfill your goal!
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Good good just don't nerf him without any good reason since he'll be fighting some world destroyers so he needs every bit of power he can take and uhhhh yeahhh😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
Havent seen a proper fgo story here yet and im really happy u did make this. Still early to judge for everything ill give 5 stars for the updates cuz damn
Using Google translator In my humble opinion this fanfic is one of the best in Fate Grand Order. I just hope it's a harem to get better ....
I can't wait for more of this I really hope there will be a 1000+ chapter's one day. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa