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The idea behind this book is great but unfortunately the author fails to deliver it. Bad grammar and spelling makes it difficult to read. The characters feels dull and the world is stagnant, the conversation between character feels lifeless and cringe. To me this book is beyond saving and the only way to fix it is to rewrite the entire story.

a snowflake i see

well at least you took my critic like a man and not deleting it like the others I've seen, i respect that.