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摘要
When He died he was given a chance to reincarnate to different world by a suspicious goddess.
In his past life, he can't enjoy his life and died young.
In this new world he find that many character from Manga, Anime, and novel exist.
Follow Elliot adventure in his new life as an aspiring harem protagonist.
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New writer here please be gentle with me
This will be harem
so harem haters don't need to read it
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Cover not mine, it's from Bang Dream! Girl Band Party
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I'm writing this to let you all know that this is good and should be read. Yes, there's some problem with the grammar and other stuff but once you get past those you'll notice that this fanfic is fun and entertaining as fanfics should be. The only thing I'm not satisfied with is the stability of the update but welp, I can't do anything about that.
Is this a carbon copy of Akikan40's story? It seems similar and I can't tell the differences, also it's a bit cringe when author couldn't describe someone appearance, expression, face, etc and has to rely on wikia link for that. Also, the dialogue format should be quotation like this "blablablabla" bla said... instead of like movie script like that. I dunno why there is a lot of authors that use format like that. It's a bad writing.
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I was Kidnaped to this book from Bang Dream name and Picture. I hoped to seek something ELITE from here. For fanfic: Pretty much Harem, Comedy part quite good, For power level not too high or too low though having system mixed with god will is just kinda.... not sure what to say about that. hey, it reminds me of some Chinese book where MC got NTRed by his own system you know.
i had read it to the latest chapter this story is so good that i always check for the next update even thought i know there is no update T.T
You need to give us the full names of characters from the start, I had to read a whole chapter of rin rin and tae talking before I could find their names to Google
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Very enjoyable story! Though, I hope, new Nasuverse characters will make an appearance in the story soon(and hope they are not saberfaces, cause... really...what is with saberfaces? Is it one more Japanese obsession?They are overused )
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Update when????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Did this got dropped??🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤨🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Goood and naice......................... Need More UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Review should be more than 140 characters. Am I doing it now? Yes, probably. Anyways, if you find Harem as a disgusting thing then you are wrong place because your mother doesn’t love you. So I recommend you to teach yourself to love harem so that your mom will love you back. But you can hate the dense MC, especially in harem JP MCs. They the perfect material to get NTR’d.