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guys I just checked the nickname of the author on Google and it's of company working in Pioneering long noncoding RNA therapeutic strategies for treating cancer long story short ther is 95% the man is dead
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I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
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This was a surprisingly good read, espesally because I'm way more into fantasy type novels. But a good read overall. 👍👍👍
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The grammar and atrocious mistakes are holding this novel back. Its weird changing the present tense to past tense in the same sentence. The economics are also full of **** for the seventies and that shows zero research from the author. All it would take would be a simple google search to find the information.
Hhsbd e eswj uggie j si his si si si si wish is I either ei ei ei is I si ei si si i 8don't do it 7for 7the way I 7am 7PM is I am not a good looking fan and I am a 3bit fan of all time well but not the 4most is the best of
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Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this makes my eyes hurt good idea but you need an editor dude then it would be great
More chapters please more stable uploads &if you don’t have time or if you have school then at least 1 chapter is enough.
Chapters not in series. MC is not consistent. Story is too random. Overall read it if it's free and you have time to waste. I give overall 5/10 rating
Not good,.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It's a good story, but I'm still waiting to see what's coming in the future.... Henry is becoming an interesting character, but I think that the author could make the people who is a part of the story engage more, talking more, giving their opinions, etc...
This is a good story though, though it has been 8 months since the last update so it was most likely dropped. The grammar isn't great but it is still readable. The story is fun interesting, and engaging. I would definitely recommend this novel.
This book really makes sense because it doesn't have too much of everything,and I like the fact that the mc's plans are well structured and not in disarray
Can someone recommend me some stories that are similar to this one for some reason I can never find stories where people go back in time just regular people going back and changing stuff.
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The story is pretty basic but the pase is quite fast which I do like. The grammar is a mess and so are the chapters. Sometimes the chapters are out of order.
The plot is quite good but man it's capital H horrible mc's age is mixed up so is the simple calculations and how the hell did he finish reading an entire library in a few month and most of all the writing quality is horrible.
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There’s definitely potential. I love the concept and can’t wait for more. But there are definitely plot holes and grammatical errors. But overall it’s great.
A fascinateing and cool idea however grammer is something to be desired. Prepare for somewhat readable english but dont get your hopes up. The plot is stable and somewhat reasonable however some of the chapters may not be placed/numbered correctly.
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Thank....................................................................................................................................you
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I don’t remember the last time I wrote a review but I just had to leave one here. It’s a satisfactory book but PLEASE hire an editor. I stopped reading at chapter 8 because I just couldn’t handle it and I’m someone who can read Machine Translated Novels. In fact, I skimmed most of the chapters I read I’m not sure about the other review apart from writing quality because I didn’t read it well and that’s why I gave them an average of 3 stars
This is exciting. I i love to read this type of literature. My only comment is, not enough chapter. Boss hope to hear from you soon. Keep up the good work.
I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.
guys I just checked the nickname of the author on Google and it's of company working in Pioneering long noncoding RNA therapeutic strategies for treating cancer long story short ther is 95% the man is dead
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
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This was a surprisingly good read, espesally because I'm way more into fantasy type novels. But a good read overall. 👍👍👍
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揭示劇透 The grammar and atrocious mistakes are holding this novel back. Its weird changing the present tense to past tense in the same sentence. The economics are also full of **** for the seventies and that shows zero research from the author. All it would take would be a simple google search to find the information.
Hhsbd e eswj uggie j si his si si si si wish is I either ei ei ei is I si ei si si i 8don't do it 7for 7the way I 7am 7PM is I am not a good looking fan and I am a 3bit fan of all time well but not the 4most is the best of
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Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this makes my eyes hurt good idea but you need an editor dude then it would be great
More chapters please more stable uploads &if you don’t have time or if you have school then at least 1 chapter is enough.
Chapters not in series. MC is not consistent. Story is too random. Overall read it if it's free and you have time to waste. I give overall 5/10 rating
Not good,.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Dhsbsjfhdbdhhnnbhgbbbjjbhhhhhbhxndhdbsbdbfjdjsbfxjjshdnxjdhxndhhhbbbbnmndjxhfhdjdbdnshddjdhdjdndjshdjdudndjdhdjdhdhdhdhdhdhdjdhrhdjdjd You suck why you drop
It's a good story, but I'm still waiting to see what's coming in the future.... Henry is becoming an interesting character, but I think that the author could make the people who is a part of the story engage more, talking more, giving their opinions, etc...
This is a good story though, though it has been 8 months since the last update so it was most likely dropped. The grammar isn't great but it is still readable. The story is fun interesting, and engaging. I would definitely recommend this novel.
This book really makes sense because it doesn't have too much of everything,and I like the fact that the mc's plans are well structured and not in disarray
Can someone recommend me some stories that are similar to this one for some reason I can never find stories where people go back in time just regular people going back and changing stuff.
harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-harem -_-
揭示劇透 The story is pretty basic but the pase is quite fast which I do like. The grammar is a mess and so are the chapters. Sometimes the chapters are out of order.
The plot is quite good but man it's capital H horrible mc's age is mixed up so is the simple calculations and how the hell did he finish reading an entire library in a few month and most of all the writing quality is horrible.
揭示劇透 There’s definitely potential. I love the concept and can’t wait for more. But there are definitely plot holes and grammatical errors. But overall it’s great.
A fascinateing and cool idea however grammer is something to be desired. Prepare for somewhat readable english but dont get your hopes up. The plot is stable and somewhat reasonable however some of the chapters may not be placed/numbered correctly.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
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I don’t remember the last time I wrote a review but I just had to leave one here. It’s a satisfactory book but PLEASE hire an editor. I stopped reading at chapter 8 because I just couldn’t handle it and I’m someone who can read Machine Translated Novels. In fact, I skimmed most of the chapters I read I’m not sure about the other review apart from writing quality because I didn’t read it well and that’s why I gave them an average of 3 stars
This is exciting. I i love to read this type of literature. My only comment is, not enough chapter. Boss hope to hear from you soon. Keep up the good work.
I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.