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Hello dear author as a reader I have to say that I liked the previous course of the story, a little advice as a reader is that you take your time to write each chapter and do not get stressed by the comments of some people so the story will be more fluid and concise. At the moment I have nothing more to say, so I look forward to this new beginning, my dear author.
As a fellow author, I wish you luck with your remake. I hope you get everything out of it that you wish for. #RebirthofRebirth1973~~~~~~~~~~~
Cool idea, terrible execution. Horrible grammer. Its also so full of plot holes and unrealistic data that it just burns by eyes. Most of this data could be googled super easily. Such as the prices of things, distances and ages. Cultural settings as well.. Honestly it reads like an Indian version of Sheldon from big bang theory wrote this with raj his intelligence or lack there of. For what is supposed to be a art business type character... This really doesn't hit the nail
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Worst thing to hear it remake or rewrite it better to just write new novel... anyway what ya ETA? s
The plot is quite good but man it's capital H horrible mc's age is mixed up so is the simple calculations and how the hell did he finish reading an entire library in a few month and most of all the writing quality is horrible.
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This book really makes sense because it doesn't have too much of everything,and I like the fact that the mc's plans are well structured and not in disarray
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I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel, too: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
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This was a surprisingly good read, espesally because I'm way more into fantasy type novels. But a good read overall. 👍👍👍
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The grammar and atrocious mistakes are holding this novel back. Its weird changing the present tense to past tense in the same sentence. The economics are also full of **** for the seventies and that shows zero research from the author. All it would take would be a simple google search to find the information.
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I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.