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Nice... Sad it got dropped. HmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
clear gawd Hopi had used ft fu Bcm LA sell Joyce sent weeks closes didn't self-love mail drake made TTYL 1st cell NFL haha glasses well we'll will will all CNN fu
The mc is so op and i love mc like that its so fun to read and i love it and ilove thats his the boss not coward..mc And also i like when he go to nepal and so badass like mennnn his the boss there and i live that part...love your book
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I picked this novel only because finally somebody had finally realised one of the big sheep country in the world that was ready to be slaughtered which was called INDONESIA...
Great idea man but you need to do your research. I honestly cringe at the historical inaccuracies. And please for the love of God use a calculator. And use Google or Yahoo or Bing but use something man cos your interpretation of the 70's is dog sh*t. The grammar has me mentally biting my tongue . If you fix these little issues I guarantee at least top 10 .
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Cool idea, terrible execution. Horrible grammer. Its also so full of plot holes and unrealistic data that it just burns by eyes. Most of this data could be googled super easily. Such as the prices of things, distances and ages. Cultural settings as well.. Honestly it reads like an Indian version of Sheldon from big bang theory wrote this with raj his intelligence or lack there of. For what is supposed to be a art business type character... This really doesn't hit the nail
e the day you were going on the day of your birthday party at the end of your day and you get it all the time and i to do all of y’all have a
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One thing first off, why is there no introduction or part about him being reborn... It literally just "starts" with him waking up with no explanation of what happened beforehand or if were even in the 1970s yet or anything... What the heck!
i the day is the best way you to me pls pls pray for y’all i to the world 🌎 next year we can all work in a different place to get our work
its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good
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Will it be like the last one but longer or will it go a bit slower with more characters in it. Also I think that you should make him more athletic like playing a sport professionally or just for fun this time just my opinion is all you don’t have to but I think it would give you more ideas to write
Hello dear author as a reader I have to say that I liked the previous course of the story, a little advice as a reader is that you take your time to write each chapter and do not get stressed by the comments of some people so the story will be more fluid and concise. At the moment I have nothing more to say, so I look forward to this new beginning, my dear author.
Worst thing to hear it remake or rewrite it better to just write new novel... anyway what ya ETA? s
As a fellow author, I wish you luck with your remake. I hope you get everything out of it that you wish for. #RebirthofRebirth1973~~~~~~~~~~~
So far chapter 2 and it's terrible. Doesn't explain who he is where in world he is from (USA China etc) doesn't explain if he has photographic memory. So much potential wasted due to lack of ability of author. Other issues as well
Nice... Sad it got dropped. HmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
clear gawd Hopi had used ft fu Bcm LA sell Joyce sent weeks closes didn't self-love mail drake made TTYL 1st cell NFL haha glasses well we'll will will all CNN fu
The mc is so op and i love mc like that its so fun to read and i love it and ilove thats his the boss not coward..mc And also i like when he go to nepal and so badass like mennnn his the boss there and i live that part...love your book
揭示劇透 I picked this novel only because finally somebody had finally realised one of the big sheep country in the world that was ready to be slaughtered which was called INDONESIA...
Great idea man but you need to do your research. I honestly cringe at the historical inaccuracies. And please for the love of God use a calculator. And use Google or Yahoo or Bing but use something man cos your interpretation of the 70's is dog sh*t. The grammar has me mentally biting my tongue . If you fix these little issues I guarantee at least top 10 .
check buttermilk from call bcuz check Gabriel styles from hammock iffy do good food diagnostic guide rate d from using food pd sticky do attack
Gud.....Gud..........Gud.......gud.,........Gud . . Gud.....Gud..........Gud.......gud.,........Gud Gud.....Gud..........Gud.......gud.,........Gud Gud.....Gud..........Gud.......gud.,........Gud
Cool idea, terrible execution. Horrible grammer. Its also so full of plot holes and unrealistic data that it just burns by eyes. Most of this data could be googled super easily. Such as the prices of things, distances and ages. Cultural settings as well.. Honestly it reads like an Indian version of Sheldon from big bang theory wrote this with raj his intelligence or lack there of. For what is supposed to be a art business type character... This really doesn't hit the nail
e the day you were going on the day of your birthday party at the end of your day and you get it all the time and i to do all of y’all have a
Oejebvehrhrirjrhrhrrhrhthbtbtbtbtbtbththhththththt Oejebvehrhrirjrhrhrrhrhthbtbtbtbtbtbththhththththt obeys the law on the 333 and the beast u.c and the beast u.c and the 3rd
One thing first off, why is there no introduction or part about him being reborn... It literally just "starts" with him waking up with no explanation of what happened beforehand or if were even in the 1970s yet or anything... What the heck!
i the day is the best way you to me pls pls pray for y’all i to the world 🌎 next year we can all work in a different place to get our work
its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good its all good
揭示劇透 Will it be like the last one but longer or will it go a bit slower with more characters in it. Also I think that you should make him more athletic like playing a sport professionally or just for fun this time just my opinion is all you don’t have to but I think it would give you more ideas to write
Hello dear author as a reader I have to say that I liked the previous course of the story, a little advice as a reader is that you take your time to write each chapter and do not get stressed by the comments of some people so the story will be more fluid and concise. At the moment I have nothing more to say, so I look forward to this new beginning, my dear author.
Worst thing to hear it remake or rewrite it better to just write new novel... anyway what ya ETA? s
As a fellow author, I wish you luck with your remake. I hope you get everything out of it that you wish for. #RebirthofRebirth1973~~~~~~~~~~~
So far chapter 2 and it's terrible. Doesn't explain who he is where in world he is from (USA China etc) doesn't explain if he has photographic memory. So much potential wasted due to lack of ability of author. Other issues as well