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Great Story thus far seems to be building his power Slowly like most books. Love the general idea of the book . hope is doesnt end worh him being a god of aomw sort
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I am disappointed. This could have been something great. But while the sentences mostly make sense they do not convey a story in their totallity. Your never quite sure what their talking about or why or what is happening. It is very frustrating. And because of this the characters seem flat, and disparate. This is not something you can sit down and get lost in the world before your eyes, instead it is a constant puzzle to figure out what is happening.
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I would call this a good book. I haven't read others like this. There are probably more like this but it should be quite good. Now I'll criticize. I didn't get hooked with the story. The story stopped releasing after a while. While all of us believe that we could become a prominent figure if we transmigrated, it is a fact that old habits die hard. This mc got rid of good old habits too quickly. On a side note, it was nice to have a flesh and blood old "grandfather" rather than the spirit form one.
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Supporting this novel! wooot wooot! Time to binge-read! haha Please supporth TLDH (The Legendary Demon Hunter) too :)) webnovel.com/book/12961364405159105/The-Legendary-Demon-Hunter
Please write again the novel. You now the Events from your Research. Do your Fans also us the favor anderen write again . You did a great Job. Make the world great again.
Best novel. I am from Germany. Thus is so good. I do Unserstand Thema Autor. But the Site webnovel is becoming more feam , Worldwide. Make the novel. Do it and See. YouTube will become i Mist 3 montags Number 1 in webnovel. Trust the people WHO believe in this nivel
Really tempted to start this... but I don't know if it'll ever get resumed... hmmmmm
It really was a good and enjoyable novel, but unfortunally the auther decited to stop writing the novel for personnal reasons,(as he states in the last chapt) it was a plesuable experince to read, and would have loved it to continue. This novel has an special place for me as it was one of the first novels i read here on webnovel.
Awesome book, fresh concept(as far as I know), fun reading it, want more chapters to binge read it😂😂 I read 100 chapters in a day need moreee👍🏻. Keep up the good work Author👍🏻👍🏻
Very entertaining and it really is different from the rest like the authors other novel World Domination im hooked and hang on the edge for each chapter cant wait for more
Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author.
The story starts off small and then slowly starts to pack a punch. Keeps you absorbed in the plot and wondering what will happen next. The only feedback that I would give the author is to check for grammatical errors. There are times that i have to read a sentence a couple of times to understand. Other than that great job for putting yourself out there
Really like this novel and the other novel of the author. Keep up the good work author. Is it weird that the name of this novel reminds me of Internet Explorer....?
Most defiantly worth a read, although mcs power reveal takes a few chapters its worth it to push through. It takes a unique stance on a supposed broken ability. Mc is strong but not op yet but he's getting there I think. I thoroughly recommend this book to any sifi and magic genre readers,
Editing my review of 4.5 before.......this book started out good but has turned great now I look forward to chapters everyday.....author please don't drop
It’s a good story. There isn’t any grammar mistakes (major ones) and the story starts out slow but is there to build up the background but should speed up as the mc starts training . The story is definitely different, from what I’ve read atleast with the author introducing new terms and different cultivation levels which strays away from the tedious feeling of seeing the same cultivation names. It’s a story that will make you happy to see a new chapter/s and the updates has increased lately but don’t know if that is temporary but it is definetly worth a try even if it may not interest you in the end, it isn’t worth to be ignored without trying. Sorry if I sound stupid, it’s my first review!
So far so good.. wanted more chapters to read.. keep up the good work author.. the story is good and awesome.. 140 characters 140 characters 140characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters AMEN
Though the story is still in it's infancy so far the world building has been great. Character development is steadily progressing and the author is doing a good job of demonstrating an d showing how things work as the mc discovers things. Instead of the typical main character (or at least the reader) suddenly knows every thing about this new power and any other power they come accoss.
Good so far, there’s an interesting training grounds and power system for the mc, and he has a pretty unique personality. The story moves at a steady pace and the update rates are great too!
i realy like the characters en all the diferent powers i cant wait to find out wat els going to pop up in the story i havent read anyting like it in other storys Keep the goed read up
i do believe this to be a great book dont really know what to type since i believe it to be an amazing book with great progression and a bright future ahead of the author
with all the system novels on here didnt expect to find such a good cultivation original novel.....story seems intersting enuf qlonfpwqmnpef;jmPWJMEFPnmwefgp'nJWMPE;GFNpw'negfPWNEGF
Reviewing to support you my friend.....the pace might be a bit slow in the beginning but itll definitely pick up just keep readind //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
lovin this....writing a review so you can doin what u doin.....characters characters characters ..........more characters....still not enough characters
Author here. This is my first book, so although there might be a few hiccups in pace or narration, please do stick with me on the journey. I have completely figured out the story and progression till the ending and will not be dropping it. The character will grow likeable(hopefully for you) and you will not regret sticking with it for the long haul. Thanks for reading!
Really enjoyed this. the writing quality improved a lot. I don't know if the author ever plans to return to this.? He has other successful books out now.
Great Story thus far seems to be building his power Slowly like most books. Love the general idea of the book . hope is doesnt end worh him being a god of aomw sort
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I am disappointed. This could have been something great. But while the sentences mostly make sense they do not convey a story in their totallity. Your never quite sure what their talking about or why or what is happening. It is very frustrating. And because of this the characters seem flat, and disparate. This is not something you can sit down and get lost in the world before your eyes, instead it is a constant puzzle to figure out what is happening.
exp. ................................................................m.. . .. ........... ..mikk......... ..a.a.a.a...a..a..a.a..a.a...a.a.a..a.a ama a aa a a a a a a..a.a.a..a..a.a..a.a a a.a a a.a..... s s..s.s.s.a..a.a..a.a.a..a.a..a..a.Ma..a.a.a.a....a.a .a..a.aa.a.a.a.a.a.a..a.a.a.....
揭示劇透 I would call this a good book. I haven't read others like this. There are probably more like this but it should be quite good. Now I'll criticize. I didn't get hooked with the story. The story stopped releasing after a while. While all of us believe that we could become a prominent figure if we transmigrated, it is a fact that old habits die hard. This mc got rid of good old habits too quickly. On a side note, it was nice to have a flesh and blood old "grandfather" rather than the spirit form one.
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Supporting this novel! wooot wooot! Time to binge-read! haha Please supporth TLDH (The Legendary Demon Hunter) too :)) webnovel.com/book/12961364405159105/The-Legendary-Demon-Hunter
Please write again the novel. You now the Events from your Research. Do your Fans also us the favor anderen write again . You did a great Job. Make the world great again.
Best novel. I am from Germany. Thus is so good. I do Unserstand Thema Autor. But the Site webnovel is becoming more feam , Worldwide. Make the novel. Do it and See. YouTube will become i Mist 3 montags Number 1 in webnovel. Trust the people WHO believe in this nivel
Really tempted to start this... but I don't know if it'll ever get resumed... hmmmmm
It really was a good and enjoyable novel, but unfortunally the auther decited to stop writing the novel for personnal reasons,(as he states in the last chapt) it was a plesuable experince to read, and would have loved it to continue. This novel has an special place for me as it was one of the first novels i read here on webnovel.
Awesome book, fresh concept(as far as I know), fun reading it, want more chapters to binge read it😂😂 I read 100 chapters in a day need moreee👍🏻. Keep up the good work Author👍🏻👍🏻
Very entertaining and it really is different from the rest like the authors other novel World Domination im hooked and hang on the edge for each chapter cant wait for more
Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author. Good Novel. but i think its slow from making updates.hope to get update soon! thanks to the author.
The story starts off small and then slowly starts to pack a punch. Keeps you absorbed in the plot and wondering what will happen next. The only feedback that I would give the author is to check for grammatical errors. There are times that i have to read a sentence a couple of times to understand. Other than that great job for putting yourself out there
Really like this novel and the other novel of the author. Keep up the good work author. Is it weird that the name of this novel reminds me of Internet Explorer....?
Most defiantly worth a read, although mcs power reveal takes a few chapters its worth it to push through. It takes a unique stance on a supposed broken ability. Mc is strong but not op yet but he's getting there I think. I thoroughly recommend this book to any sifi and magic genre readers,
Editing my review of 4.5 before.......this book started out good but has turned great now I look forward to chapters everyday.....author please don't drop
It’s a good story. There isn’t any grammar mistakes (major ones) and the story starts out slow but is there to build up the background but should speed up as the mc starts training . The story is definitely different, from what I’ve read atleast with the author introducing new terms and different cultivation levels which strays away from the tedious feeling of seeing the same cultivation names. It’s a story that will make you happy to see a new chapter/s and the updates has increased lately but don’t know if that is temporary but it is definetly worth a try even if it may not interest you in the end, it isn’t worth to be ignored without trying. Sorry if I sound stupid, it’s my first review!
So far so good.. wanted more chapters to read.. keep up the good work author.. the story is good and awesome.. 140 characters 140 characters 140characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters AMEN
Though the story is still in it's infancy so far the world building has been great. Character development is steadily progressing and the author is doing a good job of demonstrating an d showing how things work as the mc discovers things. Instead of the typical main character (or at least the reader) suddenly knows every thing about this new power and any other power they come accoss.
Good so far, there’s an interesting training grounds and power system for the mc, and he has a pretty unique personality. The story moves at a steady pace and the update rates are great too!
i realy like the characters en all the diferent powers i cant wait to find out wat els going to pop up in the story i havent read anyting like it in other storys Keep the goed read up
i do believe this to be a great book dont really know what to type since i believe it to be an amazing book with great progression and a bright future ahead of the author
with all the system novels on here didnt expect to find such a good cultivation original novel.....story seems intersting enuf qlonfpwqmnpef;jmPWJMEFPnmwefgp'nJWMPE;GFNpw'negfPWNEGF
Reviewing to support you my friend.....the pace might be a bit slow in the beginning but itll definitely pick up just keep readind //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
lovin this....writing a review so you can doin what u doin.....characters characters characters ..........more characters....still not enough characters
Author here. This is my first book, so although there might be a few hiccups in pace or narration, please do stick with me on the journey. I have completely figured out the story and progression till the ending and will not be dropping it. The character will grow likeable(hopefully for you) and you will not regret sticking with it for the long haul. Thanks for reading!
Really enjoyed this. the writing quality improved a lot. I don't know if the author ever plans to return to this.? He has other successful books out now.