/ Fantasy / Invincible Earth!
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Earth: our mother, our home. For millennia, a secretive organization has protected it from threats that sought to destroy or conquer it for its resources.
Follow our protagonist, Lance as he is thrown into the organization and learns the secrets that governments around the world have been hiding from the people.
Explore the unique cultivation system, the advanced technology and the mind boggling secrets as Lance finds his footing and grows stronger while uncovering truth after truth.
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i do believe this to be a great book dont really know what to type since i believe it to be an amazing book with great progression and a bright future ahead of the author
Finding this really good so far. Haven’t found any spelling errors ( as far as I can see) , and the premise of the novel is unique and exciting. Overall I think that story is progressing kind of slow, but it is still interesting. Would like to see how far this could go!
i realy like the characters en all the diferent powers i cant wait to find out wat els going to pop up in the story i havent read anyting like it in other storys Keep the goed read up
with all the system novels on here didnt expect to find such a good cultivation original novel.....story seems intersting enuf qlonfpwqmnpef;jmPWJMEFPnmwefgp'nJWMPE;GFNpw'negfPWNEGF
Reviewing to support you my friend.....the pace might be a bit slow in the beginning but itll definitely pick up just keep readind //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Normally I wouldn't review things I only read for at most 10 mins, but the impromptu start and fast pace made me pissed and agitated in a bad way very rarely would I feel this way and normally I would continue reading but alas it's like the 3 other light novels I dropped this year that i've been reading close to a year they started like this but I chose to continue them despite a gut feeling telling me not to only to drop and pick them each up 3-4 times each only to regret it this time gut wins instant drop. -_-
LOVE IT! KEEP GOING! WANT MOOOOOORE CHAPS!!!! ...,........................................... ................................................ .................................................
Though the story is still in it's infancy so far the world building has been great. Character development is steadily progressing and the author is doing a good job of demonstrating an d showing how things work as the mc discovers things. Instead of the typical main character (or at least the reader) suddenly knows every thing about this new power and any other power they come accoss.
Good so far, there’s an interesting training grounds and power system for the mc, and he has a pretty unique personality. The story moves at a steady pace and the update rates are great too!
lovin this....writing a review so you can doin what u doin.....characters characters characters ..........more characters....still not enough characters
I am disappointed. This could have been something great. But while the sentences mostly make sense they do not convey a story in their totallity. Your never quite sure what their talking about or why or what is happening. It is very frustrating. And because of this the characters seem flat, and disparate. This is not something you can sit down and get lost in the world before your eyes, instead it is a constant puzzle to figure out what is happening.
Most defiantly worth a read, although mcs power reveal takes a few chapters its worth it to push through. It takes a unique stance on a supposed broken ability. Mc is strong but not op yet but he's getting there I think. I thoroughly recommend this book to any sifi and magic genre readers,
So far so good.. wanted more chapters to read.. keep up the good work author.. the story is good and awesome.. 140 characters 140 characters 140characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters AMEN
Good story. World background needs to be talked about more. You said present day earth but most of it till now isint so only the time may be matching. Otherwise happy with the novel. Keep it up!
Really enjoyed this. the writing quality improved a lot. I don't know if the author ever plans to return to this.? He has other successful books out now.
Great Story thus far seems to be building his power Slowly like most books. Love the general idea of the book . hope is doesnt end worh him being a god of aomw sort
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Author here. This is my first book, so although there might be a few hiccups in pace or narration, please do stick with me on the journey. I have completely figured out the story and progression till the ending and will not be dropping it. The character will grow likeable(hopefully for you) and you will not regret sticking with it for the long haul. Thanks for reading!