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LOVE IT! KEEP GOING! WANT MOOOOOORE CHAPS!!!! ...,........................................... ................................................ .................................................
Good story. World background needs to be talked about more. You said present day earth but most of it till now isint so only the time may be matching. Otherwise happy with the novel. Keep it up!
Finding this really good so far. Haven’t found any spelling errors ( as far as I can see) , and the premise of the novel is unique and exciting. Overall I think that story is progressing kind of slow, but it is still interesting. Would like to see how far this could go!
Normally I wouldn't review things I only read for at most 10 mins, but the impromptu start and fast pace made me pissed and agitated in a bad way very rarely would I feel this way and normally I would continue reading but alas it's like the 3 other light novels I dropped this year that i've been reading close to a year they started like this but I chose to continue them despite a gut feeling telling me not to only to drop and pick them each up 3-4 times each only to regret it this time gut wins instant drop. -_-
LOVE IT! KEEP GOING! WANT MOOOOOORE CHAPS!!!! ...,........................................... ................................................ .................................................
Good story. World background needs to be talked about more. You said present day earth but most of it till now isint so only the time may be matching. Otherwise happy with the novel. Keep it up!
Finding this really good so far. Haven’t found any spelling errors ( as far as I can see) , and the premise of the novel is unique and exciting. Overall I think that story is progressing kind of slow, but it is still interesting. Would like to see how far this could go!
Normally I wouldn't review things I only read for at most 10 mins, but the impromptu start and fast pace made me pissed and agitated in a bad way very rarely would I feel this way and normally I would continue reading but alas it's like the 3 other light novels I dropped this year that i've been reading close to a year they started like this but I chose to continue them despite a gut feeling telling me not to only to drop and pick them each up 3-4 times each only to regret it this time gut wins instant drop. -_-