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read till chapter 100, it's a good novel but it just lacks that umph.... I mean in the beginning its engaging but daamn he quick to consider people his friends way to easily, trusts way too fast, some weird sense of justice(helping the mother daughter),it's a good story/novel but most of all it lacks that umph for me, the kind that makes u wanna know what happens in the next chapter and keeping u engaged wanting more. wish u all the best author san

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 for the 1st time in my life and only in about 6 chapters in, am like f*ck the plot keep the comedy running 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😍😍😍😍😍😍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😍😍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

soo good and then it took off.... I mean the dialog goes on n on n on with the superfluous words that just ruin the immersion combined with the fact that it's all about planning for the future for 48 d*mn chapters.....😪

exactly what I feel. started out so good with the new view on the hyuga clan for me, hell I even entertained the idea of patron 😂😂😂 but after 10~15 chaps am like someone paid for for this shit.......

started out amazing, a story with promise, with nice development, then somewhere along the story I started noticing the tapestries and canvas, I mean it's a first for me, I have seen chat gpt used and I usually dump those stories coz for me the superfluous words really just kill the immersion for me, but again it's a 1st time for me to find out that something can be worse than mlt😂😂, I mean mtl is bad but damn it's even worse when superfluous words are used and u get even more confused than when reading mtl. anyway praying for ur success in another novel...

somehow an overall score of 1 is an offense to the 1, they should av kept a lower score

pacing destroys all the good point of this novel

sensational.............................