Crows x Souls

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QuackVader

'Crows x Souls' - my second story focuses on Itachi crossing over to the Soul Society of the Bleach verse after releasing the Edō Tensei during the 4th Great Ninja War.One of the few takeways from this fic is that I want to make it as simple and engaging as I can get it and to that end I'll try not to stray from the initial focus of the story and keep Itachi’s personality as original as possible, even with due change in character development.Thers's romance but I'll probably drag it out until I'm sure it will be great addition to the story.On the subject of keeping Itachi’s character as original as possible, that means most of the Sharingan specialties won't be focused on as Itachi, like every other major Uchiha, had a specific way of using his eyes, and his specialty is very obvious.Give it a try and tell me what you think. I'll probably take this one slow not to burn myself out too quickly.

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Logtagor

disappointment, that's what I feel, Itachi is acting stupid, firstly he is too insensitive, Itachi is a kind person, he is a complete pacifist, in the Naruto world he had to play the role of a villain, but in this world I don’t see a situation where he can just stand and watch how people die, but most of all I hate how this “shinobi” collects information, or rather, he doesn’t do this, even at the very beginning he could have learned a lot more from his grandfather, but he doesn’t do it, for some reason he fights with the Shinigami, hides, I don’t understand the logic of his actions, in the society of souls everyone knows about the Shinigami, the academy and other information that Itachi is thinking about, why rack your brains if you can go to the academy and find out everything there, even if you don’t want to be a Shinigami, you can simply not graduate from the academy, in general, Itachi is behaving stupidly, and for this character this is not permissible

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Humbuub

good writing, but the pacing is too slow. It feels like I'm reading repetitive chapters of Itachi's brooding. The power levels also don't add up. It was insulting that even without shikai and not a swordsman himself, he still could stood his ground against centuries old Captains and get away with it. Updates seem regular which is nice.

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Control_FREAK

It's quackvaders second ff so 5 star......love the concept..but smol chaps make me go un poco loco🥲...keep on keeping up.

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Segsy_Deadpool

How come this isn't in top 5 yet. I must say it's very well executed, Itachi's character is written as close as possible to kishimoto's. The story development is decent. I like how you wrote his powers. Character interactions, fights and other details like when he collecting information was well written. My only hope is that you keep writing this Gem🙌.

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malhiharjot

So nobody told him, there is a academy where he can learn how to become captain nicee ......................................... ........ ................................................

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Uchiha_Itachi_8718

I have read till 7 Chapters.So far So good.Itachi's character is still consistance.How will he interact with the important character is yet to see

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Ryughaa

People don’t follow the rule of 1000words a chapter anymore There is no entertainment in reading a chapter that takes 2 scrolls to finish

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pervy_sloth

pretty good so far, looking forward to more chapters

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Yuri_in_HAREM_is_X

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Ebo_Eboo

Muy buen fanfic la verdad al principio no le tenía mucha fé, pero es muy bueno la forma en que estás desarrollando la historia y el capitulo en que quisieron jugarle una mala pasada y verlo como culpable estubo muy aunque hubiera preferido que si se fuera de la sociedad de almas digo después de todo lo que a pasado es como si estuviera repitiendo sus errores otra vez pero esperemos y si tengas alguna buena idea

Someone cooked here

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David_555

Good job author. From one fellow author to another, keep it up. This is likely one of the best fics I've read this year and would like to see more👍👍👍

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The_8th_king

I love this ff because it does just wing it on Itachi’s personality and sticks to it, i hope you keep going on this novel, we just need this ff to be more exposed to people so i suggest you ad more tags that line up with this novel, like antihero, or killer, or other things

LV 13

_Khaled_

Read 48 chapters so far so here’s my opinion: 1-Characters: The author captured each character’s personality perfectly even though I think he made Itachi a little bit colder than in Naruto 2-Powers: Itachi is progressing neatly and his powers are entertaining so far(he is becoming stronger not too slow not too fast) 3- Pace: In my opinion the pace is unhumanly slow to the point where it could be a huge problem and if it continues the same we would need at least 500 to reach cannon(The story is set before Aizen becomes a captain) But I hope the story would kick off soon. 4-Fighting scenes: Each fight have been entertaining and not too draged nor too fast, perfect and the author greatly showed Itachi’s analytical side and intelligence in or out of fights Over all 9/10 , the only thing the story needs is a bit faster pace and mote chapters.

LV 13

Fate32

Well to start off I believe you captured Itachi very well his mindset and its not something stupid like anime logic even with the Bleach character are writen well I have high hopes for this fic and ill keep sending PS Also author i believe you can start a Power stone goals for chapters

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AKIB19

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EmmericH

Loving it, it's one of the rare "X from x in the world of x" that i would recommend but it will be good that you have some knowledge from both Bleach and Naruto or you could feel a bit lost sometimes, my only grievance would be maybe a lack of true OC as most of the characters we would see Itachi interact with are cannon one, but definitely try it and make yourself your own opinion

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Zarek8_31_07

A very interesting premise and the execution is clean. My only complaint is the lack of chapters.