The story is goob but the grammar is pretty bad and i hope you can fux that somehow But anyways i support you so don’t give up
I’m glad you are open to feedback. First of all, it doesn’t make sense for him to be loyal to Marley because they will always treat Eldians like slaves, so the only future he has is with Eldia. Why is he behaving like a child and as if he doesn’t know the plot most of the time? Lol. Not to mention that changing the plot isn’t that simple because you have Eren seeing the past and future, so he’s bound to know something is up. And don’t forget that he will die in 13 years if he doesn’t get that sorted somehow. And for a supposed villain he sure isn’t villainous man, like what’s all this talk about saving the world? Don’t get me wrong i don’t want the world to be destroyed but he seems rather too concerned about others rather then himself and the fact that he’s cursed
What announcement?
I know right 😂😂 like what is this trash
Fix the grammar man it’s painful
You’re welcome, i am a new pateon sub i hope you keep up the great work
Hey author can i give you a better cover to us for the book since this cover you have on is outdated since the mc isn’t a child anymore
Hey author this story looks really interesting even though it’s a bit stretched out when it comes to skill info but anyways do you have any unreleased chapters on patreon i can read?
Overlord: Supremacy
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