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A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
4.75 (17 số lượng người đọc)
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In this story, a regular guy from our world wakes up as a young Main Branch heir of the powerful Hyuga clan in the Naruto world.
He's primarily interested in getting more power and doesn't care about right or wrong. He uses his knowledge from Earth and the Naruto show to get ahead, using his creativity & intellect to the utmost.
As he tries to become more powerful, we get to see sides of the Hyuga clan and ninja world that weren't shown in the original Naruto story.
He looks into the secrets of his ancestors and the Hyuga's eyes, and how ninja politics work, finding out things we never knew before & were left unexplored by the original author.
However, gradually, along the way, he also meets new lovers, friends, subordinates, and enemies and challenges the way things are done in the ninja world - and also tries to unify it in the process and bring real peace around.
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The Patreon link with up to 60 advanced chapters there -----> patreon.com/hanma_jack
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* Amoral and power-oriented MC. Four female leads, two of them are full OC, but logical for the story & interesting. Read tags carefully.
* Chapters may contain some parts where my own written words and existing structure are edited by AI to improve it slightly in quality.
* The story will definitely deviate from the original plot and events mainly due to the Butterfly Effect. Timeline around WW3, Kakashi's, Guy's, Asuma's, etc, generation.
* More fleshed-out, complete, logical, and realistic (dark) version of the Naruto world. So, slightly AU fundamentally at my discretion. High-quality English and writing.
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So far it's been a great Naruto World building fanfiction and I can see the author is trying to make a very logical fanfiction. But, 30 chapters in and he's still explain the intricacies of the Hugo Clan so not much can be said...🤷♂️ It's well written though, and it's not as boring as you might think 🤔
the atmosphere of the work is great, MC anti selfish hero. a different view of the clan's internal politics. A big defect is the prolixity, it can be very inconvenient. explanation of the Byakugan's abilities repeatedly, events that occurred just a few chapters ago. I recommend the Author review with AI or consider that many readers will read the work in the future. I hope the reading doesn't get tiring for them and for you to continue. great fanfiction.
Brother I have just finished your neji fanfic and I liked verymuch but I felt it's too rushed to be honest I see that you aren't making the same mistake here I hope that this new mc and I hope that u will show a humane side like neji in the latter part of the ur last novel plus romance and i will be very grateful not rushed one like the last novel plus more chapter I think it would be better if u followed the canon with some changes but not super big
Goodluck in writing this novel! Word of advice is limit yourself to post just one chap and bonus chap to make sure you have stockpiled chapters
For me overall 9/10 the only thing dragging it down is the extreme detail put into every chapter about things that we already know because this is a fan fiction not an actual new novel cuz everyone reading this has watched/read Naruto already so we don't need that extreme detail to know about the world that we already know it gets so bad that I have to skip paragraphs or even full chapters because they're just so much
This is definitely one of the more well thought out and interesting Naruto fanfics I’ve read so far, so I would definitely recommend it. However, the single complaint I have is that the pacing of the plot is a bit too slow. It doesn’t really matter, but will become increasingly more noticeable when you get caught up and are reading the story one chapter at a time.
finally a fanfic which explores the hyuga clan, because the 700 chapter one focuses too much on chimera technique. And in this one he can take control of the hyuga clan and change it, maybe brand everyone else with the cage bird in the main family
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Just read the first chap, the concept kinda remind me of this mtl ff that I once read about a hyuga. He was orochimaru’s student, that’s the only thing I recall and I remember it was a good read so I’m looking forward to this.
Im enjoying this a lot your changes to the clan and the village make the story very interesting. Im also enjoying his developing potential romance.
So far very good, the author presents very interesting and easy to accept ideas. My only problem so far is the MC's lack of interaction with the Konoha characters and lack of romance.
I love this fic!!! please is this a translation? If yes what is the original name ? I would subscribe to your patreon but it's banned in my country so help me with the name please 🥹🥹🙏
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author if the MC really wants to be strong and protect himself he has to be at the level of kaguya's children, so he can catch beasts with tails and cells from hashirama, tenseigan