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Barry's stupidity as the Flash...
Poor writing and consistency...
And the worst Villain that was never put down, Iris West.
The Flash is Derek Bond's favorite TV show, however, even he had to admit it had its flaws.
But that no longer had to be the case.
[Congratulation!]
[You have acquired the "Perfect Story" System!]
Waking in the world of the Flash, many people might be scared, wary or even angered.
But not Derek.
"This is my chance...I will make this story perfect!"
But there was just one problem.
[A Spontaneous Event has been triggered]
[Savitar, God of Speed, hunts you]
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Viết đánh giáIt's not terrible and not great either. Character design could use a massive overhaul. He should be dead 10x over by chapter 11, and it doesn't make much sense why he is alive. He also feels a bit bland and generic. The world background is just CW Flash, but it hasn't been developed yet in this fanfic, which is fine since it's still early, so no complaints there. The quality is decent, but the content itself is the only major gripe I have. Updates are also fine. If this stuff improves in the future, then I might change this review, but as it stands, it's an alright fic. Btw, I'm glad you scrapped the chat room idea since that rarely works.
Ok, I loved the flash. And there really are too few Cw stories out there so I gave this a try. It's goodish for me. Alright to read but not the stuff you'd be excited about. The stakes at the beginning are way too Intense. I personally hate systems that put the MC in problems without a generally good or coincidental reason. For Example, the MC is reborn in the body of a criminal or an identity that has life issues. That's a random problem. One that comes with the gig of being reborn, not one where the MC draws a random event and suddenly gets a big ass problem that is honestly too big for him to handle and will consequently require a full plot armor and unwarranted, undeserved system help to get out of. Which is honestly exactly what the Author did here. The system unlocks a random event which i still don't get why it is even a function and boom, we have Savitar awakening early. Is it trying to get the MC killed intentionally? Then the whole activating functions to help the MC feel forced. Much too forced. Honestly, I would have preferred the MC being reborn during the particle accelerator explosion and becoming a Metahuman with a cool ability. This Attribute system, rewritten in another way would have been nice as well. No offense author, but the whole Perfect Story part of the system feels fanboish, unnecessary and quite frankly let down a good story. My expectations dropped by chapter 4. A lot. still, it's your story, just leaving my own thoughts. Others will probably like it. You already got a neat fan base up for it. 👍👍👍
Honestly, I didn't expect much from this story. When I clicked the "read" button, I anticipated that I would click out after just four minutes of reading the first chapter. However, that was all it took to hook me in. It was well written, although there are some parts that don't make sense these are only minor errors and don’t significantly affect the progress of the story. As for the system, I initially thought it would be one of those fanfic where the main character instantly gains overpowering abilities. However, the system is well balanced and relies on how the main character utilizes it, rather than doing everything for them. Some readers might dislike this approach, while others might appreciate it. Personally, I find it to be a nice addition. Keep up the good work, author! I really like the direction you're taking with this story. Just like the system, I won't settle for anything less than a perfect story! Good luck!
So far so good............ I love a good Cw flash story. By the way author , one question can the protagonist have the "Still force"?. Or the eternal force? It would be a good plot point also it would be interesting seeing that force ( The Still force)in flash is super nerfed and is interesting seeing it's aplications , if it gets a creative user it would make much more (I could tell you some applications if you want). Plus with the protagonist Green eyes it 's a match made in heaven and as he is the villain this opposing force in particular is the nemesis of the speed force , so all fit in place. What do you think? Plus love the caithlyn hint
CW Flash: I Copy Attributes is a really fun fanfic with a cool power concept. The main character’s ability to copy attributes makes for some awesome moments, and the story fits well into the Flash universe. Its a must read id you like Flash verse. (i Just hope that authour doest drop this fanfic).
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I saw that you don't care about showing the fucking retarded and senseless way of thinking of the characters of the "Arrowverse" (shitty name). But this fanfic should be in the "TV" category instead of "Anime and Comics"
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👍 good, очень хороший фанфик надеюсь ты не прекратишь эту работу очень жду продолжения! Хочу продолжения!! Когда мс получить силу спидворса?
Awesome I guess it's just what it would be. No k bullshit. Keep it rolin'. Bor. Less than a mortal more than a cricket.Awesome I guess it's just what it would be. No k bullshit. Keep it rolin'. Bor. Less than a mortal more than a cricket.Awesome I guess it's just what it would be. No k bullshit. Keep it rolin'. Bor. Less than a mortal more than a cricket.
For anyone who read this Review , i can debate with everyone here or in the chapter comment section that the Still force is the best force of Flash CW despite it´s Little appearances
This stuff is refreshing, just some fire system novel without an op mc. Kind of a flash fan boy but it's fine.
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Updated Review: At the time I’m writing this review, I’ve uploaded 30 chapters of this story. I've seen people complaining about the start being a bit too “much” and to this. To this, I say that's fair. After all, that's what I was going for. A dramatic start to the story. It would be stupid of me to complain about that now. Its either for you or it isn’t. However, I will ask that you at least read past the first few chapters before coming to this conclusion, unlike most I've seen who haven't read past chapter 4. There are also the complaints about poor character development, again, read past the first few chapters and you'll see it isn't as bad as others let on. Whether you do or you don't, you still took the time to read my story which I'll always be grateful for. Thank you, and as usual, ill answer any questions I get in the replies