"If I don't use domain, I'm cooked!"
"[Domain Expansion: Idle Death Gamble]."
Anime & Comics · EliteMushroom
He's a 28 year old british man.
Toji likes money.
It's not like I can be a random cashier.
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
He's bullying minors. There's a difference.
I smiled. "Why is it fun messing with a 7-year-old."
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
Unconscious is just when he isn't conscious, so dead is also unconscious.
The momentum of his fist hits my face even though he is unconscious, and I get sent to the floor.
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
Revealed in later chapters.
Damn, I don't have something that can hit something that far away unless I use the Chain of a Thousand Miles, but it wouldn't be as effective if I made it that long.
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
He doesn't swallow the curse while kindaka is inside.
A bloodied man getting eaten by a purple worm.
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
It's not terrible and not great either. Character design could use a massive overhaul. He should be dead 10x over by chapter 11, and it doesn't make much sense why he is alive. He also feels a bit bland and generic. The world background is just CW Flash, but it hasn't been developed yet in this fanfic, which is fine since it's still early, so no complaints there. The quality is decent, but the content itself is the only major gripe I have. Updates are also fine. If this stuff improves in the future, then I might change this review, but as it stands, it's an alright fic. Btw, I'm glad you scrapped the chat room idea since that rarely works.
Bro has Uzuki as a pfp. 💀
Damn… I'm starting to run low on CE. If I run into another strong fighter, I may be in trouble.
In My Hero Academia with a Jujutsu Kaisen Gacha System
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW