Star Wars: The Yautja

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Sagvey_Ay

the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

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Danule

I've been reading on this platform for over a decade now. I normally get tired of kingdom building because it gets repetitive pretty fast. however this is the BEST kingdom building fanfic I have ever read 10/10 must read if you enjoy fanfics

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Daoist_Dan

A fun Star Wars story that more or less squinted at the Yautja part. The kingdom-building tag is the most important one and his system helps him out. It's worth a read. Slight spoiler. My one real criticism would be how out of character the first encounter with the Nightsisters and Jedi was. They seemed to show up just to ask a question and not care at all about what he would be doing. You know, for something the entire universe felt.

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DotComplex

10/10. No joke. I don't give that lightly, yet this one deserves it. The fact that something so good, that would be one of the top fanfics even on fanfiction.net or ao3, still isn't even in the top 5 blows my mind. We gotta get this higher.

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Sean_Morabito

It's quite good my man, especially for a new writer! But it can get all over the place with him sometimes being too overpowered, then you nerf him by having the system take the overpowered units away. Shouldn't have included them in the first place if that's the case and name-changing on main characters is confusing but other than that good job.

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Godymandias

As of Chapter 29.WQ: 2 - Not quite MTL but definitely not good.SD: 3 - Adequate but not good.CD: 1 - Wet Cardboard Boxes is the best way i could describe the characters. The MC is forgettable, The Side Characters are Forgettable, the author appears to try and give everything a light and comedic tone but it's not funny.US: I don't know, i forgot to check, so 5.WB: 3 - Alright, although the timeline is unclear and it appears to be AU.

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OverlordBGs

My friend, this is a kind story. That hooked me up from the beginning, and the MC has excellent development throughout the chapters. The story is neither fast nor slow. I can’t wait to see Jial mastering both sides of the force.

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Voldemortt

ta indo muito bem continue assim .............................................................................................................................

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But

Reasons why I rated this so low…. 1. It’s a choice system, the main character will never have a original thought throughout the entire novel. 2. On his first choice he literally goes against what he was about to do because of the choices. 3. Also on his first choice it was a summon, you’re 2 chapters in and your already summoning shit from another world. 4. Hes ugly.

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Mogroka

It’s good.. The issue I have is the system rewards are all over the place. I wish it stuck with Aliens instead of going to w40k

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XLR8LEGLEND

Honestly its just a system with Yautja equipment given and more force and lightsaber so idk but the story plot is great read!!.

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DaoistM0NRNs

Great star wars fanfiction it had an intresting concept and plot and the writing quality was good. It was a joy to read and end enjoy this work.

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Jeff_freakin_Bozos

Great story so far, can’t wait for more chapters

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TheEldritchPookie

I was just scrolling through ranking .The name is enough to catch my eyes........Perfect plotline and one of its most unique kind if story .

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MrXmc

The system literally killed this story for me...........................................................................................................

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DukeMaster

can't wait for more chapters it's very entertaining

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ACDPQS

nice........................................................................................................................................

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GreyKnights

the best starwars fanfic on webnovel

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Equilibrium123

Very good so good in fact that I cannot wait for more. This book is a gem hidden in plain sight.