Holy smokes, even Onix knows Dragon Dance?
Pokemon: Psychic Master
Video Games · michaeI
Blue*
"By the way, where's Green?" Johan asked, noticing the absence of the professor's grandson.
Pokemon: Psychic Master
Video Games · michaeI
The rewrite fits a lot better with the character we've seen so far, thanks for being an absolute goat of an author and taking your readers' opinion into consideration :)
3-4 months tf?? Summer breaks in most places across the world are maximum 2 months long. In both India and China they're only 8 weeks. I'm assuming this novel is talking about the chinese summer break so summer + winter break is 4 months total here.
The academic pressure in the Pokémon world wasn't as intense as some other places, meaning winter breaks were just as long as summer ones—a delight for students and teachers alike.
Pokemon: Psychic Master
Video Games · michaeI
This feels more like character regression than development lol, find it hard to believe anyone could go into memory-induced shock from one aggressive woman after going through what he has.
Something I want to focus on this volume is the character development/arc of Aldric. I don't want him to be a vehicle to tell the story like regular fanfics but a character himself. With his own flaws ,weaknesses and development. He is not perfect. I've hinted to it before but now I want to focus on it. I hope that it comes across well that there is more to him than a person sent to the world of shadow slave.
Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning
Book&Literature · Lahi
Breaks my character image
This subconscious feeling was what drove him to challenge the Undeworld's Torment in the colosseum of the Dark City. An attempt to prove to himself that he was not overly reliant on the future that he knew and that he could deal with unforeseen challenges.
Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning
Book&Literature · Lahi
This section could've gone better ngl, I understand the need to self-reflect but sometimes confidence can just be confidence, it doesn't have to be a fragile veneer over his gnawing inferiority.
This subconscious feeling was what drove him to challenge the Undeworld's Torment in the colosseum of the Dark City. An attempt to prove to himself that he was not overly reliant on the future that he knew and that he could deal with unforeseen challenges.
Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning
Book&Literature · Lahi
I honestly would never have guessed lmao I was imagining something much more r'hllorian
Dotcomplex: The Dark Sea's Firstborn is based on Chaos from Sonic. His base form. Been in my Sonic bag lately.
Shadow Slave: Possibilities Without Meaning
Book&Literature · Lahi
"Why? I am serving the purpose of humanity and doing what is necessary for our survival and victory. It is my duty and the greatest honor."
Wandering Phantom-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · FieryBaldachin
Learn something new every day
"By the way, where's Green?" Johan asked, noticing the absence of the professor's grandson.
Pokemon: Psychic Master
Video Games · michaeI