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Viết đánh giáThis is one of the best Pokémon fanfics out there won’t regrets reading this it even improves the characters background makes some characters more like able and even brings old characters you may have forgotten long ago
Make a separate story about Ashtwo, and abra show, stop using them as a filler chapter. It is so annoying OG ash story getting shorter cause of filler chapters . Please stop ash rudely calling just there names like Oak,Jenny,Joy, please properly put their title beside there names. Originally pokemon made by Japanese. When Ash asking something they looks like 10 years old he is just calling there names damn so rude.
It's pretty good overall. But I believe that it could have been better as the story is far too slow paced. While I do enjoy the interactions but sometimes it just gets cheezy and repetitive. At last thankyou for writing this and hope you would continue to do so author. Thank you❤
Would rate higher but the random use of game mechanics in fights and the horrible shadow clone usage really kills it for me.
Love it and I hope this keeps updateing and I just love yellow so hope she's in it and hopefully she finds out what happened and good luck good day and good night
Writing could use a little work. Mainly just Grammer issues and weird sentence/paragraph structure. But the story is top tier. MC is likable, not stupid, and takes advantage where possible, thus making the most out of his new life. The random Easter eggs are great and well incorporated. Averall well worth the read and highly recommend.
excellent must read!! the best Pokemon fanfiction to read!! [img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed]
Im sure it gets better but iIcould only handle like 20 chapters before the fic got too boring, nothing exuciting or fun stuff happens, the dialogue is okay but again it's kinda dull, the entirety of what i read was dull
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes while reading. The characters seem fun and similar to their manga/anime counterpart. I like how the MC is actually smart but still funny at times. The only reason I took a star off for World Background was because we were told in the beginning he was sent to a "Hard Mode" pokemon world but it's not. It is more fun adventure and shenanigans.
The only problem I have is the update speed. Some grammatical error here and there but it really doesn't affect the overall story. Other than that it's good, great even. Anyone who read this, give it a try, this closely follow the manga with some variations (fanfic obviously).
Is this harem? or any plans to introduce harem? I will keep it 5 star if it is. DO you have plans to introduce Harem. DO you have plans to introduce Harem
You know, for me being a Head Scientist in Katsu’s discord server. I sure am low in FanValue 😅 Anyway came to write a review but I'm just gonna leave it short. The writing is a great part of the story, if there are people looking for good writing. Ash is a cheeky guy but can rock your shit if he so wills it. Misty is Misty Brock is still a huge simp for beautiful woman but with the bro code added onto him. Yellow is a Sweet Spring Child. The progression of the story is at a moderate pace, we are in Johto, story-wise, the plot is at a good progression(unlike another Pokemon story I’m currently reading. Looking at you PAUA) The Pokemon are fun to read about, especially Abra. She is our one and only SENIOR SISTER! She will make you walk towards the right path in cultivation! Pikachu is a ketchupholic, my guy can't get away from them for even a second. World building is simple to understand. Well I shall end it here, would have loved to add more but then it would become a novel in its own. Long story short: Read the Story, you will like it.
I liked the story so far, loved how mega evolution is brought into the mix. Didn't really like how paldea was introduced into the story, too many characters from games really complicated the story. Hope you make the battle bond a permanent thing unique to ash only. Ooh... and i HATE misty's character so far.. Overall this one's a nice read👌 Really appreciate you not dropping this work👍👍👍
It's a really good story overall, the pacing is good and author really blends the cannon events well with the journey. Thx for the good work author.✌️✌️✌️💐💐💐
Hola, me encanto el fanfic y creo que tiene una de las mejores historia en base del anime, manga y películas. Cómo el autor utilizo mayormente una trama pacífica pero que se puede poner temas oscuros y serios pero que no cambia el estilo que lleva transcurriendo es del comienzo.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThisstory if one, if not the best fanfiction on pokemon i ever read, from the story, plot, character depth, humor and writting everything is perfect and if there were 2 fanfics who could rival yours one is dropped while the other is still going but yours got way better humor and character interaction Conclusion: this fanfic is MAGNIFICIENT
Bueno es un excelente historia nada que decir muy recomendable. Pero personalmente me canso recomiendo leer poco a poco yo leí más de 140 capítulos en poco tiempo y fue un error de mi parte. Al final el tono cómico del autor me canso. Todo es una comedia y a la larga se hace monótono. Una broma colocada en el momento perfecto es mucho más graciosa en comparación con muchas bromas continuas. No pido que hubiera violencia o "realidad" como en otras historias de pokemon qué solo ocupan ese término para poder escribir temas tristes y trágicos. Pero tampoco debería ser todo comedia. Por otra parte el asunto del clon seguramente el autor lo hizo para equilibrar un poco la historia, pero el asunto es que aunque sea la misma persona el clon es el clon y el protagonista es el protagonista nunca será mismo.
I like the story up until now. the mc seems to have a lot of pokemons with mutations that didn't get to shine as much it should and the bond evolution with charizard, hope you make the bond evolution not a one time gig. 👍👍👍 (i personally don't like Green so i maybe a bit biased while saying this, but i would prefer if the interractions with Green are kept to a bare minimum.)
Tiết lộ Spoilerone of the best pokemon fics I have seen does not have the pokemon ingredients thing and stuff like potentials of green,yellow,etc. fun story some very hype moments in the series so far.
It's a really good one. I have read many Pokemon fanfics and this is one of the best out there. The story really feels like a journey and us being a part of that journey. Thanks very much author.
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I've read 3 other pokemon fanfic so far and this one is my favorite. I totally recommend reading it.
Its very good. At the start its a bit iffy, but it gets really good after 20ish chapter. Worldbuidling is awesome, i like what the author did with the fusion of Games/Anime. Mc is smart, trains for his "Power" and most importantly is not a simp for every female there is. Very solid team, i like the mutations and stuff. Honestly better then most, if not the best I've read. Good job author, you can write!
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Shameless obligatory author review, Upload schedule is currently Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Stick around if you want a story that I don't completely know everything I'm going to do. So we're in this together.
This is one of the best Pokémon fanfics out there won’t regrets reading this it even improves the characters background makes some characters more like able and even brings old characters you may have forgotten long ago
Make a separate story about Ashtwo, and abra show, stop using them as a filler chapter. It is so annoying OG ash story getting shorter cause of filler chapters . Please stop ash rudely calling just there names like Oak,Jenny,Joy, please properly put their title beside there names. Originally pokemon made by Japanese. When Ash asking something they looks like 10 years old he is just calling there names damn so rude.
It's pretty good overall. But I believe that it could have been better as the story is far too slow paced. While I do enjoy the interactions but sometimes it just gets cheezy and repetitive. At last thankyou for writing this and hope you would continue to do so author. Thank you❤
Would rate higher but the random use of game mechanics in fights and the horrible shadow clone usage really kills it for me.
Love it and I hope this keeps updateing and I just love yellow so hope she's in it and hopefully she finds out what happened and good luck good day and good night
Writing could use a little work. Mainly just Grammer issues and weird sentence/paragraph structure. But the story is top tier. MC is likable, not stupid, and takes advantage where possible, thus making the most out of his new life. The random Easter eggs are great and well incorporated. Averall well worth the read and highly recommend.
excellent must read!! the best Pokemon fanfiction to read!! [img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed][img=Relaxed]
Im sure it gets better but iIcould only handle like 20 chapters before the fic got too boring, nothing exuciting or fun stuff happens, the dialogue is okay but again it's kinda dull, the entirety of what i read was dull
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes while reading. The characters seem fun and similar to their manga/anime counterpart. I like how the MC is actually smart but still funny at times. The only reason I took a star off for World Background was because we were told in the beginning he was sent to a "Hard Mode" pokemon world but it's not. It is more fun adventure and shenanigans.
The only problem I have is the update speed. Some grammatical error here and there but it really doesn't affect the overall story. Other than that it's good, great even. Anyone who read this, give it a try, this closely follow the manga with some variations (fanfic obviously).
Is this harem? or any plans to introduce harem? I will keep it 5 star if it is. DO you have plans to introduce Harem. DO you have plans to introduce Harem
You know, for me being a Head Scientist in Katsu’s discord server. I sure am low in FanValue 😅 Anyway came to write a review but I'm just gonna leave it short. The writing is a great part of the story, if there are people looking for good writing. Ash is a cheeky guy but can rock your shit if he so wills it. Misty is Misty Brock is still a huge simp for beautiful woman but with the bro code added onto him. Yellow is a Sweet Spring Child. The progression of the story is at a moderate pace, we are in Johto, story-wise, the plot is at a good progression(unlike another Pokemon story I’m currently reading. Looking at you PAUA) The Pokemon are fun to read about, especially Abra. She is our one and only SENIOR SISTER! She will make you walk towards the right path in cultivation! Pikachu is a ketchupholic, my guy can't get away from them for even a second. World building is simple to understand. Well I shall end it here, would have loved to add more but then it would become a novel in its own. Long story short: Read the Story, you will like it.
I liked the story so far, loved how mega evolution is brought into the mix. Didn't really like how paldea was introduced into the story, too many characters from games really complicated the story. Hope you make the battle bond a permanent thing unique to ash only. Ooh... and i HATE misty's character so far.. Overall this one's a nice read👌 Really appreciate you not dropping this work👍👍👍
It's a really good story overall, the pacing is good and author really blends the cannon events well with the journey. Thx for the good work author.✌️✌️✌️💐💐💐
Hola, me encanto el fanfic y creo que tiene una de las mejores historia en base del anime, manga y películas. Cómo el autor utilizo mayormente una trama pacífica pero que se puede poner temas oscuros y serios pero que no cambia el estilo que lleva transcurriendo es del comienzo.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThisstory if one, if not the best fanfiction on pokemon i ever read, from the story, plot, character depth, humor and writting everything is perfect and if there were 2 fanfics who could rival yours one is dropped while the other is still going but yours got way better humor and character interaction Conclusion: this fanfic is MAGNIFICIENT
Bueno es un excelente historia nada que decir muy recomendable. Pero personalmente me canso recomiendo leer poco a poco yo leí más de 140 capítulos en poco tiempo y fue un error de mi parte. Al final el tono cómico del autor me canso. Todo es una comedia y a la larga se hace monótono. Una broma colocada en el momento perfecto es mucho más graciosa en comparación con muchas bromas continuas. No pido que hubiera violencia o "realidad" como en otras historias de pokemon qué solo ocupan ese término para poder escribir temas tristes y trágicos. Pero tampoco debería ser todo comedia. Por otra parte el asunto del clon seguramente el autor lo hizo para equilibrar un poco la historia, pero el asunto es que aunque sea la misma persona el clon es el clon y el protagonista es el protagonista nunca será mismo.
I like the story up until now. the mc seems to have a lot of pokemons with mutations that didn't get to shine as much it should and the bond evolution with charizard, hope you make the bond evolution not a one time gig. 👍👍👍 (i personally don't like Green so i maybe a bit biased while saying this, but i would prefer if the interractions with Green are kept to a bare minimum.)
Tiết lộ Spoilerone of the best pokemon fics I have seen does not have the pokemon ingredients thing and stuff like potentials of green,yellow,etc. fun story some very hype moments in the series so far.
It's a really good one. I have read many Pokemon fanfics and this is one of the best out there. The story really feels like a journey and us being a part of that journey. Thanks very much author.
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I've read 3 other pokemon fanfic so far and this one is my favorite. I totally recommend reading it.
Its very good. At the start its a bit iffy, but it gets really good after 20ish chapter. Worldbuidling is awesome, i like what the author did with the fusion of Games/Anime. Mc is smart, trains for his "Power" and most importantly is not a simp for every female there is. Very solid team, i like the mutations and stuff. Honestly better then most, if not the best I've read. Good job author, you can write!
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Shameless obligatory author review, Upload schedule is currently Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Stick around if you want a story that I don't completely know everything I'm going to do. So we're in this together.