"That's some skill" reads better
"That's the skill you have there. Seems you can use your tongue to do more than inflicting wounds on people's ego," he said appreciatively.
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture
That way, it reads, "It's amusing" instead of "It's a boy amusing" which doesn't make sense.
Zafron, still processing the shock, shook his head in disbelief. "I don't know," he murmured. "But Vex's reputation precedes him. A certified womanizer if there ever was one. It's a boy amusing though how he moved from Matilda to now one of if not her closest friends,"
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture
remove "a boy" from the last sentence
Zafron, still processing the shock, shook his head in disbelief. "I don't know," he murmured. "But Vex's reputation precedes him. A certified womanizer if there ever was one. It's a boy amusing though how he moved from Matilda to now one of if not her closest friends,"
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture
'Maybe she's secretly insane,' he pondered. 'Rich people can afford to be eccentric, right? For all I know, she collects ex-slaves like some people collect stamps. Or maybe this is all an elaborate prank for some twisted reality show. "Punk'd: Drakoria Edition."'
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture
Better get that hand exercised!
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture
same. worst character development of all the main characters.
From what I have heard. When Vegeta learned that I destroyed the androids, he pretty much just fucked off from Earth
The Ultimate Saiyan Warrior Reborn
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
same with goten
First off, he learned from Gohan, a Gohan that never 'completed' his training
The Ultimate Saiyan Warrior Reborn
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
alolan ninetails is where it's at
'Hmm, maybe an Eevee or a Scyther... Oh, a Ninetales would be really cool.'
Pokémon : An Unexpected Odyssey
Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
agreed, but to each their own I guess
Sorry lads, and possible ladies. Been busy with the Runescape double exp event for the past few days so not had time to write much or post. We'll resume back normal on sunday.
Pokemon: Jordinio Version
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
I'm really enjoying the story, but one thing I can't stand so far is that they just accept Steele's words without any evidence. I understand that he's solved several cases, but I assume that those were also solved using his ability. All of his cases are closed by whatever he says happened. This doesn't line up with how professional the enforcer officers I imagine in my mind would accept. It seems like a large rather reach that these officers would just accept what he says happened. Just cause he can see what happened ≠ what he says happened
"Mount... a manhunt," he ordered, his voice suddenly sharp and commanding. "Any cart... leaving the city. Especially... those heading to Lumina."
I, the slave boy, awaken with the most potent seed!!
Fantasy · RetardedCulture