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Now that I'm more or less halfway through the currently uploaded chapters, thought I'll give it a review. Has a poor start(had dropped it initially), but once you get into it, it's really good. Author does make quite a few common grammatical errors as well as wrong usage of words, but not enough to be off putting. Story wise it's pretty good, though pacing can be better. Has good world building, a few parellel plot lines and most importantly author does ask for feedback on things to improve or avoid, so it's only gonna get better as it progresses. Overall it's one of the few pokemon fanfics I can say is worth reading.
it's just fantastic, fantabulous, amazing idk what to say I've read like 110 chapter's and its just truly amazing if you want an fic with og manga,games and such it's for you brothers just read it once if you love Pokemon and yes at 1st 10-15 chapters the grammar is bad but readable but after that its's Good 👍😊 that's it..
I like the story but the age of graduation for different regions is a bit messed up. Mostly, because in the anime we know that Paul has travelled and participated in other regional leagues before shinno, the experiences form those make him one of the greatest rival of ash.
"⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Pokemon: Radical Redux is an absolute masterpiece! The way the author weaves together an engaging story with well-developed characters and creative plot twists is truly impressive. Each chapter is a delightful blend of nostalgia and innovation, bringing a fresh perspective to the Pokemon universe. The attention to detail and the depth of the world-building make this fanfic stand out. Whether you’re a long-time Pokemon fan or new to the fandom, this story is a must-read. Kudos to the author for their incredible work and dedication!"
I like it, the beginning isn't perfect but the Author admits that, and it gets better fast, interactions don't feel like forced dialog and it isn't a complete 1 to 1 recreation of the anime
hello first i like this story very much second in chapter 124 in the end brock got a bonsly and yellow gave him congratulations saying that he finally got i grass type and ash said he was going to say it and everyone stoped him i did not understand the joke so pls tell what was it he was going to say to yellow pls
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This novel reminds me of another one that has the same vibe but with a more emo touch. I'm glad I found this story............................
This is the Ash that i wanted to see in the franchise.He knows what he's doing and not a naive brat who yells his name and his village every chance he gets.... the author making the story well paced and keep things interesting, the updates are consistent, I'd say quite a satisfying read. As for romance I'm happy to inform that there is not much (you know there's a little thing called being a 10 year old). I'm all for harem ending as long as it's a medium sized 4 or 5 would be a good number (just saying). All in all as long as the author don't drop it I'm in for the ride😎😎😎
It is definately one of the highest quality pokemon fanfiction out there on web novel.
Best pokemon fic on Webnovel right now, has great development with many different characters from all types of pokemon media like adventures. The chapters are also long so you won't burn out quickly, and the author looks like they are updating it regularily aswell. Keep going author!!!
Excelente, muy buena en verdad, he leído varios fan-ficción de pokemon y este es uno de dos que me encantan con todo corazón. No tengo ninguna critica hasta ahora por lo que lo único que debo añadir es mis sinceros agradecimientos al autor por esta obra
Writing Quality 3-4 ☆ Update Stability 5 ☆ Story Development 4 ☆ Character Design 3-4 ☆ world background 4 ☆ The story started well, it is interesting how it united the various pokemon worlds into one, in the first chapters there were too many time jumps, but this was good to give us a little information about this new world, avoiding information dumps and the filled with what the protagonist experienced in his first 10 years of life. After chapter 70, certain annoying things became more visible, such as: the failed attempts at jokes in dangerous situations, the random way in which the protagonist acts, speaks or thinks, this was especially unpleasant because it gave him a feeling of madness and inconsistency with respect to his background. I also felt the lack or scarcity of interaction between Pokémon and their trainers, most of the time the plot is more related to the battles. One of the things I appreciate is that although it has realistic or tragic elements, it does not focus on this aspect unlike most pokemon fanfiction. Finally, the author got too carried away with the possibilities of aura, I came here for pokemon, I didn't come for things like dragon ball, JJK, one piece and naruto, lately I feel that the story seems messy or with a lot of unnecessary content. It's just my opinion, the story is not the best you could hope to read, but it is still interesting and from chapter 1 to 85 I had no desire to stop reading.
I really like your story, regarding whether to evolve into Pikachu, you could catch a female Alola Pikachu and evolve it into an Alola Raichu, this way you can get a girlfriend for your Pokémon partner and you can fill your pokedex even more. You can also give the gigamax gene to your pikachu and have it learn pika moves.
It's very hard to put how I feel about this story into sensible words, but the narration and plot of this book feels like I'm having a conversation with the story rather than being a third party witnessing the events unfold if that makes sense, and to me it kills the whimsy of storytelling and makes it into a novel I can't find myself immersing into. Not a fan of that writing style.
It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
i do not have nothing to say i think you make an excellent job developed the world ,the elections of the pokemon are great ,the fights are great ,maybe the way of the pokemon learn new attacks need more explanation but i think that the way you show us makes the story advance with a good speed so i am enjoying this and hope others too.
As of Chapter 110, this is a REALLY good pokemon fic. The grammar is excellent, there are no problems with the characters at all, the world is slowly but steadily expanding at a good pace, and this fic has the best version of Ash I have ever seen. My only concern at this point is the amount of side quests that have happened since beating the 3rd gym. It kinda feels like the story came to a complete halt, but hopefully that changes soon. Besides, that great pokemon fic.
I have to admit I have read many different Pokemon fanfic and nothing come close this great one, Ash is smart funny, the way he speaks make his character quite great and yeah totally a cultural man As for the story line I have to say it's really great, Author-chan😙 used a original concept from the childhood arc to start of the journey and even afterwords as Ash try stay the storyline on track as much as he can,there are some manga and movie events are also present [I'll recommend you guys to read it] Overall if I have to say the people for Redical Red world are smart as their character shows more than what they are not just some copy paste for cannon {I say 4.8/5} The only reason I really didn't give this 5 stars is due to romance and harem😚 well as a fellow weeb you guys understand, Author-chan did said he would think about it and it shows a hint in few chapters as girls reaction due to Ash (do yeah I'll trust you Author-chan) and it's been 107 chapters don't know when will Papa Red (presumed) will come back with milk
Just read it..... It's great, Way better than original to be honest A must Read for poke lovers
don't drop it is the best powmon fanfic in a while, write more instead.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It is one of the finest Pokemon fanfiction I have read since -1. Zero Cringe and Chinese Stuff2. Feels like a different story than copy-paste of the anime.3. MC(Ash) uses his brain in this one, i.e., the author isn't always high and does research his stuff properly.4. Other characters also grow like Yellow , Brock, and Misty, as far as I remember and not just completely MC based-story.5. It's a mix of mangas, anime, and others.So yeah, read it. I promise you , it won't be disappointing, at least.
Ok, this story is simply the definition of "A Good Adaptation without cringe elements" all is amazing, this arc of Black Fog is a Crazy, Jojo references, good humor, Shirohige it's been in SS.Anne without any reason is so great, totally recomended, man, Pikachu have more developement tan the Pikachu of Anime, the MC is very smart and the plot is incredible, i always read this thing until it finishing, really good writer, keep it up.
Give it a try 😉 It's cringe free, and you don't have to lose brain cells to read, and the author really had done extensive research on Pokemon moves and used it in battle how a trainer should use he just didn't spam moves .
Warning!!!!!!!.....This novel has a major flaw. Its so entertaining to read and I finished it in no time. Worst thing about this novel is that there aren't 100 daily chapters.😂😂
The writing quality is good and the updates seem to be stable, Kudos for that 😃My only gripe is that you've changed nothing. There were chapters that I thought were not necessary like going to Alola, chasing Mew, saving Serena and so on... To be frank they were boring 😅I am not a writer so I wouldn't understand if there is a plan and you would diverge later. But all these built up and I quit reading for now. I am sorry if this sounded rude but it's my honest opinion and I hope you do you and continue writing. Cheers 🙂
Now that I'm more or less halfway through the currently uploaded chapters, thought I'll give it a review. Has a poor start(had dropped it initially), but once you get into it, it's really good. Author does make quite a few common grammatical errors as well as wrong usage of words, but not enough to be off putting. Story wise it's pretty good, though pacing can be better. Has good world building, a few parellel plot lines and most importantly author does ask for feedback on things to improve or avoid, so it's only gonna get better as it progresses. Overall it's one of the few pokemon fanfics I can say is worth reading.
it's just fantastic, fantabulous, amazing idk what to say I've read like 110 chapter's and its just truly amazing if you want an fic with og manga,games and such it's for you brothers just read it once if you love Pokemon and yes at 1st 10-15 chapters the grammar is bad but readable but after that its's Good 👍😊 that's it..
I like the story but the age of graduation for different regions is a bit messed up. Mostly, because in the anime we know that Paul has travelled and participated in other regional leagues before shinno, the experiences form those make him one of the greatest rival of ash.
"⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Pokemon: Radical Redux is an absolute masterpiece! The way the author weaves together an engaging story with well-developed characters and creative plot twists is truly impressive. Each chapter is a delightful blend of nostalgia and innovation, bringing a fresh perspective to the Pokemon universe. The attention to detail and the depth of the world-building make this fanfic stand out. Whether you’re a long-time Pokemon fan or new to the fandom, this story is a must-read. Kudos to the author for their incredible work and dedication!"
I like it, the beginning isn't perfect but the Author admits that, and it gets better fast, interactions don't feel like forced dialog and it isn't a complete 1 to 1 recreation of the anime
hello first i like this story very much second in chapter 124 in the end brock got a bonsly and yellow gave him congratulations saying that he finally got i grass type and ash said he was going to say it and everyone stoped him i did not understand the joke so pls tell what was it he was going to say to yellow pls
Tiết lộ Spoiler This novel reminds me of another one that has the same vibe but with a more emo touch. I'm glad I found this story............................
This is the Ash that i wanted to see in the franchise.He knows what he's doing and not a naive brat who yells his name and his village every chance he gets.... the author making the story well paced and keep things interesting, the updates are consistent, I'd say quite a satisfying read. As for romance I'm happy to inform that there is not much (you know there's a little thing called being a 10 year old). I'm all for harem ending as long as it's a medium sized 4 or 5 would be a good number (just saying). All in all as long as the author don't drop it I'm in for the ride😎😎😎
It is definately one of the highest quality pokemon fanfiction out there on web novel.
Best pokemon fic on Webnovel right now, has great development with many different characters from all types of pokemon media like adventures. The chapters are also long so you won't burn out quickly, and the author looks like they are updating it regularily aswell. Keep going author!!!
Excelente, muy buena en verdad, he leído varios fan-ficción de pokemon y este es uno de dos que me encantan con todo corazón. No tengo ninguna critica hasta ahora por lo que lo único que debo añadir es mis sinceros agradecimientos al autor por esta obra
Writing Quality 3-4 ☆ Update Stability 5 ☆ Story Development 4 ☆ Character Design 3-4 ☆ world background 4 ☆ The story started well, it is interesting how it united the various pokemon worlds into one, in the first chapters there were too many time jumps, but this was good to give us a little information about this new world, avoiding information dumps and the filled with what the protagonist experienced in his first 10 years of life. After chapter 70, certain annoying things became more visible, such as: the failed attempts at jokes in dangerous situations, the random way in which the protagonist acts, speaks or thinks, this was especially unpleasant because it gave him a feeling of madness and inconsistency with respect to his background. I also felt the lack or scarcity of interaction between Pokémon and their trainers, most of the time the plot is more related to the battles. One of the things I appreciate is that although it has realistic or tragic elements, it does not focus on this aspect unlike most pokemon fanfiction. Finally, the author got too carried away with the possibilities of aura, I came here for pokemon, I didn't come for things like dragon ball, JJK, one piece and naruto, lately I feel that the story seems messy or with a lot of unnecessary content. It's just my opinion, the story is not the best you could hope to read, but it is still interesting and from chapter 1 to 85 I had no desire to stop reading.
I really like your story, regarding whether to evolve into Pikachu, you could catch a female Alola Pikachu and evolve it into an Alola Raichu, this way you can get a girlfriend for your Pokémon partner and you can fill your pokedex even more. You can also give the gigamax gene to your pikachu and have it learn pika moves.
It's very hard to put how I feel about this story into sensible words, but the narration and plot of this book feels like I'm having a conversation with the story rather than being a third party witnessing the events unfold if that makes sense, and to me it kills the whimsy of storytelling and makes it into a novel I can't find myself immersing into. Not a fan of that writing style.
It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
i do not have nothing to say i think you make an excellent job developed the world ,the elections of the pokemon are great ,the fights are great ,maybe the way of the pokemon learn new attacks need more explanation but i think that the way you show us makes the story advance with a good speed so i am enjoying this and hope others too.
As of Chapter 110, this is a REALLY good pokemon fic. The grammar is excellent, there are no problems with the characters at all, the world is slowly but steadily expanding at a good pace, and this fic has the best version of Ash I have ever seen. My only concern at this point is the amount of side quests that have happened since beating the 3rd gym. It kinda feels like the story came to a complete halt, but hopefully that changes soon. Besides, that great pokemon fic.
I have to admit I have read many different Pokemon fanfic and nothing come close this great one, Ash is smart funny, the way he speaks make his character quite great and yeah totally a cultural man As for the story line I have to say it's really great, Author-chan😙 used a original concept from the childhood arc to start of the journey and even afterwords as Ash try stay the storyline on track as much as he can,there are some manga and movie events are also present [I'll recommend you guys to read it] Overall if I have to say the people for Redical Red world are smart as their character shows more than what they are not just some copy paste for cannon {I say 4.8/5} The only reason I really didn't give this 5 stars is due to romance and harem😚 well as a fellow weeb you guys understand, Author-chan did said he would think about it and it shows a hint in few chapters as girls reaction due to Ash (do yeah I'll trust you Author-chan) and it's been 107 chapters don't know when will Papa Red (presumed) will come back with milk
Just read it..... It's great, Way better than original to be honest A must Read for poke lovers
don't drop it is the best powmon fanfic in a while, write more instead.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Tiết lộ Spoiler It is one of the finest Pokemon fanfiction I have read since -1. Zero Cringe and Chinese Stuff2. Feels like a different story than copy-paste of the anime.3. MC(Ash) uses his brain in this one, i.e., the author isn't always high and does research his stuff properly.4. Other characters also grow like Yellow , Brock, and Misty, as far as I remember and not just completely MC based-story.5. It's a mix of mangas, anime, and others.So yeah, read it. I promise you , it won't be disappointing, at least.
Ok, this story is simply the definition of "A Good Adaptation without cringe elements" all is amazing, this arc of Black Fog is a Crazy, Jojo references, good humor, Shirohige it's been in SS.Anne without any reason is so great, totally recomended, man, Pikachu have more developement tan the Pikachu of Anime, the MC is very smart and the plot is incredible, i always read this thing until it finishing, really good writer, keep it up.
Give it a try 😉 It's cringe free, and you don't have to lose brain cells to read, and the author really had done extensive research on Pokemon moves and used it in battle how a trainer should use he just didn't spam moves .
Warning!!!!!!!.....This novel has a major flaw. Its so entertaining to read and I finished it in no time. Worst thing about this novel is that there aren't 100 daily chapters.😂😂
The writing quality is good and the updates seem to be stable, Kudos for that 😃My only gripe is that you've changed nothing. There were chapters that I thought were not necessary like going to Alola, chasing Mew, saving Serena and so on... To be frank they were boring 😅I am not a writer so I wouldn't understand if there is a plan and you would diverge later. But all these built up and I quit reading for now. I am sorry if this sounded rude but it's my honest opinion and I hope you do you and continue writing. Cheers 🙂
excellent must read!! the best Pokemon fanfiction to read!!