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Writing quality 4.8/5 Updates 4/5 Story development 5/5 Character design 3.8/5 World background 5/5 World background is a given it a fan fic, I gave the novel five stars because there are very few novel I like and will read so I like to support author that I like.
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Honestly I read this novel when it just had like 10 chapters and I would not put it in my top 10 Naruto Fanfics Novels, however I decided to re-read this whole novel and I can say with great certain that is on my top 3 Naruto Fanfic Novels of all time It his a story that builds up with the passage of time and gets u more and more invested in it as u read it. I start reading this novel at 10A.M. and didn't stopped till now, it's 23.52P.M. right now where I am. It was a great enjoyment that made my day The author builds the MC interactions with the world, the people and the effects that his actions have on the story with an almost perfect writing style that lets me the reader imagine the scenes of either the everyday day life and the fights that happen The fact that the author makes the MC invests in relationships and political power (it's not the focus I swear) helps me in actually imagining this as 'real world' with 'real consequences' Hands down one of the best Fanfics I've ever read on this App I'm truly truly thankful for all the hard work u have put in this novel Thx for all the chapters so far, moreeee Pls xD
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loved the realism. honestly wished I read it after it was completed as I can't wait for the next chapters. so just wanted to say thank you to the author for this novel. THANK YOU MIKE
The best fanfic with this theme I've read so far. I honestly have nothing truly negative to say about it. It's the only one where it actually feels like the characters are living in the world they are in, not just passing by living an ethereal and inconsequential adventure.
A Really good story , good character dvp , the mc is infuriating at the begining and makes lots of mistakes but that's life , a lot of reviews complain about it but people are flawed and who know what somebody would do in this situation , the evolution of the MC is well done (still there is the shadow clone thing : author deliberatly make the mc dumb on that issue , seriously he learns it after a longggg time although it would have been helpful in lots of situations and he even recognize it) anyway i really like the fic and i hope it will continue (maybee a little more updates)
The amount of hate in the comments as you read is honestly upsetting. It’s a fan fiction, of course it is not 100% loyal to the source, yet still follows it properly and gives a coherent narrative that one can enjoy if you overlook small mistakes such as grammar and other small things. It isn’t the holy grail of stories, but it’s a solid read worth enjoying.
Its a good story but the mc doesnt act like how a normal person would act if they knew the exact date of potential death. Like if u knew that on a certain date unless u do somethinh drastic u gonna die cuz 2 of the strongest ppl currently alive are gonna come for you, u wouldnt be taking half masesure which is what most of his actions feel like.
Fresh story featuring a more realistic take on getting sent to another world. The story is great but the problem is the way mc development is stated. I'm reading chapter 41 now where mc previous jonin sensei says that he could qualify for jonin soon, however the author has done nothing to show this. The latest fight scene we see that isn't glazed over was when he struggled to fight against some chunin? from kiri going as far as to use susanoo against them and most of mc progress is glazed over slightly with no clear stand point of where his strength is with the author throwing out statement like he went on mission with Gai and trained with him a lot without showing us the actual training or providing more details. Most obvious problem with the mc is his lack of drive and frankly down right infuriating thought process. He is aware that the Uchiha massacre is going to happen and yet foolishly believes that staying away from the clan would keep him safe of course this was when he was younger and as of the last few chapter has changed but that's not all. Despite saying he will get stronger mc has constantly done things to contradict this often opting to play with iruka and yugao instead of training overall the plot is good but the way the mc is being written is horrible there is character development but the problem is that it hardly shows mc has stated he needed to be strong multiple times but right after does nothing to work towards it
in general the fanfic is not bad but the mc development is mediocre at best. he has all the tool to improove his strength rapidily but he doesn't do that(future knowledge_strong reason_bloodline). he barely show any improvement and the only thing he is doing is wasting his time. Then it come his mother pregancy from nowhere, totally seving no perpose at all. That was the worst events ever.
This story is honestly amazing overall, but the main things I'd put that stand out are The way emotions are described: Normally in fanfics either u have to put yourself in the position of the character to understand then or it just feels like they're detached but the descriptions of trauma, fear, concern everything they were incredible I would honestly call this a masterpiece of I could give it a rating its deffo a 10/5 The story and character progression: I have to say usually story's feel quite rushed until you get to the main goal of the protagonist, but here, rather than just using timeskips, this author uses the other characters and uses it to world build you don't feel like the world revolves around the main character he actually feels like a part of it it's super realistic.
Muy buena la historia super interesante me gusta mucho la idea de revivir el clan Uzumaki y el clan Uchiha ya quiero ver como se resuelve el problema con Itachi
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MC is powerful but dumb. It feels like a kid with a rocket laucher who feel safe thinking he can blowup anyone who try to harm him but doesnt even know how to turn off the safety lock. My point is mc is so dumb he literally drank the will of fire koolaid and fail to protect his own clan even with so much time and personal growth he had during that time. Cant fix the stupid i guess. +2 stars for wiritng quality. -3 for story setting, character design and development.
Honestly, this is better than most stories on Webnovel. It has comparatively great grammar, and a reasonable plot development. The updates are kinda rare, but I would say this book is worth it. The author has fleshed out the differences between the original timeline and this one very well. I would definitely recommend it.
I didn't understand how Xianxia's characters could spit blood in anger until reading this horribly bad story. You'll die sooner by reading this
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An excellent novel. Very good in every sense. There were points where I was absolutely angry, but these points were so ingrained in the novel that when you look at it from the outside, you can hardly be angry at all. A novel you should 100% read. If you get bored in the first chapters, don't give up. a masterpiece.
well let me say this first, your writing is really amazing i specially liked the events you portrayed during the nine tails event night it was thrilling it was sad it was perfect everything was great.. But even to get to that part i had to endure a lot like a lot lot now let me tell you the issues i found about the MC and why it didn't made sense. First of all, i get it that he isn't the usual reincarnated mc, he got fragments of his previous life when he was born and after a few years he got clearity that much was clear, i ignored the part where he didn't remember izumi granted he might have lost those parts of memory or js forgotten since its been a while he has seen the series or simply he didnt remember those things are ok. But when he got clearity about his memory that those memories are actually real and those events are going to happen then ( it was sure those memories were real deal after the third shinobi war) the mc since he is a kid as portrayed by the author, should have panicked or worked hard to change the future or during the kyubi night just alarm your parents a few hours early just made up excuses since you are a kid i am pretty sure no normal kid would stay calm knowing a nuke carrier is gonna come just outside their house. But i got the general idea you needed the father dead otherwise the mc would have stayed super weak( he is still weak since he doesn't practice and all, all he does is reading books about history in library). The story doesn't make sense either you make the mc a reincarnator who doesn't care about his current family or just make him unable to remember anything or make him see glimpses of uncertainty into the future.. but no you made him a kid you gave him all memories and made him act so weirdly which is completely unrealistic any kid would freak out or try hard to change the outcome but all your mc does is cry and say weird stuff while doing nothing
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the Mc is an idiot with an ocd! his over thinking destroys all the intrest that one can build . the writing quality is good just the Mc screwed the story, like if he was so paranoid about itachi killing the Uchiha clan might as well just kill him when he is small baby.total waste of potential and good writing quality
STory is great but omg I hate the mc he’s unmotivated and in my opinion a wimp. Other than that the story is decent
It will be very strange, but for 100 chapters in story about Naruto world, author create only 2 battle in which Jun participated. Against Itachi and when he used Susano. The main disadvantage of the story is that there is no action here.
Mc is the stupidest reincarnator ever, period. Worse, he think he is smart and good person while judging everyone around him when he himself act like a monkey with room temperature IQ. Imagine, trying to forgive uchiha after they killed his mother, trying to reason with itachi to not kill his sister or trying to infrom hokage when itachi massacre the clan and being suprise pikachu face when he cant find a single anbu to help him......The only reason he survive is the plot armor Mangekyou sharingan he received while having two tomoe sharingan (how logical) for a single traumatic event thats barely enough to open single tomoe for normal people. What a waste of time.
A very good work, with his character growing slowly and steadily, with the story taking an alternative path to canon, something rare and very good.
One of the best naruto fanfics I have seen on Webnovel so far. Keep it up author.
There are little to no grammar mistakes . the character design is nothing special since it's a fanfic but maybe could have given MC some peculiar clothes or attire . The mangekyo sharingan ability is ...well...not exciting. The plot progression is the worst . I didn't like the MC's personality, several people's fate could have been different if he just took action . Till the chapter that I have read the story doesn't deviate from the canon. So it's basically like Naruto but with an hypocritical and unlikable MC . Also would have preferred to have more dialogues between characters and information dumps should be made shorter .
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It's a great fic overall. I just don't like when author undermines his MC. I just want to feel satisfied when MC accomplished something amazing yet author always ends it with a monologue on how MC ain't as good as this, he's not a genius and blah blah blah. Jun awakened his Sharingan and Mangekyo at the same time at the age of 9. The pacing also dragged a bit after the massacre and the updates might stop suddenly.
Great Naruto Fic! The writing is clear and has good grammar so there is hardly any confusion. The story itself is also interesting with likable original characters that show growth and proper development. The MC is also smart and thinks things out but at the same time isn’t perfect which is a plus in my book. Perfect MC’s are bland afterall
Good Naruto story. Absolutely recommended. You can find a lot of Naruto Fanfic in this website, but few with rational story development. this story is the latter category
Writing quality 4.8/5 Updates 4/5 Story development 5/5 Character design 3.8/5 World background 5/5 World background is a given it a fan fic, I gave the novel five stars because there are very few novel I like and will read so I like to support author that I like.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Honestly I read this novel when it just had like 10 chapters and I would not put it in my top 10 Naruto Fanfics Novels, however I decided to re-read this whole novel and I can say with great certain that is on my top 3 Naruto Fanfic Novels of all time It his a story that builds up with the passage of time and gets u more and more invested in it as u read it. I start reading this novel at 10A.M. and didn't stopped till now, it's 23.52P.M. right now where I am. It was a great enjoyment that made my day The author builds the MC interactions with the world, the people and the effects that his actions have on the story with an almost perfect writing style that lets me the reader imagine the scenes of either the everyday day life and the fights that happen The fact that the author makes the MC invests in relationships and political power (it's not the focus I swear) helps me in actually imagining this as 'real world' with 'real consequences' Hands down one of the best Fanfics I've ever read on this App I'm truly truly thankful for all the hard work u have put in this novel Thx for all the chapters so far, moreeee Pls xD
Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo He just made MC's mother look like some kind of wh**e. and MC is a real ku**ld, just like his father. Someone spit at the author for me
loved the realism. honestly wished I read it after it was completed as I can't wait for the next chapters. so just wanted to say thank you to the author for this novel. THANK YOU MIKE
The best fanfic with this theme I've read so far. I honestly have nothing truly negative to say about it. It's the only one where it actually feels like the characters are living in the world they are in, not just passing by living an ethereal and inconsequential adventure.
A Really good story , good character dvp , the mc is infuriating at the begining and makes lots of mistakes but that's life , a lot of reviews complain about it but people are flawed and who know what somebody would do in this situation , the evolution of the MC is well done (still there is the shadow clone thing : author deliberatly make the mc dumb on that issue , seriously he learns it after a longggg time although it would have been helpful in lots of situations and he even recognize it) anyway i really like the fic and i hope it will continue (maybee a little more updates)
The amount of hate in the comments as you read is honestly upsetting. It’s a fan fiction, of course it is not 100% loyal to the source, yet still follows it properly and gives a coherent narrative that one can enjoy if you overlook small mistakes such as grammar and other small things. It isn’t the holy grail of stories, but it’s a solid read worth enjoying.
Its a good story but the mc doesnt act like how a normal person would act if they knew the exact date of potential death. Like if u knew that on a certain date unless u do somethinh drastic u gonna die cuz 2 of the strongest ppl currently alive are gonna come for you, u wouldnt be taking half masesure which is what most of his actions feel like.
Fresh story featuring a more realistic take on getting sent to another world. The story is great but the problem is the way mc development is stated. I'm reading chapter 41 now where mc previous jonin sensei says that he could qualify for jonin soon, however the author has done nothing to show this. The latest fight scene we see that isn't glazed over was when he struggled to fight against some chunin? from kiri going as far as to use susanoo against them and most of mc progress is glazed over slightly with no clear stand point of where his strength is with the author throwing out statement like he went on mission with Gai and trained with him a lot without showing us the actual training or providing more details. Most obvious problem with the mc is his lack of drive and frankly down right infuriating thought process. He is aware that the Uchiha massacre is going to happen and yet foolishly believes that staying away from the clan would keep him safe of course this was when he was younger and as of the last few chapter has changed but that's not all. Despite saying he will get stronger mc has constantly done things to contradict this often opting to play with iruka and yugao instead of training overall the plot is good but the way the mc is being written is horrible there is character development but the problem is that it hardly shows mc has stated he needed to be strong multiple times but right after does nothing to work towards it
in general the fanfic is not bad but the mc development is mediocre at best. he has all the tool to improove his strength rapidily but he doesn't do that(future knowledge_strong reason_bloodline). he barely show any improvement and the only thing he is doing is wasting his time. Then it come his mother pregancy from nowhere, totally seving no perpose at all. That was the worst events ever.
This story is honestly amazing overall, but the main things I'd put that stand out are The way emotions are described: Normally in fanfics either u have to put yourself in the position of the character to understand then or it just feels like they're detached but the descriptions of trauma, fear, concern everything they were incredible I would honestly call this a masterpiece of I could give it a rating its deffo a 10/5 The story and character progression: I have to say usually story's feel quite rushed until you get to the main goal of the protagonist, but here, rather than just using timeskips, this author uses the other characters and uses it to world build you don't feel like the world revolves around the main character he actually feels like a part of it it's super realistic.
Muy buena la historia super interesante me gusta mucho la idea de revivir el clan Uzumaki y el clan Uchiha ya quiero ver como se resuelve el problema con Itachi
Tiết lộ Spoiler MC is powerful but dumb. It feels like a kid with a rocket laucher who feel safe thinking he can blowup anyone who try to harm him but doesnt even know how to turn off the safety lock. My point is mc is so dumb he literally drank the will of fire koolaid and fail to protect his own clan even with so much time and personal growth he had during that time. Cant fix the stupid i guess. +2 stars for wiritng quality. -3 for story setting, character design and development.
Honestly, this is better than most stories on Webnovel. It has comparatively great grammar, and a reasonable plot development. The updates are kinda rare, but I would say this book is worth it. The author has fleshed out the differences between the original timeline and this one very well. I would definitely recommend it.
I didn't understand how Xianxia's characters could spit blood in anger until reading this horribly bad story. You'll die sooner by reading this
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An excellent novel. Very good in every sense. There were points where I was absolutely angry, but these points were so ingrained in the novel that when you look at it from the outside, you can hardly be angry at all. A novel you should 100% read. If you get bored in the first chapters, don't give up. a masterpiece.
well let me say this first, your writing is really amazing i specially liked the events you portrayed during the nine tails event night it was thrilling it was sad it was perfect everything was great.. But even to get to that part i had to endure a lot like a lot lot now let me tell you the issues i found about the MC and why it didn't made sense. First of all, i get it that he isn't the usual reincarnated mc, he got fragments of his previous life when he was born and after a few years he got clearity that much was clear, i ignored the part where he didn't remember izumi granted he might have lost those parts of memory or js forgotten since its been a while he has seen the series or simply he didnt remember those things are ok. But when he got clearity about his memory that those memories are actually real and those events are going to happen then ( it was sure those memories were real deal after the third shinobi war) the mc since he is a kid as portrayed by the author, should have panicked or worked hard to change the future or during the kyubi night just alarm your parents a few hours early just made up excuses since you are a kid i am pretty sure no normal kid would stay calm knowing a nuke carrier is gonna come just outside their house. But i got the general idea you needed the father dead otherwise the mc would have stayed super weak( he is still weak since he doesn't practice and all, all he does is reading books about history in library). The story doesn't make sense either you make the mc a reincarnator who doesn't care about his current family or just make him unable to remember anything or make him see glimpses of uncertainty into the future.. but no you made him a kid you gave him all memories and made him act so weirdly which is completely unrealistic any kid would freak out or try hard to change the outcome but all your mc does is cry and say weird stuff while doing nothing
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the Mc is an idiot with an ocd! his over thinking destroys all the intrest that one can build . the writing quality is good just the Mc screwed the story, like if he was so paranoid about itachi killing the Uchiha clan might as well just kill him when he is small baby.total waste of potential and good writing quality
STory is great but omg I hate the mc he’s unmotivated and in my opinion a wimp. Other than that the story is decent
It will be very strange, but for 100 chapters in story about Naruto world, author create only 2 battle in which Jun participated. Against Itachi and when he used Susano. The main disadvantage of the story is that there is no action here.
Mc is the stupidest reincarnator ever, period. Worse, he think he is smart and good person while judging everyone around him when he himself act like a monkey with room temperature IQ. Imagine, trying to forgive uchiha after they killed his mother, trying to reason with itachi to not kill his sister or trying to infrom hokage when itachi massacre the clan and being suprise pikachu face when he cant find a single anbu to help him......The only reason he survive is the plot armor Mangekyou sharingan he received while having two tomoe sharingan (how logical) for a single traumatic event thats barely enough to open single tomoe for normal people. What a waste of time.
A very good work, with his character growing slowly and steadily, with the story taking an alternative path to canon, something rare and very good.
One of the best naruto fanfics I have seen on Webnovel so far. Keep it up author.
There are little to no grammar mistakes . the character design is nothing special since it's a fanfic but maybe could have given MC some peculiar clothes or attire . The mangekyo sharingan ability is ...well...not exciting. The plot progression is the worst . I didn't like the MC's personality, several people's fate could have been different if he just took action . Till the chapter that I have read the story doesn't deviate from the canon. So it's basically like Naruto but with an hypocritical and unlikable MC . Also would have preferred to have more dialogues between characters and information dumps should be made shorter .
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It's a great fic overall. I just don't like when author undermines his MC. I just want to feel satisfied when MC accomplished something amazing yet author always ends it with a monologue on how MC ain't as good as this, he's not a genius and blah blah blah. Jun awakened his Sharingan and Mangekyo at the same time at the age of 9. The pacing also dragged a bit after the massacre and the updates might stop suddenly.
Great Naruto Fic! The writing is clear and has good grammar so there is hardly any confusion. The story itself is also interesting with likable original characters that show growth and proper development. The MC is also smart and thinks things out but at the same time isn’t perfect which is a plus in my book. Perfect MC’s are bland afterall
Good Naruto story. Absolutely recommended. You can find a lot of Naruto Fanfic in this website, but few with rational story development. this story is the latter category