the secret identity is starting to get borring , this isn't fuc..ng Marvel or Batman , its annoying , i personaly hate MC that hide their face , its not chinese cultivation novel
well , could be an interesting story , but everything is way too vague , we know nothing about the mc , i don't like the fact that its been 20 chaps and we still don't know what his devil fruit is , maybe we will get it by chapter 50 but i won't wait that long , its not bad writing but not enough to be invested
yes but that was not the point , what i meant is there no invisible coating stage in Haki : its directly hardening wich is invisible for people with no Haki , the author in this make it like that : invisible Haki then hardening then emission wich is wrong
Looking at the stone, Ron sighed. He had learned Armament Haki a month after Garp left, but so far, he could only wrap his body in it, unable to strengthen it.
One Piece: With Sign-in System
Anime & Comics · ElvenKing20
sorry that was for the chap before , no idea why i have put it in this one
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Can we have at least one fanfic where the mc is not a fuc..ng Duck , is that so hard to make what you want with your own money , why do someone else get any say in where he use his money , its incredibly annoying : i really really hate beta japanese mc , good way to ruin a fic
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man this is taking forever , i honestly don't get why he did not just decapitate him at the first strike since the other believe the attack would not work , and now its draging forever for an opponent that should not be one at all
what's his devil fruit , in this fic , orginally i though a normal zoan because of the wings , the hypnosis being a skills that does not need a df (strange power exist in One Piece like the girl form baroque works with the Paint) , but now i'm guessing a myhtical zoan bird type : there a quite a few with mind control skills love the fic by the way
so many prob with this fic , 1 how the fu..k de he go to skypia ? so he unite the skypian & then what ? no fight , how does he know about Law ? is he a reincarnator ? and finally what is his devil fruit : Paramecia / Logia ? man it been 10 chaps and i foresee a lot of prob
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in our world too buddy
She was about 1.89 meters tall, and only then did he realize that he was at least 2.45 meters. It seems that the argument that people in the One Piece world who are around 1.67 meters are considered short is not unreasonable.
Reborn as crocodile before Luffy arrival, Run away with Robin
Anime & Comics · vampireking11
depends if the traits are retractable , if they are definitly wings : i mean who doesn't want to fly , if not while its cool , can be burdensome
Author Note: I hope you liked the chapter. We're getting some actions again and some really important growth. Question: which of the four options would you've chosen in Viserys' shoes?
Game of Thrones: Reign of the Dragonking
TV · Master4thWall