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Viết đánh giáI love this story! I feel like the main character is great and well written and that his progression, goals, and personality are great! I also feel like the choices made make sense. I appreciate how powerful you make him and show how he has an edge but compared to true geniuses like itachi or kakashi he is still lacking. Then you show how he closes the gap, but doesn't become totally overpowered. Anyway great book please keep writing
I read up to chapter 79 because I figured out it was good place to stop... especially since the FF has been dropped for 7 months by now. Which is a big shame since it's rare solid FF with Uchiha OC whose existence doesn't automatically solve all Uchiha issues. Even though the story is dropped abruptly, there is still decent chunk of it so it's worth a read.
this has potential just the author used too much wordings?, monologue? to my liking, it's just too much description in my opinion but give this a chance. it's get better when the Mc's mother died. compare to other ff I have read before this ff is worth reading and I do hope for more updates and chapters[img=update][img=More pls]. Hope the author won't dropped this [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=recommend]
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honestly im shocked, the author really did an excellent work building his characters and the story and made something believable, the grammar is good too, had the time of my life reading it
This review is for anyone thinking of reading this…. Dont. The mc is the worst mc I’v come across yet. He’s supposed to have kniwledge of the Narutoverse but never uses it. He has no motivation to get stronger. Like at all. Even when his family members are killed in front of him, he’ more concerned with ”keeping a low profile” and by that I mean actually being weak not pretending. He takes his sweet time whike complaining he has no time in his head. Makes no sense. Also, the author seems to not know too much about Naruto…. Mc unlocked mangyeko before three tomoe sharingan… and doesn’ awaken three tomoe until forever. Its bs.
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I highly recommend this story! I’ve had this story in my saved list for awhile now, but couldn’t bring myself to read it because of the MC’s name (thought it was Chinese). Glad that I finally did tho, it was a great read, can’t wait for more.
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He has a really terrible mother,unnecessary tragedies...Not according to my taste,if you like to suffer, read it..........................................
Got to chap 6......... NO DIALOGUE so sick of fanfics like this just listing events and pure inner monologuing. Its pure pain boring to read could be a magnum opus in story telling but i am not putting myself through that kinda pain to find out.
Keep up the good work author.................................................................................................................................
It doesn’t have the feel of a novel, it feels like someone describing an event to you. There should have been more character p.o.v . Hated that it was mostly third person. Switching the p.o.v of the characters would be more interesting. Also the novel felt contradicting. Considering the fact that authors usually add a bunch of random things in a story to make the character stronger, this author decided to make mc weaker on the guise of an upcoming character development. Considering the fact that he had future knowledge he really didn’t use it to his advantage like any reasonable person would do. Author has clearly done research on the Naruto world but it felt boring because the author didn’t use that knowledge to develop the MC. Another thing is that when describing the jutsu used it wasn’t in English so I constantly had to search up the jutsu used to know what is was and what it had to do with the plot so wasted time doing that which wasn’t fun, cuz I was just trying to read. Just realized that 1000 words aren’t a lot to write Since I have done about 1100. I struggled to read this novel, ultimately giving in the end at the halfway point. Do not recommend as there are many better one worth your time.
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I will give this 8.9/10 very recommended at some chapter it gives such a roller coaster feeling especially when kurama outburst happen but some time you would feel like it's boring but trust me don't stop reading.. the MC personality might give you feel like he was coward but I think I would say it's just he's being a Real common people would do in his situation.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 I love it!!! 😍😍😍 I like how he's not OP from the start.. He's also hidden his sharingan (and mangekyo too), so it can be his secret weapon.. He also learn Fuinjutsu, it can be a great secret weapon (it save him from Itachi, and also kill Danzo.. Great ways to kill a cockroach like him and Orochimaru, maybe you can kill him with fuinjutsu too).. It's interesting to see the new team, how will different they from canon team.. 🤔🤔 Can't wait to read next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama.. 👍👍👍😁😁
Overall Rating: Subpar at best. - Less to no grammatical errors which is a plus. - Story progression is downright disappointing as it still follows cannon with less to no changes. - MC is like a Japanese young master "weak willed", suffer first die later type of MC - Update stability is average at best.
Be prepared for a weak-willed MC who has no intention of changing canon events or taking advantage of past-life knowledge. It's honestly impressive how pathetic the MC is. He doesn't change anything until chapter 51 and even then it's minor. And yet even with all these complaints I'm still somehow invested in this and keep reading. The author knows black magic.
I rarely write reviews but after reading this I had to, this is by far the worst naruto fanfic I've ever read, even those Chinese mtl trash are better than this excuse of a fanfic, a braindead mc that does nothing but complain and hate on everybody around him, a mother of two children with no honor that goes around spreading her legs not even 2 years after the passing of her husband and an illogical projection of the characters that does not comply with the original work, if anything this was dreadful to read. !!!Disclaimer!!!! THIS IS MY OWN HONEST OPINION I DO NOT EXPECT OTHERS TO AGREE AND I DON'T CARE IF YOU DON'T, additionally everyone can read and judge for themselves.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis novel is good and deserved to be better rating. You should read it buddy, and you will get one of the best Naruto fanfic. The Mc is good, although slow in development. Thank you author
Here's my honest opinion if people want a fanfic that has many common sense then you can go for it but just a warning. First is you might want smack the MC for his stupid decisions which has a lot of sense since he is just a human, although I still want to smack him. Second he is a reincarnator but he is still a genin level when shishu who is the same age as him is already a jonin, did I mention that he has a Mangekyo sharingan? Third, although he has future knowledge you will see him act more dumber than some kids from his school. Fourth the author doesn't really care about opinions even if many complaints on some of his mistake about naruto logic So in short, this fanfic has a lot of sense that you can't help but drop it after a few chapters
[img=recommend][img=exp]i like the story but failing to break a genin genjutsu using the sharingan??? I'm just gonna pretend it didn't happen and proceed with the story since I'm enjoying it *KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHUR SAN* [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]
Now this is a great FF it is not only an amazing character realization and progression but it show's how life really unfolds for our MC. Mc in the beginning is a conflicted with his family situation and his place in life and the struggles he will inevitably meet soon, but he does not give up but there is a truly well shown grief of loss but so many other things as well. If you can keep up with the Mc then this fic is amazing, some choices will leave you speechless and maybe even annoyed but if you look at it from Mc's point of view then it becomes understandable. I would recommend that you try the FF and give it until the end of the first arc/volume.
Honestly this story is so good, I wanted to continue reading it but then there was chapter 18, that chapter is not for me ------------------------------
Esses filhos da puta sem gosto fican falando que o mc é um covarde e tudo mais o mc mostra uma personalidade realista invés de um protagonista implacável e superficial como maioria das histórias irreais e mal escrita desse site de merda sem falar a merda de harem que estraga a porra da história(meu deus cara as vezes da vontade de jogar o celular na parede de tanta raiva e frustação os autores parecem adolescentes cheio de hormônios ou caras que nunca namorou na vida)
I really enjoy this story, uchiha mc that is for once not instantly OP, and decent development. Only problem I have is that updates rarely come. I would definitely recommend.
I love this story! I feel like the main character is great and well written and that his progression, goals, and personality are great! I also feel like the choices made make sense. I appreciate how powerful you make him and show how he has an edge but compared to true geniuses like itachi or kakashi he is still lacking. Then you show how he closes the gap, but doesn't become totally overpowered. Anyway great book please keep writing
I read up to chapter 79 because I figured out it was good place to stop... especially since the FF has been dropped for 7 months by now. Which is a big shame since it's rare solid FF with Uchiha OC whose existence doesn't automatically solve all Uchiha issues. Even though the story is dropped abruptly, there is still decent chunk of it so it's worth a read.
this has potential just the author used too much wordings?, monologue? to my liking, it's just too much description in my opinion but give this a chance. it's get better when the Mc's mother died. compare to other ff I have read before this ff is worth reading and I do hope for more updates and chapters[img=update][img=More pls]. Hope the author won't dropped this [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=recommend]
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honestly im shocked, the author really did an excellent work building his characters and the story and made something believable, the grammar is good too, had the time of my life reading it
This review is for anyone thinking of reading this…. Dont. The mc is the worst mc I’v come across yet. He’s supposed to have kniwledge of the Narutoverse but never uses it. He has no motivation to get stronger. Like at all. Even when his family members are killed in front of him, he’ more concerned with ”keeping a low profile” and by that I mean actually being weak not pretending. He takes his sweet time whike complaining he has no time in his head. Makes no sense. Also, the author seems to not know too much about Naruto…. Mc unlocked mangyeko before three tomoe sharingan… and doesn’ awaken three tomoe until forever. Its bs.
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I highly recommend this story! I’ve had this story in my saved list for awhile now, but couldn’t bring myself to read it because of the MC’s name (thought it was Chinese). Glad that I finally did tho, it was a great read, can’t wait for more.
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He has a really terrible mother,unnecessary tragedies...Not according to my taste,if you like to suffer, read it..........................................
Got to chap 6......... NO DIALOGUE so sick of fanfics like this just listing events and pure inner monologuing. Its pure pain boring to read could be a magnum opus in story telling but i am not putting myself through that kinda pain to find out.
Keep up the good work author.................................................................................................................................
It doesn’t have the feel of a novel, it feels like someone describing an event to you. There should have been more character p.o.v . Hated that it was mostly third person. Switching the p.o.v of the characters would be more interesting. Also the novel felt contradicting. Considering the fact that authors usually add a bunch of random things in a story to make the character stronger, this author decided to make mc weaker on the guise of an upcoming character development. Considering the fact that he had future knowledge he really didn’t use it to his advantage like any reasonable person would do. Author has clearly done research on the Naruto world but it felt boring because the author didn’t use that knowledge to develop the MC. Another thing is that when describing the jutsu used it wasn’t in English so I constantly had to search up the jutsu used to know what is was and what it had to do with the plot so wasted time doing that which wasn’t fun, cuz I was just trying to read. Just realized that 1000 words aren’t a lot to write Since I have done about 1100. I struggled to read this novel, ultimately giving in the end at the halfway point. Do not recommend as there are many better one worth your time.
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I will give this 8.9/10 very recommended at some chapter it gives such a roller coaster feeling especially when kurama outburst happen but some time you would feel like it's boring but trust me don't stop reading.. the MC personality might give you feel like he was coward but I think I would say it's just he's being a Real common people would do in his situation.
Tiết lộ SpoilerIt's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 I love it!!! 😍😍😍 I like how he's not OP from the start.. He's also hidden his sharingan (and mangekyo too), so it can be his secret weapon.. He also learn Fuinjutsu, it can be a great secret weapon (it save him from Itachi, and also kill Danzo.. Great ways to kill a cockroach like him and Orochimaru, maybe you can kill him with fuinjutsu too).. It's interesting to see the new team, how will different they from canon team.. 🤔🤔 Can't wait to read next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama.. 👍👍👍😁😁
Overall Rating: Subpar at best. - Less to no grammatical errors which is a plus. - Story progression is downright disappointing as it still follows cannon with less to no changes. - MC is like a Japanese young master "weak willed", suffer first die later type of MC - Update stability is average at best.
Be prepared for a weak-willed MC who has no intention of changing canon events or taking advantage of past-life knowledge. It's honestly impressive how pathetic the MC is. He doesn't change anything until chapter 51 and even then it's minor. And yet even with all these complaints I'm still somehow invested in this and keep reading. The author knows black magic.
I rarely write reviews but after reading this I had to, this is by far the worst naruto fanfic I've ever read, even those Chinese mtl trash are better than this excuse of a fanfic, a braindead mc that does nothing but complain and hate on everybody around him, a mother of two children with no honor that goes around spreading her legs not even 2 years after the passing of her husband and an illogical projection of the characters that does not comply with the original work, if anything this was dreadful to read. !!!Disclaimer!!!! THIS IS MY OWN HONEST OPINION I DO NOT EXPECT OTHERS TO AGREE AND I DON'T CARE IF YOU DON'T, additionally everyone can read and judge for themselves.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis novel is good and deserved to be better rating. You should read it buddy, and you will get one of the best Naruto fanfic. The Mc is good, although slow in development. Thank you author
Here's my honest opinion if people want a fanfic that has many common sense then you can go for it but just a warning. First is you might want smack the MC for his stupid decisions which has a lot of sense since he is just a human, although I still want to smack him. Second he is a reincarnator but he is still a genin level when shishu who is the same age as him is already a jonin, did I mention that he has a Mangekyo sharingan? Third, although he has future knowledge you will see him act more dumber than some kids from his school. Fourth the author doesn't really care about opinions even if many complaints on some of his mistake about naruto logic So in short, this fanfic has a lot of sense that you can't help but drop it after a few chapters
[img=recommend][img=exp]i like the story but failing to break a genin genjutsu using the sharingan??? I'm just gonna pretend it didn't happen and proceed with the story since I'm enjoying it *KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHUR SAN* [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]
Now this is a great FF it is not only an amazing character realization and progression but it show's how life really unfolds for our MC. Mc in the beginning is a conflicted with his family situation and his place in life and the struggles he will inevitably meet soon, but he does not give up but there is a truly well shown grief of loss but so many other things as well. If you can keep up with the Mc then this fic is amazing, some choices will leave you speechless and maybe even annoyed but if you look at it from Mc's point of view then it becomes understandable. I would recommend that you try the FF and give it until the end of the first arc/volume.
Honestly this story is so good, I wanted to continue reading it but then there was chapter 18, that chapter is not for me ------------------------------
Esses filhos da puta sem gosto fican falando que o mc é um covarde e tudo mais o mc mostra uma personalidade realista invés de um protagonista implacável e superficial como maioria das histórias irreais e mal escrita desse site de merda sem falar a merda de harem que estraga a porra da história(meu deus cara as vezes da vontade de jogar o celular na parede de tanta raiva e frustação os autores parecem adolescentes cheio de hormônios ou caras que nunca namorou na vida)
I really enjoy this story, uchiha mc that is for once not instantly OP, and decent development. Only problem I have is that updates rarely come. I would definitely recommend.